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ExterminatorExploder — the point of view is potential.
Published: 2014-01-30 14:57:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 169; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Description i despise your sarcasm
but i cannot help that i cry for you.
a sheath of muscle has blocked out their twisted fists
that pound your bones black and blue,
while your heart has become stapled crudely to your chest
and hand marks stamp themselves upon your throat.
am i pathetic for wondering
how a strong sense of arrogance like yourself
would look cowering in a shadow?
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Comments: 2

safva [2014-01-30 15:00:23 +0000 UTC]

Even though it's only a few lines, this is an incredibly touching poem. I love how you've used every single word here. Each line is strained, as if you're being careful enough to use as little but as descriptive words as possible, and I'm getting an amazingly angsty feel from that... ;v; Well done. This is a very, very beautiful poem!

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ExterminatorExploder In reply to safva [2014-01-30 15:02:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I don't really usually write poetry  

But I always love to get feedback.

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