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Description “Hey, I’m home!” Only silence greeted her. Of course there’s no one here. Why should there be? Mom is gone all the time these days, And Grandma always goes with her.

Alone with her bitter thoughts, Rika didn’t notice the package on the table for her as she walked by. After a long day at a crappy job, all she wanted was a nice hot shower and something to eat. She was alone for the rest of the night, so it wasn’t like there was any rush. She stepped into the shower and let the hot water run over her for a while. After a few minutes she began scrubbing herself, giving some ‘special attention’ to the space between her legs. Yes, it made her feel ashamed. But she was a healthy young woman. She had needs.

After finishing in the shower, she came out the bathroom wrapped in a nice soft bathrobe, drying her hair with a towel as she walked towards the kitchen to make herself something to eat. It was when she walked by the table that the package sitting on it caught her eye. It was a simple bundle, wrapped in brown paper and tied with string. What caught her attention was the sticker with her name written on it. There was a card taped to it as well. Putting down the towel, she peeled off the tape and picked up the card. It was just a plain white card. There was nothing special about it. The only thing written on it was, “From your #1 fan.” Rika looked around by reflex, making sure it wasn’t anyone playing a joke on her. Still, she was curious, and it did have her name on it. It couldn’t hurt to see what it was. She undid the knots on the string and unwrapped the brown paper to reveal a yellow bundle. She picked it up, and felt a jab of pain in her heart.

It was a Renemon costume, with a few adjustments for human wear. The majority of it was yellow. The lower legs were white, and there was a white strip on the front that ran from the neck down to in between the legs. There were the purple gloves with the yin-yang symbol on the hands as part of the costume, and the purple symbols on the thighs. The hands and feet each ended in 3 clawed digits. A large tail and an attached mask with spaces for the eyes finished the outfit. Rubbing it in between her fingers, Rika could tell that it was latex. Holding it up to the light, it shined brilliantly. It brought back so many memories. The battles, their friendship, saying goodbye…

Rika looked around again, unable to help herself. It just seemed like someone was playing a joke on her. But still… She could try it on once, just for old times’ sake.

After a quick examination, Rika found that the back had a slit in it that a person could use to slip into the outfit. She undid her robe, letting it fall to the ground around her. Picking up the suit, she pulled open the slit, and after a little trouble with the tail getting in the way, slid her leg in.

After the heat of the shower, the outfit felt cool against her skin. The material was so smooth that it almost felt slick, and Rika couldn’t help but giggle as the feeling of the costume tickled her bare skin. Sliding her foot in, she realized that the toes were only divided very slightly on the inside, so it was almost the same as wearing a shoe with cushions that went in between her toes. She couldn’t resist looking down while wiggling the toes. However, when she tried putting her hands in, she found out that the fingers were kind of awkward, and were useless for anything delicate. So she pulled her hands out and forced her head up the neck into the mask instead. The outfit stretched, so it wasn’t too hard to fit her head into it. She had the white-tipped ears and the marks on her cheeks, just like Renemon’s. The eyeholes were fairly large and easy to see out of, and the holes in the nose helped with the breathing. She made a few more adjustments, tugging on the costume here and there to fit her better, and balling up her fists, slid her arm into the costume. When she was done, she went into another room and looked at herself in a full length mirror, courtesy of her mom’s obsession with fashion.   

Not bad. Not something she’d ever be caught dead wearing in public, but it looked good, and felt great. It was so cool and smooth against her skin, and the way it pressed against her body felt fantastic. It was like a second skin. She could see her nipples standing out underneath it. The coolness of the outfit had made them stand up, but the way they rubbed against the latex made them hard. She couldn’t help but try out posing in front of the mirror, doing everything from acting sexy to playing with her tail. The way the costume had pressed against her slit had felt good before, but the way that it rubbed against her when she moved made her feel hot. She groped herself through the costume for a little while before she stopped herself. The outfit didn’t have any openings down there (she should know), and she didn’t know how to clean or take care of the suit, so she was better off not having any “accidents”. She turned around and looked over her shoulder, admiring her rear, when she noticed something very, very wrong.

