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faustsketcher โ Sakura Haruno -lineart-
Published: 2009-09-11 20:54:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 5071; Favourites: 89; Downloads: 399
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so ya, WIP of a request.i guess i shoudl do another requests after a couple weeks without....
so this is the lineart, i did it this evening, and tomorrow morning ill finish it.
feel free to color this lineart, thou gimme some credit in case u do lol (and also, if ya do, tell me, it could eb cool lol!)
--- EDIT ---
i cleaned the lineart and arranged some stuff i saw when posted
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can we color it??? i want to cause its sooo COOL!
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lol! xD its cool man, thou, if u wat sum advise, dun use such shiny tones on red for instance, it hurts eyes ;3
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true, guess i learned the hard way in art class yesterday when we were doing abstract artwork X3
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We can coloring...YAY!!!!! It will not be awesome like if it was you but I will do my best ^_^ .
I really like her pose, your did a great job as always ^_^
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lol thanks, tell me when u have it colored c=!
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SWEET >D you did the side face perfectly ;D
there SO HARD TO DO!!!! Dx *STABS SELF* D<
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LOL! XD oh well xD thanks ^^
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yaya i say so on the description, just gimme credit for the lineart c= and tell me when u r done, i'd like to check it out ^^
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KK, (I already finished ^^''
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Make the forehead a bit more out and curved, but keep the size since that's a recognition mark of hers.(dunno what it's called.) Bring the mouth just a bit further ahead and might need to raise it a little too. Make the eye a bit bigger and closer to the nose, but not by much.
Fix the skirt. You cant see the perspective of it, but since the anatomy tricks you, it's not obvious, so you could leave it if you lazy be. Breasts up a tiny bit and slant the bottom half of the throat discretley. The lower left arm looks short and the shoulder should be more raised in a pose with hands up like that.
Im being nitpicky i know >_<.
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w00t
well, first off, thanks, it sbeen like months since i got a critic c=!
then, point by point:
-forehead: well, thats kinda style, usually, a forehead would eb more curbed, btu on my more moe face style i tend to do foreheads more plain xD! but ya, ti should eb more curved
-mouth: ya i know it wass too on the right, thou i tend to do mouth rly inside lol! still i moved it on my first edit myself cuz i thougt i did it too much on the inside maybe. wha ti didnt change is the hight, its jsut my style, unleess i do realism, i liek to draw low mouths xDDD!
-Eye: the size is ok, unless i want her to look liek a kid, and the height, i guess i could lower it a lil bit.
-Skirt: i jsut hate skirts on flow, and even more with spread/crossed legs. i knwo its hard to tell,, btu for folds and perspective issues, i tend to leave it for coloring. thou ye, i just fail
-Boobs: IMO they are on teh correct place if i draw the bones, i just dun wanna do em pomping out, jsut normal.
-Throat: i dun get what u say there x_x im not native english speaker, so ye D'8
-Arm/shoulder: the arm, ay, the perspective sucked, so i might change that later on. the shoulders, well, its not a boxing pose, just ready to fight, and well, even if i do that pose i dun rise the shoulders ยท_ยท thou i knwo what u mean, and idk if i explained properly bout tehy shoulders, but basically, tis just the pose lol XD
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Perspective on clothes and liquids are always harder than solid objects.
The line beneath the eye is too wide/thick/big or whatever. It makes her look like she's been bruised.
At the base of the throat you should curve it out just a tiny bit instead of doing straight down and then a curve to the chest.
At the arm, it's not bad but its there if you think hard enough. i dont think it's worth changing. it looks good.
Boobs, they're beautiful in (almost) all sizes and shapes.
Yeah, and you should be more careful while typing, since you'll learn much, much faster. Im not native english either and im probably younger than you. Keep at it.
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oh yeye, the enck is something i wanted to change, thou... ah, now im realizin that i didnt change it on the lineart (i mean, i didnt update the pi wiht some corrections i did =?)
and ye i know what u mean botu teh arm but ya, lets elave it liek that xD!
and i agree on breast C=! they all ahve its charm *u*
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work on teh side face yo! D:!
oh wow sakura! wasnt expecting that! awsome x)
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whuts wrong with ti??? be more specific pwease ._.
and lmao, its a request -_- id be doing more paintings if it wasnt becuz.... ill tell ya on msn lol
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i leave it for msn =w=
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lol okayy, well we alredy discussed bout ti xD
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