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Erik-the-Okapi — Mark the Mongoose (REQUEST)

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Published: 2018-11-07 05:00:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 451; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 0
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Requested by my friend


Here's your request Jerry! Hope you like it!


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Mark the Mongoose belongs to

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DRAIN1NG--C0L0RS [2019-02-06 16:56:20 +0000 UTC]

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I personally think this looks great, but there are a few things that I find unappealing.
Although the lines are easy to see the mistakes are too, nobody's drawings are perfect but I'd suggest putting more time into erasing. The coloring is messy, and you can see spots where you didn't color in, I know this took a while but take more time to color, it will Help e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>. I don't see two ears. Overall this is great, those are some things I find you should work on. I'm wanting to know if the shoes were gonna be colored, But this is just my point of view.

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GuyraPongTsuyu [2018-11-09 02:07:21 +0000 UTC]

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I do love the efforts you made on your OC because you showed your creativity. I'll criticize you on a few things. I do wish the arms were firmer since they might be a little floppy. Also, I do wish you had the time to erase the mistakes you might had left because they look unappealing. The shoes would be much better if you colored them with better colors. I would hope the sneakers on Mark would be a different color instead of white in the near future. Don't forget on having a brighter background because it ties up it together.

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Erik-the-Okapi In reply to GuyraPongTsuyu [2018-11-09 03:45:31 +0000 UTC]

What the heck!

This is not my OC! You people never read the description!!

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GuyraPongTsuyu In reply to Erik-the-Okapi [2018-11-09 19:55:43 +0000 UTC]

My apologies.Ā 

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L-MASTER [2018-11-10 15:14:35 +0000 UTC]

Good work

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Erik-the-Okapi In reply to L-MASTER [2018-11-15 02:19:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanx

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GuyraPongTsuyu [2018-11-07 22:00:08 +0000 UTC]

I do think it is nice.Ā 

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Erik-the-Okapi In reply to GuyraPongTsuyu [2018-11-08 20:55:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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GuyraPongTsuyu In reply to Erik-the-Okapi [2018-11-08 21:36:02 +0000 UTC]

NP! I might would to point on a criticism.Ā 

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Erik-the-Okapi In reply to GuyraPongTsuyu [2018-11-08 23:27:31 +0000 UTC]

kk

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GuyraPongTsuyu In reply to Erik-the-Okapi [2018-11-09 01:52:02 +0000 UTC]

All righty.Ā 

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