The back of the suit was a single piece. The slit that she had used to get into the suit was gone. She ran her hands along the back, frantically looking for the opening that should have been there. But no matter how much she looked or felt the opening was gone. Suddenly, the suit that felt so nice before suddenly felt like it was surrounding her, crushing her, closing in around her. Her breathing turned short and ragged, and her mind became filled with thoughts of being trapped and closed in. Her mind in a whirl, her vision darkened, and she passed out.
When she woke up, she was on the ground in front of the mirror, right where she had fallen. She frantically ran her hands all over her body, looking for anyway out of the thing that encased her. She was about to try tearing it to bits, when her whole body froze. She tried to move her limbs, but she could barely budge. It was like the suit had turned to stone. Rika was on the edge of hysteria as she felt the suit begin to press against her body to the point that she couldn’t’ breath. Her struggles became feeble and weak, and her vision became dim as she felt the breath being squeezed from her body. It felt like her body was being crushed, and all she could think was I don’t want to die. I don’t want to die. I don’t want to die…. The last thing she felt before she passed out was the suit, squirming against her to the point that it felt like it was squeezing into her skin.

Rika woke up again, and furiously began trying to move her body. I have to get out of this. What should I do? No matter how hard she tried though, she couldn’t move an inch. After she gave up, she noticed something. The suit felt odd against her somehow. It was still tight, but it wasn’t crushing her like before. It didn’t even feel like she was wearing anything somehow. This line of thought was broken however when Rika slowly began to stand up. The only problem with this was that she wasn’t’ moving her limbs. The shock of it made her eyes widen. This suit is alive! Rika ended up standing in front of the mirror, back straight, arms at her sides. Looking in the mirror, she was surprised at the changes she saw there, the most immediate of these being the fact that the tail was moving on its own.  It waved and wrapped around her, which lead to her next discovery. She could see that the suit had grown much tighter on her body, but it also seemed to have grown extra slits along the butt and in between the legs, most likely for bathroom use. She could tell because of the way the tail was sliding against them felt very direct. However, Rika’s growling stomach broke her train of thought. The mask on her head suddenly tightened around her, and it felt like something was squeezing information out of her brain. Afterwards, she was left dizzy and startled as the suit suddenly moved towards the kitchen. Man, its fast!
Rika watched as her hands shot out, going into cupboards and pulling things out so fast it seemed almost random.

A while later, Rika was sitting at her table with a bowl of curry in front of her. The mask grew an opening for the mouth, forcing her lips open and shut as it force fed her curry. Rika was nonplussed.
So it’s some kind of living suit. But it’s eating curry! Being stuck in this thing is like being a puppet. Or a doll.

Once the bowl was emptied, Rika felt the suit squeeze her head again. When her dizzy spell ended, she found herself in front of the mirror, posing as her hands ran all over her body.  iIt’s doing what I did before. Still…. As one of her hands traveled to her breast while the other went down below, she stopped caring much. After a while, the suit squeezed her brain again, and it traveled into her room and laid out on the bed while continuing to play with Rika’s body. From how she saw it, she wasn’t getting out of the suit on her own anytime soon, and as long as it went like this, she could cope with it.

Early that morning, Rika’s mom came home, and quietly peeked into Rika’s room. She smiled I know I haven’t been around much lately, and I’m sure you’ve been lonely without your friend. It was rare and expensive, but that costume was worth it. She liked it so much that she even went to sleep in it. Well, I’m off to bed. Good night Rika. I’ll talk to you in a few days. Until then, I hope you enjoy a gift from your #1 fan.
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Comments: 95

doomedfool In reply to ??? [2013-06-20 19:41:21 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, I don't honestly recall having plans for a follow up to this one. It was just a stand-alone, as I remember. It's also several years old.

Sorry to disappoint.

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David361 In reply to doomedfool [2013-06-22 16:47:14 +0000 UTC]

Its ok. Do you Know any more like these kind of stories?

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c3ewuwaY [2013-03-26 10:12:21 +0000 UTC]

Ah, this is the kind of living suit I always conceive. Thanks for visualising it with the story.

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doomedfool In reply to c3ewuwaY [2013-03-26 16:27:28 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome. Thanks for the compliment^^

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c3ewuwaY In reply to doomedfool [2013-03-27 17:03:57 +0000 UTC]

A small question though. I'm kinda confused why she passed out and woke up twice. Is there any particular reason or explanation?

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doomedfool In reply to c3ewuwaY [2013-03-27 22:14:32 +0000 UTC]

Hmm...if I remember right, it was the suit doing it. note the points where it clenches on her head. That's generally when it's interacting with her mind, either reading her thoughts or making the body do things.

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c3ewuwaY In reply to doomedfool [2013-03-28 01:47:38 +0000 UTC]

Oh yea, this work was from a long time ago. Speaking of that, I really like the idea of the suit squeezing information from her mind - it's quite innovative.

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doomedfool In reply to c3ewuwaY [2013-03-28 04:03:05 +0000 UTC]

thanks^^

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c3ewuwaY In reply to doomedfool [2013-03-26 17:20:44 +0000 UTC]

Now as for how to get one...
It's expensive but it's worth it.

