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It appears that a mystery brought by a reader up in chapter one has been solved, she does in fact gain weight while binging, this time far more than last time! But the weight she gained last chapter is entirely gone, so how much- of any of the weight gained in this east will be retained? And will she even notice? Stay tuned! Also, COMMENT.
So, it's kind of obvious Alli's face keeps on changing, and I think it's done, I just needed to become comfortable with the character. Any inconsistencies in Red and Redder are just facial expressions, Allis is supposed to be changing a little right now, just so I can know what I want it to be forever, and don't end up changing once the story's more established.
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Glad you like it!
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Great job, I would say in the coming parts I'd look forward to seeing Alli's belly in relation to her body maybe, it's kinda hard to get a sense of scale from the perspective we see it here.
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Intended to be that way, because we're going to see a lot of it in relation coming up. Round two is lunch!
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Shrewd! 
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how did Alli manage to get to the cart for more food with such a huge gut in the way?
since when does she call her belly Caroline btw.?
even though I like your new style: you should probably include more details of the restaurant (at least more of the cart)
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The cart was taken a ways away, didn't feel it was important enough to mention *shrug* they've been bringing the food to her. There are two main reasons we haven't seen more of the restaurant. The first is that I'm lazy and draw frames where the people cover up the background as much as possible., and the second is that there isn't much to the restaurant right now, since everything's been cleared for the full critiquing process. There'll be a little more seen later on. I also felt bad for not updating in so long and decided to make it go a little quicker.
Thanks so much for the feedback
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hopefully the next rounds are bigger than this so that she can fill up the whole room by the time she's done
or she could get herself 2nds or 3ths of each round (after she realizes that she isn't completely full/satisfied, yet) to get a better taste of the different foods for a more detailed critic (maybe only an excuse then)
it's cool to see her so eager to get even more despite her belly looks so packed tight
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Haha, yeah. She's going to get a LOT bigger by the end of the chapter, but I don't want to approach room filling levels quite yet, since we need something to be working to
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