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Koix: How humorious. You try and you try yet still here you remaine...in a matter of time..you beloved princess...will join you...a puppet for me...for all eturnityLuigii: D-d...D-dawn......R-r...run...
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here's the 2nd one of the Puppet on Strings series and...tell yah the truth I am not too happy with it. Koix and Prince Luigii are feautered in Mirror Madness the 2nd story in the Mario&Luigi Triliogy.
Dawn is Prince Luigii's girlfriend in Mirror Madness and one of the only ones who knows of Koix's mad plan of trying to minipulate Luigii in destroying all kingdoms in order to find the two Wishing Stars, thus Luigii told her to run.
The last of the three will feature Fortuna, the evil witch who resides in Mirror Land and Prince Peasley of Bean Bean Kingom (I'll explain later)
Puppet On Strings 1: [link]
Puppet On Strings 2: You're here
Puppet On Strings 3: In progress
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Luigii/Koix (c) DordtChild
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Actually in no way what so ever : )
He's been extremely updated since then XD
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Cool! I can't wait for the third one. I'm already seeing different images on how it will look like. Well...kind of.
:/
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can but wont.
There's some art I will draw but not Dimmy
^_^ sorry, it's just prefrence
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no one from the Mario universe and most of the time they are from the Metroid Universe and they are usually my OC scientist.
Sorry :I
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J-just do a pic of Mr. L regular.
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yeah I can draw Mr. L normally
but I've been busy rather so it will be on the list
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I don't do requests only from close friends, I do due commissions
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OK. I love Prince Luigii.
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Poor Luigii, being used as a puppet to do Koix's bidding and being forced to harm those he loves...
This is the first time i've seen him freaked out.
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this is a rly good pic and a pic ths good deserves to go into my faves well done
(btw this pic makes me want to do the same thing with my htf oc aka[link] lol)
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Yeah Mr. Squid Head is back!!
The good: What I really like about this pic that it flows with your first one. You kept the same style of the two but you gave each one their uniquness. The balance of the two OCs made flow with the pic, which is very good to know
Now time for me to be an ass in a good way: What didn't draw me in this time is the background. I have to say that there's not much going on. But I don't know if you made it that way so people can focus more on Koix and Luigii. I would like to see more happen then just stars. Compare to "Puppet On Strings 1" You had more things happening to the background but you didn't over due it. This something I would like to see in this pic.
Overall: It is another great picture from you. I wonder what the thrid one is going to look like. You did a great deal on color and balance. All you got to do is work on your back ground, but that's comparing to the first one.
Thank you for reading, even if you don't agree with me.
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Like I said in my comments, I don't really like this pic as well as the first one. Maybe it's because I hate PSing Koix's tentical hair. uuagh, that's a pain to PS
I thank you for the lovely comment, tho I didn't ask for a cequitic, but still. For a pic I don't really like, I thank you all the same
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You're welcome, I will stop on them unless you ask for one.
In other news, how is Mr. Squid Head?
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hehe
Koix: *sighs* don't you ever die?
thats not nice
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That's not nice at all Mr. Squid Head. And I will never die!
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Koix: *causes you to go boom*
that's not nice you made her a Shadie
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*reading a cook book* So that's how you do it. *pulls our a pair of scissors* Hold still Koix, I'll make this quick.
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omg that is soo epic, i swear i love your puppet on strings now there all so creepy and awsome 
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Well, the next one is Fortuna and Prince Peasley, ah I'll explain later unless you can't wait, but thanks for the liking of the pic I don't think I did too well on ^___^;
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oh wow i would love to see that! and dont worry i think it looks fine trust me
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so is that a yes I like to know now or laters XD?
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Alright. Fortuna, tho created by MisressinBlue, is the 3rd servant to Gilgamesh. She isn't created by him, but he held enough respect about her to make her a servant.
