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Published: 2011-09-03 06:24:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 757; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 16
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Angry Felon is angry.
Perspective is a fail. Phooey.
Critiques welcomed! ^^
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Comments: 33
I love the details in the blood
And no,I am not a vampire...
Maybe
I love the texture in everything,and the shading!
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Thank you very much! <3
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looks awesome yo!! And I agree to every one else the back legs do look kinda weird/awkward looking, but I like everything else darling :3 Oh and maybe I'll like to have a commission like this one day if you tend to have everything done. Or our art tradeee!!
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Thank you! ^_^
(I should be able to do an art trade really soon. I only have one more commission to get done. 
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Back legs look a little weird, like an awkward kick, but I loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Thank you! I'm glad you like it! 
The back legs are such a pain. I'll have to try and re-do them I think.
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Yeah I'm nevr good with back legs either xD We're on the same boat.
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oh goodness 8O *scared*
Okay, so the only thing I can see are the back legs, they look really short and make the torso look like it keeps getting longer. They should look about as long as the front legs, but in proportion to the perspective:3 And seeing there is that much blood splatter on her face, Felon should have some on her front paws and chest too:'D And if Her top canine teeth are a little wonky maybe just a little less outward curve^^. And also, her ears might a bit smaller (unless that's the style of ears she has) be pinned back if she's close enough to her target:]
Anyways, sorry if I failed at critique, I never really do critiques c: Looks amazing btw^^
Not claiming to be all knowing of perspective, just pointing out a few things<33
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Thank you! And thank you so much for the critiques! I really appreciate it! 
(Yeah, she has big, long ears.
And you definitely do not fail at critiques. It really helps, so thank you.
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Teehee Your welcome:3 glad to help out:]
Lawng ears c: hurrhurr<3
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woow! good job! (again
critique: if a dog (and I assume wolfs too) is angry, standing like this, the tail is up in the air...
and the blood on the ground is too vague... because it's quite close, so it should be a little sharper...
it also looks like there isn't any fur on the legs...
and I think (maybe I'm wrong, that's possible 
good stuff: the expression is VERY good! you can see it's really really pissed..
the way it's standing is very good as well! you really did that great!
the tongue looks awesome! it's not too long, but not too short either.. good job!
the shading is good as well! (you have a LOT of good things
it is just AWESOME!
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Thank you! ^_^ And alright, thanks so much for the critiques! <3
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Awesome!!! It looks SO cool!!
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Thank you so much! <3
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It looks really good. I'm especially loving the blood! Only bad thing about it is the perspective, but other than that it's amazing.
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Thanks! ^^
Could you tell me what's wrong with the perspective? How do I fix it?
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The way she is standing looks as if her back half is standing on a rock. Try drawing less of her back, and moving the back legs down more.
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The hind legs look a little screwed up, but otherwise this is good. The head and face are in particular well done.
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Yeah, they were the hardest to position. I couldn't figure out how to get them to look right. I probably should have left them off completely.
But thank you! ^_^
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