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LegionaireB [2012-06-04 02:14:21 +0000 UTC]

I found a piece on FA that would go really well with this story, if you want me to Note it to you.

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doomedfool In reply to LegionaireB [2012-06-04 02:37:49 +0000 UTC]

If you'd like, go ahead.

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LegionaireB [2012-05-17 04:00:59 +0000 UTC]

Sound's like Rika's mom found Sebastian's Custom Gear web page. Probably so scatterbrained she didn't realize the primary clientele of Sir Blackcat is fetishists.

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7Winds [2012-01-10 20:59:20 +0000 UTC]

i have to say that this story is a great peice of work. Keep it up

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Knight-BIshop [2011-03-28 00:59:01 +0000 UTC]

can you write like a sequal to this story

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Legiondude04 [2009-11-01 07:29:49 +0000 UTC]

~nomindofown Jun 26, 2009, 4:52:27 PM
"I don’t want to die. I don’t want to die. I don’t want to die…"

Is this the quote?

--------------
My Post:
End of Evangelion?

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doomedfool In reply to Legiondude04 [2009-11-01 22:32:06 +0000 UTC]

NO, it is not. The shout of for this story has been already been solved, as stated in the artist comments. check the comments under the story for the answer.

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UnderScythe [2009-07-23 07:32:48 +0000 UTC]

I love the idea of living suits, rendering the host unable to do anything.

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Kotetsu-Nezumiro [2009-07-23 05:20:21 +0000 UTC]

Hey nomindofown...let me show you how it's done

She was a healthy young woman. She had needs.

Change the "she"'s to "I"'s and you have the line of the ever so outgoing Haruhi Suzumiya from The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya.

And the second one is "BUT IT'S EATING CURRY!!" from FLCL said by Ninamori Eri. nomindofown, I thank you for that answer and I shall steal it for the win! XD

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doomedfool In reply to Kotetsu-Nezumiro [2009-07-23 11:17:45 +0000 UTC]

Congradulations, we have a winner! Thank you to everyone that played. This shout out is now closed.
Feel free to note me when you've decided on your prize. I'll be gone for a bit this morning, so I'll get back to you as soon as I'm able.

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nomindofown [2009-06-26 23:52:27 +0000 UTC]

"I don’t want to die. I don’t want to die. I don’t want to die…"

Is this the quote?

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doomedfool In reply to nomindofown [2009-06-27 00:52:43 +0000 UTC]

Nope.

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nomindofown In reply to doomedfool [2009-06-27 01:20:37 +0000 UTC]

Was it Higurashi No Naku Koro Ni?

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doomedfool In reply to nomindofown [2009-06-27 05:35:13 +0000 UTC]

Nope. Something much less serious.

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nomindofown In reply to doomedfool [2009-06-27 22:06:04 +0000 UTC]

The Suit's Alive!

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doomedfool In reply to nomindofown [2009-06-29 00:40:56 +0000 UTC]

Nope. Try again. A hint: think of Rika's English VA. Now think of where you've heard that voice before.

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nomindofown In reply to doomedfool [2009-06-29 17:47:27 +0000 UTC]

Rika's English VA? Don't get it....It is an anime that I've heard of before right? I'm probably an idiot.

BACK TO GUESSING!!!!

-Of course there’s no one here.

-Man It's Fast

Do not tell me the answer

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doomedfool In reply to nomindofown [2009-06-30 01:07:54 +0000 UTC]

VA means voice actor. In short, if you've seen the digimon dub, then you know what Rika sounds like. The hint is that one of the quotes was said by a character that has the same voice actor, and I'm sure you've heard of the series that the quote is from.
And those are both wrong.

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nomindofown In reply to doomedfool [2009-06-30 01:55:27 +0000 UTC]

Are you responding from the message center? Because I posted a bunch of replies and I'm guessing none have reached you yet.

Was it Ed?

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doomedfool In reply to nomindofown [2009-06-30 02:24:28 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I was. I only saw your most recent post. And no, she played a girl in the role I'm thinking of.

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nomindofown In reply to doomedfool [2009-06-30 02:37:53 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm.....she was in Noien, but I forgot the girls name.
I think she was a Tachikoma in Ghost in the Shell....or was that Kari?
She played in something else....but I can't think of it.

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doomedfool In reply to nomindofown [2009-06-30 02:44:36 +0000 UTC]

It was something not so serious .

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nomindofown In reply to doomedfool [2009-06-30 03:04:05 +0000 UTC]

That would make sense...
"IT'S EATING CURRY!!!"

