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Published: 2014-03-01 18:06:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 526; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Edit: Blurred the background a bit
Okay...I know..I know I have not uploaded a manip in literally ages. I have been working on this for like months! xD Actually about 1.5 months to be exactish...lol.
Ok so I really do like this I just wish I wasn't so bad at lighting.
I have worked forever on that mane and if Angel would not have helped me with it I wold never have finished it.
I like the little symbol on the horse.
I know you guys are probably thinking the background is to contrasted but I really do love it that way and when it turns out as a layout it will look better
“You've gotta dance like there's nobody watching,
Love like you'll never be hurt,
Sing like there's nobody listening,
And live like it's heaven on earth.”
― William W. Purkey
Behind the scenes:
Time took-Over a month!
Layers:36
For:A layout contest but if it looses probably a premade or my half of an art trade
Tool:Gimp 2.6 and laptop, and some parts i had my tablet
Credits:
- Help with the mane thanks SOOO much
-Kept me going and stopped messaging me (not on purpose...I think xD) To make me stop procrastinating
Thanks again everybody
Comments and Critique are ALWAYS welcome!!!
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Comments: 39
JJ-Warrior [2014-03-11 21:48:11 +0000 UTC]
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I like the whole theme of this a lot. The whole bluey-ness (is that a word?) is really cool. I would suggest a few things:
1)Lighting:
Play around with the Color curves a bit. Also, I find that, for lighting, if you desaturate (black and white), burn, and add a bit of color, it really helps, although this may vary depending on what editing software you use.
2)Outlining:
It took me a few seconds to find the horse in the manip. Right now, the focal point is pretty much the big log in the, while the horse is more of a background item. I would again play around with lighting to make the horse pop out a bit more.
Other than that, great work!
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elixir-studios In reply to JJ-Warrior [2014-03-12 11:25:59 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the tips c: I will be sure to use them
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GiovanniDeSicilia [2014-03-01 18:15:43 +0000 UTC]
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I have read what you expected from us as an audience, so I can help you without pointing out something you already know. The contrast to me is fine, in fact it almost feels abstract because of the the black framing around your piece. Plus I love the blues, it has a monochromatic style that expresses this moody scene with the horse, I feel a subtle narration, and I think blue was a perfect choice to express it. If I can suggest one technical detail to make it even stronger is to add soft shades of blue on the top so I can have a greater sense of the environment, I feel like there is a little bit too much weight on top. Overall, the your concept was clever, and it has an great sense of atmosphere that I can feel from this.
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GiovanniDeSicilia In reply to elixir-studios [2014-03-01 18:18:42 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome, thank you for taking your time to read my critique.
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elixir-studios In reply to GiovanniDeSicilia [2014-03-01 18:26:48 +0000 UTC]
xD I read everything lol i am always excited to here from people cause I am always looking to improve!!!
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GiovanniDeSicilia In reply to elixir-studios [2014-03-01 18:30:23 +0000 UTC]
Excellent! That's what I like to hear from artists! Not a lot a people these days who can handle criticism. Well… at least outside art school. Lol
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elixir-studios In reply to GiovanniDeSicilia [2014-03-01 18:45:08 +0000 UTC]
that is pretty pathetic because no one is perfect and you can only improve xD
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GiovanniDeSicilia In reply to elixir-studios [2014-03-01 22:11:42 +0000 UTC]
Is there anything else you would like me to look at?
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elixir-studios In reply to GiovanniDeSicilia [2014-03-01 23:15:49 +0000 UTC]
Ummm you can look through my gallery I guess xD
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GiovanniDeSicilia In reply to elixir-studios [2014-03-07 18:01:06 +0000 UTC]
What kind of art do you like best?
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elixir-studios In reply to GiovanniDeSicilia [2014-03-08 00:38:39 +0000 UTC]
i prefer graphics...but i also love handrawn things...mostly around animals though xD
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GiovanniDeSicilia In reply to elixir-studios [2014-03-08 01:52:22 +0000 UTC]
Oh nice, I like going through all kinds of art. Cartoons, anime (used to, but still do it here and there), realism, etc. xp
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GiovanniDeSicilia In reply to elixir-studios [2014-03-11 00:26:22 +0000 UTC]
Lol, I just love art.
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xxMysteryStockxx [2014-03-01 23:07:35 +0000 UTC]
amazing well done
thankyou so much for using my stock D:
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elixir-studios In reply to xxMysteryStockxx [2014-03-01 23:09:57 +0000 UTC]
Thanks and I had fun with your background xD
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elixir-studios In reply to BambiLeigh95 [2014-03-01 18:24:26 +0000 UTC]
thanks I hope it wins SOMETHING in you contest lol
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BambiLeigh95 In reply to elixir-studios [2014-03-01 18:26:02 +0000 UTC]
We will just have to wait and see only a few hours left can I ask you a reallyy BIGGGGG favour? could you crit my 2 new manips PLEASEE
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elixir-studios In reply to BambiLeigh95 [2014-03-01 18:29:52 +0000 UTC]
yeah sure but I am warning you i am bad at explaining things...will after I eat lunch lol
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BambiLeigh95 In reply to elixir-studios [2014-03-01 18:34:42 +0000 UTC]
Thankyou it is fine honestly and what theme would you say this was as ive kinda got rid of all the info with the themes
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elixir-studios In reply to BambiLeigh95 [2014-03-01 18:44:20 +0000 UTC]
i have NOOO idea xD so i am just going to say free theme?
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BambiLeigh95 In reply to elixir-studios [2014-03-01 18:46:26 +0000 UTC]
Okaay great thankyou
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aapex [2014-03-01 18:09:13 +0000 UTC]
WOW
This is amazing, Kelsie!
I think this is your best work yet!
I love the colors and the light!
and I like your signature too btw!
Beautiful!
and i totally did stop messaging you so
you'd stop procrastinating hahah i just
didn't know it at the time XD
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elixir-studios In reply to aapex [2014-03-01 18:12:11 +0000 UTC]
xD you really think
its my best? xD well
that means ALOT lol
and yeah i have been
doodling in class to figure
one out xD just look at the
edges of all of my math papers
i had to grade myself
Yeah you did make me get my but busy xD I am entering it
in Bambilieagh's contest so I hope i win something
if not this gets to be my half of the art trade
with you xD
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aapex In reply to elixir-studios [2014-03-01 18:21:47 +0000 UTC]
woohoo!
Good luck in the contest!!
It really is amazing
I think the one thing I would
say about it is maybe there
should be a bit more light on the
one side of the horse that's facing the
light
But serious girl, this is awesome
you're making alot of progress! c:
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elixir-studios In reply to aapex [2014-03-01 18:25:51 +0000 UTC]
Glad to here I am not
as bad as I think I am at
graphics lol xD And yeah I had like
20 layers trying to do lighting lol
But thanks and i can not
wait to see your next piece
of art.....
speaking of which what are you working on?
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