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Published: 2004-12-23 16:47:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 229; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 7
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Description Nobody likes it this thing on my face
As if features more fair have now fallen from grace
Well noted the glare as I pass through your space
Why did I let it grow?

More handsome features (if handsome they be)
Should not be so hidden consensus begs me
Throw off woolen shackles and let your face be
Why did you let it grow?

To my employer its sully and unfit for show
To my ex it's occasion for shots down below
To my son it's a tuggable thing that should go
Why do you hide away so?

Why do they stammer when questions I ask
Bring forth discomfort and take them to task?
Resist and recant and repent and then bask
Why do we let these things grow?

It's not for the warmth against cold winter's blow
It's not for the vanity--life's more than show
More often in vain I'd choose otherwise, so
Why have I let myself go?

To know that I hurt, and I bend in the wind
To survive your scorn since you will not rescind
To scream "Do not touch me!" to those not within
Yes, to say I have let myself go.

I know I look crazed so hirsutely displayed
I know my appeal is halved and parlayed
Into sweet indifferential bypasses made
By those who've not let themselves go.

I will renew, 'tis a mere passing thing
I will submit as does Winter to Spring
Not one thought more given to this mask and this thing
Behind which my mind heals and grows.
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Comments: 11

Objectivist [2004-12-26 06:25:21 +0000 UTC]

I really enjoyed this. It's simple topic does not hinder the flare of your style. It really hit home too, for some reason I've started growing something on my face as well. I really love the boss, ex's and child in there too, adds good realism.

thanks for a good read.

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eustressor In reply to Objectivist [2004-12-26 13:06:10 +0000 UTC]

I'm so pleased you enjoyed it Thanks for taking the time to leave such an kind comment. While it's always encouraging to hear that someone liked a piece, it's especially encouraging, and helpful, when someone takes the additional time to offer a few reasons why

Much appreciated, and good luck with your thing. Mine died at the hand of a two-headed blade just yesterday :RIP:

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Mandarrcat [2004-12-23 17:54:19 +0000 UTC]

I like the way the rhymes are AAAB That's pretty cool! I like the thing that grows on my face! It's so pimp! lol TTYL

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eustressor In reply to Mandarrcat [2004-12-23 17:59:31 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, that was a last minute, "in the submit box" decision on the rhyming scheme. Thanks, I'm glad you liked it

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Mandarrcat In reply to eustressor [2004-12-23 18:11:41 +0000 UTC]

I thought the Rhyme scheme kicked ass! i might use it if you don't mind?

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eustressor In reply to Mandarrcat [2004-12-23 18:27:29 +0000 UTC]

Sure. You might have to pay royalties, tho'

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Mandarrcat In reply to eustressor [2004-12-23 18:35:29 +0000 UTC]

HEY!!! You don't own it!

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eustressor In reply to Mandarrcat [2004-12-23 18:45:44 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I don't know about that. I'm really OLD, remember? I just might

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Mandarrcat In reply to eustressor [2004-12-23 18:49:44 +0000 UTC]

WOw you must be REALLY old! Are you ugly? jk

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eustressor In reply to Mandarrcat [2004-12-23 18:55:13 +0000 UTC]

Yes, my avatar and ID are just masks. Behind them I am hideous and decrepit. Especially with this thing on my face

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Mandarrcat In reply to eustressor [2004-12-23 23:36:44 +0000 UTC]

LOL nice! I'm so twisted it's insane...lol

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