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ExplodedView — Deep Red Number 44
Published: 2011-01-29 23:05:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 157; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 4
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Description The smell reminds me of her
She had some love
And I had some hope
We pasted our hearts together
Out of fear of being alone
And we dyed them red
But everyone saw
The chemicals and not the color
And now I think back
For the first time in months
Yeah I think back
But
Now it's so much better
Loving you is so much better
Being with you is so much better
And I love you so much better
Then anyone before
As the red ran down
I had a fear I might drown
I cut out my heart
Like I did every time
No reason in the rhythm
But now I think
How it's so much better
Being with you
How you make me so much better
How I love you much better
Then any that came before
They walked in and out
Like a revolving door
And I lost count
Of how many had been before
Because you are so much better
You make me so much better
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Comments: 18

Gorillaman123 [2011-01-29 23:08:40 +0000 UTC]

awesome

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ExplodedView In reply to Gorillaman123 [2011-01-29 23:09:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you
yeah weird feeling man weird....

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Gorillaman123 In reply to ExplodedView [2011-01-29 23:12:34 +0000 UTC]

really sorry you had to go through that

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ExplodedView In reply to Gorillaman123 [2011-01-29 23:14:07 +0000 UTC]

No it's not bad just weird totally bizzar because I haven't felt anything about ana for months but the smell of the dye brought up weird feelings

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Gorillaman123 In reply to ExplodedView [2011-01-29 23:16:59 +0000 UTC]

most people change their hair when they get out of relationships
Weird..

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ExplodedView In reply to Gorillaman123 [2011-01-29 23:22:17 +0000 UTC]

I'm still dating zoe calvin
the poem is about how using the same dye now and then gives me weird feelings

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Gorillaman123 In reply to ExplodedView [2011-01-29 23:28:00 +0000 UTC]

i know youre dating zoe
i was commenting on how you dyed your hair to mark togetherness rather than separation
that was what was weird

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ExplodedView In reply to Gorillaman123 [2011-01-29 23:30:11 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah I guess maybe that's why the fact the i ended up using the same dye is so weird

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Gorillaman123 In reply to ExplodedView [2011-01-29 23:31:42 +0000 UTC]

probably

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ExplodedView In reply to Gorillaman123 [2011-01-29 23:35:36 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I didn't do it on purpose fate I guess

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Gorillaman123 In reply to ExplodedView [2011-01-29 23:54:49 +0000 UTC]

fate does usually weird things up

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ExplodedView In reply to Gorillaman123 [2011-02-03 04:49:25 +0000 UTC]

I'm think of making this longer and into a song...

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Gorillaman123 In reply to ExplodedView [2011-02-03 05:33:54 +0000 UTC]

you can guest sing in our band

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ExplodedView In reply to Gorillaman123 [2011-02-03 05:47:02 +0000 UTC]

Sweetness that would be really cool

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Gorillaman123 In reply to ExplodedView [2011-02-03 05:53:30 +0000 UTC]

it will ahppen

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ExplodedView In reply to Gorillaman123 [2011-02-03 05:53:57 +0000 UTC]

Yay~ I'll make it longer

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Gorillaman123 In reply to ExplodedView [2011-02-03 06:30:30 +0000 UTC]

yes

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ExplodedView In reply to Gorillaman123 [2011-01-29 23:56:29 +0000 UTC]

I agreed

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