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plush--bun [2017-06-10 04:24:41 +0000 UTC]

Hullo, I am from ProjectComment to give a bit of critiquing! (Only a small bit, though, i'm still not too deep into this.)   

Very nice artwork! What I would suggest is perhaps centering the facial features a bit more, it looks a bit strange and flat with the mouth being almost completely 2-dimensional on the side of the face. Other than that, very good work!

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twinkletalon [2017-06-09 23:49:21 +0000 UTC]

Hello! I'm here to give some critique from ProjectComment!   

     The reason that I immediately came to your piece aside from some of the others in the gallery was because of the striking color choice. That saturated yet light blue really tries to grab at your attention! It goes well with the pastel pink of Ochako's uniform. All of this contrasting with the grey background really emphasizes the main figure. There is also a nice consistent line weight through out the piece, and it appears very smooth. I can tell that you have some experience with digital art, but I'd like to ask if you are going for a more cartoon style or towards a more anime influenced style? Due to the source material (also a BNHA fan here!) I'm more inclined to say anime.

     Now for some critiques, as much as I can complement the use of the blues in the hair, I feel like it is more of a style choice rather than an attempt to bring a focus onto the hair. There's inherently nothing wrong with this! But, to work well with the rest of the design, it has to be done well. As for the composition even in this bust shot, I feel like there should be more going on with her stance. It might be due to the lack of any large shadows on the body, or due to the inconsistencies in the shadows that are there; but I can't get a sense of where she shoulders and arms begin/end. The only way to fix this problem is practicing from reference, and a lot of Youtube tutorials as well as some here on Deviantart can help you with that!

     Overall, I do love this piece! It might help that I also love Ochako as a character, BUT I still think that this stands as a piece of art on it's own! Thanks for submiting it into the gallery!

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JezabethTheDemon [2017-06-09 16:20:14 +0000 UTC]

you should work on the hair shine but other than that it's really good

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Akae123 [2017-06-09 06:59:26 +0000 UTC]

Great! Though, I think  that you should work on perspective a little more.

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DancingLunarWolves [2017-06-09 00:09:01 +0000 UTC]

Is this a version of Chara from Undertale?

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BobaTemjewel-Usami [2017-06-08 22:37:36 +0000 UTC]

That's really good 

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