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doomedfool In reply to nomindofown [2009-06-30 03:47:26 +0000 UTC]

that's right, and I'm hiding the answer unless you're actually out to win something this time. Now you just have to guess the anime for that one (it's not blue dragon), and the second quote. It should be easier for you then this one. And that's all the hint you're getting . Now I'm off to bed as well.

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nomindofown In reply to doomedfool [2009-06-30 19:22:01 +0000 UTC]

Have I already said it in my previous comments?

Ok....MegaMan?

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doomedfool In reply to nomindofown [2009-07-01 00:42:51 +0000 UTC]

It was the quote that I hid, not the anime. You still haven't gotten that yet.

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nomindofown In reply to doomedfool [2009-07-01 01:10:59 +0000 UTC]

I meant, have I said the quote in any on my previous comments.

Here are all the quote I guessed
-I have to get out of this. What should I do?
-Why should there be? Mom is gone all the time these days, And Grandma always goes with her.
-Of course there’s no one here.
-Man It's Fast

As for the anime....Mahoromatic?
Is it even an anime or is it some cartoon(i.e. Danny Phantom, Kim Possible, Total Drama Island)?

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doomedfool In reply to nomindofown [2009-07-01 01:37:48 +0000 UTC]

There. I've unhidden the correct guess. And it is an anime, not a cartoon. And it's not Mahoromatic. I have to say, I'm surprised it's taking you so long to get it.

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nomindofown In reply to doomedfool [2009-07-01 18:03:14 +0000 UTC]

Are you sure it was Melissa Fahn who played this part who said the quote?

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nomindofown In reply to doomedfool [2009-07-01 17:58:33 +0000 UTC]

Have I even seen the anime?

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doomedfool In reply to nomindofown [2009-07-01 23:56:27 +0000 UTC]

Alright. One last hint. It was by the same guys that did NGE. And yes, she did do the part. I even double checked on wikipedia to be sure.

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nomindofown In reply to doomedfool [2009-07-02 02:23:58 +0000 UTC]

Fooly Cooly?

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doomedfool In reply to nomindofown [2009-07-02 02:35:28 +0000 UTC]

Yes! It's episode 3. "that's just our tv set. Then why is it walking around." Uh...because it's a tv walkman." "Sony brand? But it's eating curry!" Took you quite a bit that time. There's still one more hidden in there. Completely different series. And are you looking to win this time or no? Let me know, so I know whether or not to hide the answers.

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nomindofown In reply to doomedfool [2009-07-02 02:53:37 +0000 UTC]

....AND YES! I HAVE GONE BONKERS

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nomindofown In reply to doomedfool [2009-07-02 02:51:01 +0000 UTC]

Hmmmm....talk about a misunderstanding. When you said "nothing so serious" I started thinking of shows NOT on adult swim. Oh Well.

Have I seen the other anime? If so then, then I want the prize! You tempted me with the "I think it'll be easy for you" comment a while back. I WILL BE VICTORIOUS!!!!!

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doomedfool In reply to nomindofown [2009-07-02 03:24:55 +0000 UTC]

Oh I think you've seen it. It's a very distinct quote, though I may have altered the tense to have it make sense. Otherwise it's the same. But yes, you most definitely should have seen this one before.

And to you other people out there, you can play too you know. Just put both quotes from the story and the anime that each is from in a comment. If you're right, you win a free story! I most likely need to make another journal with all my info on it again.

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nomindofown In reply to doomedfool [2009-07-02 18:05:20 +0000 UTC]

I know I haven’t been around much lately, and I’m sure you’ve been lonely without your friend.

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doomedfool In reply to nomindofown [2009-07-02 18:07:16 +0000 UTC]

Oh I've been passing the time, don't worry about that.

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nomindofown In reply to doomedfool [2009-07-03 03:14:13 +0000 UTC]

No wait....I forgot the quotations
I was guessing a quote!

Wait...you thought that was a serious sentence?
Sorry but....

Anyway....
"Well, I’m off to bed. Good night Rika."
-Higurash No Naku Koro Ni

"Man, its fast!"
-Bleach
---Even if it's not the right answer...you can't deny this one

Sorry again


Please don't take it too seriously though...
it was kind of funny

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doomedfool In reply to nomindofown [2009-07-03 03:49:20 +0000 UTC]

All in jest, I assure you. And those aren't right. Keep trying

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nomindofown In reply to doomedfool [2009-07-03 13:00:00 +0000 UTC]

I'm going to guess a few anime....then I'll find the quote
-Rave Master
-Zero no Tsukaima
-Sailor Moon

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