Anywho. Peasley is her puppet because she gave him the Ring of Obessions (the ring was created by Gilgamesh). While Peasley is using the ring for his own game his mind starts to deteriate into madness. In fact, it gets so bad he can't tell who to trust anymore. He almost killed Lady Lima out of his madness
Several times Peasley comes to realize his madness and tried to dispose of the ring, only to have it back on his hand again. Fortuna, being the only one Peasley can trust at the moment, does almost everything she tells him to do because his brain is so warpped thus making Fortuna his Puppet Master
I had several sketches of Psycho Peasley, he's quite evil looking...not to mention almost animal behavior like. He mauled a guy and before he came to realize he killed someone he ripped out their organs
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omg....that is awsome! i would sooo love to see those stetches i bet there amazing
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it takes time. I started coming up with stories when I came up with my first ever charator (her name was Rya and she was a Sayin/Rychu warrior). But since then I have over 150 OCs and 40 Fan charators. I think alot. I come up with whole worlds and profile on every person in that world then put them to gether then based on the profile like them respond to each other.
I could make fresh doodles of Psycho Peasley. He's fun to draw crazed. I'll have to get the Prize pics done first when I get time. ^__^; Yeah, tell you the truth, TRoO was actually part of the trillogy in the beginning. It was TRoO, MirrorMadness, then True Super Star. Then Super Paper Mario came out and I fell in love with Dimentio and changed out the Trilogy
XD me and my obession of Dimentio
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ah i see, i do things a bit diffrently, i always have to think about my character and do a plan out of there likes, dislikes and whats most inportant is there history, after ive done that i need to then get a rough plan out of what the story could be like then changes bits over time till i get a good plot, if i did a exsample of my OC annabelle, at first she was just a knight for a princess and over time i deveoloped her and soon i made up a complete background story for her past (its long and took forever to make) so yea after ive got my characters done i need to think of plot twists, what should happen to get the readers attention ect.
omg you soo have to do that when you get the chance i would love to see that
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Eh, I kinda...mmm..have them on the back burner. As you can tell I posted alot of others first XD I don't like putting prize pics in my gallery. I normally scrap them.
Yeah, The trilogy was lot different when I first started it. In fact, Mirror Madness didn't even have Koix nor Princess Dawn in it. When I revamped Mirror Madness I befriended Blue and we just completely overhald it from there
XD you and your Luigi/Mr.L Obsession.
Tell yah the truth, I use to like Mr.L over Dimentio, but the more I looked into Dimentio the more I started to loooove his insane personality. Now I'm his little raving fangirl who will never allow him to have a decent night sleep >:3
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yea i have noticed that, im going to have to have a eye on ur scraps for anything new 
and yea im such a fangirl over mr.L 
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Another great work! YouΒ΄re very good in draw expressions! I love this one!
Good job!
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Thanks, but I'm not as happy how this turned out compared to my first rendition. Tho I love the feed back you and others are giving it, still, I find something about it amiss
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YouΒ΄re welcome.
Oh, you just have to cheer up. Okay, sometimes we donΒ΄t like our pictures, but we have to live with them how they are...
(yes, it sounds weird, sry)
You just can do what you can!
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^__^; maybe it's Koix's appearance I am not liking too well. Sure I like the OC but crap he's difficult to PS (with all the tentical hair and all)
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Yeah that could it be.
The hair and the other - uh - stuff XD looks really difficult. But hey, I like it anyway!
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^__^ *shrugs* Koix is just difficult to PS and I don't know why, I use the pen and airbrush on everyting and it's easy for me to do but you know
Aw thank you
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Maybe I donΒ΄t understand it because I donΒ΄t know what PS is O__o
How embarrassing
Yeah...
Hehe, youΒ΄re welcome. Pleasure! ^-^
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PS means Photoshop.
XD
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AAAAH, now I get it. Thank you very much xD
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I like your work and everything, and I don't mean to be insulting, but have you heard of spell check? It comes with programs like microsoft word and fixes spelling and the like.
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If you were looking at the comments, then I don't care about spell check. I would like if you didn't talk about how I spell things. When I was typing my comp crapped out on me and posted the errors.
Thus, shut up about my spelling please. thank you
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lol, calm down. Don't get your panties in a twist, please. I just wasn't sure, no need to become hostile so hastily.
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Oooo looks awsome!!!
*anybody got some scissors? :3*
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Oh, this looks creepy... Poor Luigii...
I can't wait for Mirror Madness! If it's half the story FWTBT is, it's going to be beyond epic!
Back to the picture, it looks amazing! I love how Koix looks... completly apathetic towards the poor puppet...
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Koix doesn't have any emotion...but he has been known to display rage. It's because he doesn't have a heart crystal, tho he was created with one
glad you like the pic. Mirror Madness is the story I'm known for. So I hope it's epic
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