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Nokutaan [2019-01-04 20:43:47 +0000 UTC]

Hiya, I'm from ProjectComment ! First off, I want to say he definitely looks like a cute ball of fuzz! You’ve definitely given this character a sort of young, innocent look. He reminds me of a kitten who’s just found something new and totally fascinating. It’s really quite adorable. I feel you’ve done good with the overall design of the character!

Now, where I feel you could improve this piece lies in the coloring. It’s generally a good idea when coloring (at least I think), to not use super dark, saturated black because you drown out your line art. Additionally, because you’ve done such a dark black it sort of detracts from other parts of the fur (which is either white or gray?) Typically, I would use a darker gray, that way I can convey that the object is black without drowning out the details of the lines. Additionally, some of your line art goes over where it shouldn’t (like some places in his hair for example, and some places on the bandanna). Traditional line art can be really tough (I know from experience, my lines are super shakey) but a good way to improve it is to do a simple exercise of drawing straight lines point to point. Keep practicing! You can do it! I believe in you! <3

Besides the small little critiques I have, you have a little cutie pie here! I just want to smoosh his cheeks.   

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