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Veena, a dragon shark... come across on some interesting book to read~Related content
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While you definitely a lot of detail on the character, and you used color skilfully as well, it appears that you did not put the same amount of detail on the rocks and the formations in the background. The rocks look like simple two-dimensional polygons rather than actual rocks, and the rocks don't have the same level of shading as the character.
Also, the character is placed in an awkward position, leaning a bit too far on the rocks. This position looks too uncomfortable for reading, as she would have to lift her upper back up just to read her book. If you had the character sit directly on the rocks, instead of leaning on the rocks, her pose would look far less awkward.
Finally, the character does not appear to have defined hips. The legs look like they're just jutting out of the torso instead of naturally progressing from the torso.
If those three things were improved, the picture would be greatly enhanced.
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Your local Scoot agrees.
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Most of the detail in the pic is quite a breath taker, but it's more of body positioning and and the inner details because most people would over look the colors and such.
While it is a good pic, there are a few problem present, one being her position on this rock at sea is not well focus since this image has a focal prospect as to looking up at the character in an angle and how she was draw for this view is not well applied, it should be exaggerated a bit, but not by too much. Next I wanna get at that right leg, actually both thighs on both legs really come too short, they need a little more length for it's detail. Another thing to note, this character is in position as to where she's lean a little far back on that rock but this is where most of the issues are. There is no support from any limb on her body to balance on it, if your going to use that left hand is what is helping her as the ticket it won't work since this hand isn't even supporting itself against even the rock for that matter, and the breast are draw as that if the character would be as a more standing 3/4 type of view.
People may think your a great artist, but you still need some work, practice never hurt a soul.
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I totally love her, great work ^^
On the other hand, I saw someone using her model and rename her Moria Archi, making her his own character with other arts (her, but with testicles/penis).
Did he buy her,, or just steal her ? =/
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A dragon shark ey? Sexy species, sexy name, sexy women. I like it!
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Wow. She looks very beautiful as a dragon shark. Keep up the great work artist.
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salut , j'aimerais savooir si tu peux me donner des conseils pour dessiner Γ§a , surtout le paysage , j'essaye de reproduire le paysage mais j'arrive pas
merci de rΓ©pondre
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Breath taking D:
Is that a frontal view of the muzzle or a 3/4 view? o. o
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Amazing 
Gotta love your art.
Hrm, could you do a before and after piece perhaps? I did one just to see how much I improved.
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xD I'm pretty sure I know what's in that book, and it makes her expression slightly hilarious.
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Looks like a nice place for reading. Don't drop that book.
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Okay people , is there really a need to 'wonder' about what she's reading? She's reading about SEX. Which is something I'm sure we are ALL familiar with.
-By the way, she IS very sexy and very nice job on this.
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Oh wow... Stunning and beautiful...
And adorable.
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what does she reading XDDDDDDοΌI WANT THAT BOOK(*Β―οΈΆΒ―*)
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I love that tail tip. It reminds me of a guillotine.
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Wow... She looks really nice
I really like her. I think that she has an attractive and cool design. ^w^
Her pose is maybe one of the best things of this drawing. I really like how it enhances her anatomy and gives her such a sexy look. Love the way her hips and legs look here. This is one of the most catching details about her in this work, plus the marks all over her body and hair, which are a nice complement for the entire color scheme of her body.
Now, the scene it's really nice. The perspective of the rocks where she stands in are very nice, and how they point to the sky is a good strategy to enhance this effect. Also, like a lot how you made the texture of the water here. Looks very appropriate and subtle.
She's really beautiful. I'd love to watch her again along with another of your fantastic characters.
Fantastic Work!
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I'm speechless! Awesome work yet again!
I wonder what she's reading about?!
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Well she looks bored. But she is a pretty fish out of the water, wanting to be caught. >:3
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Please tell me the name of the book she's reading :c
Also.... Hope it's waterproof xD
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My imagination is going crazy over the book that character is reading. X3
She looks beautiful and very well colored. Keep up the amazing work!
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Ive gotta say that the book is 18+ cause shes blushing...plus the female symbols intertwining >.>
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