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Description Not for the faint hearted sasuke fangirls, may have a tiny spoiler.

“Sasuke-kun?” Sakura Haruno asked timidly as she opened the cell to Sasuke Uchiha’s cell. Ever day since Naruto brought Sasuke back Sakura has come into his cell and brought him food, drink and tried to talk to him.
As she knelt don’t before him and placed the tray of fresh ramen before her love, she stole a glance up into his black eyes shed dreamt about for years on end. That’s when he saw it in her eyes. Her sparkling green eyes shone so intensely with her love, her unyielding love, as his face dropped as he stared into her eyes he saw something he thought he would never see again, someone willing to do anything to help him, to protect him, to be with him.
The Uchiha smiled back at the blushing kunoichi and placed his hand on her chin, lifting it up so he could look her full in the face. Heat built up in his face as she moved closer to him. Every time they got close enough she would try to kiss him, and again she tried. For the first time in around 13 years he didn’t pull away.
He gasped the back of her neck and pulled her into him roughly. Fan girl after fan girl tried to glomped him again and again and after all this time, Sakura’s patience had worn off. In his tiny cell all there was, was a single mattress on the cold dusty floor with one single sheet, Sasuke pulled the young kunoichi onto of him as his tongue madly danced along side hers.
The young pink haired girl felt as though all her wishes had come true, all her day dreams, all her wishes, all her hopes and dreams, were now crashing down on her for this moment with her love. Sasuke twisted her around and began kissing down her neck, slyly pulling a kunai out from her belt.
Sasuke stopped kissing her and held the kunai at eye level then looked down at the horror struck girl. With a smirk he cut open her shirt and continued to kiss her body.

Hours later Sakura woke up holding the Uchiha prodigy in her arms, in pure bliss, their naked bodies entwined. She smiled at her love and reached over him to grab her watch on the ground beside him. As she leaned on him he turned into a puff of smoke, all that was left of him was a pillow. Tears filled her eyes, “ A substitution?” she cried as she jumped for her clothes and dressed in a hurry.
She reached her belt and realized her keys were gone Sasuke had used her.
She realized that she had just given her innocence to the only man, who could never love her. A condom was discarded on the floor next the mattress. Clear signs were every-were of what had happened between the two. As tears poured down her face she ran to the door and pulled on it madly but with no difference. She forced chakra into her hand and punched into the steel door. The room consisting of a chakra barrier only broke her wrist. She cried out in pain and fell back on the mattress. “I can’t believe what I did! I let him escape I cheated on Naruto and betrayed Konoha!” she screamed as she burst into uncontrollable sobs, ‘Naruto is coming,’ she thought with a hiccup as she looked at the door. Every morning Naruto would bring Sasuke breakfast, just like she always brought Sasuke dinner.
Her blonde boyfriend chose that moment to open the door to Sasuke’s cell. Sakura jumped to her feet and dove into his arms.
Naruto dropped the fired eggs and bacon he was carrying for Sasuke when Sakura jumped into his arms, her makeup was smudged and pushed around her face, he pulled her back from his to examine her properly “Sakura-chan? What hap-“ he stopped when he saw her properly, her shirt was cleanly cut down the front, she had hikkies around her neck and along her chest, not even ending when her skirt began had her navel, white stains were all along her skirt, and next to the bed a used condom wrapper was on the floor, the same brand Sakura kept in her wallet for when she was ‘married’.
Naruto let go of his girlfriend, dropping her onto the mattress before turning out of the cell to leave her there, he turned back at the weeping woman with an thick mask, hiding his emotions, before dropping a diamond ring on the ground in front of him, then opened the door for her to leave.
Gathering herself up she picked up the rest of her belongings, then her to be engagement ring. It was gold with lines of diamonds all around its base, the words ‘eternal love’ engraved on the inside. She put the ring into her pocket and ran from the Hokage tower, where Sasuke was jailed.
Sakura ran to the Hyuuga complex to find her friend Hinata. As she neared the training grounds of the Hyuuga estate she saw the young Hyuuga heiress talking to her ex boyfriend, Naruto.
“Hinata-Chan, could I talk with you?” Sakura chan asked her friend, avoiding looking at Naruto.
“Umm,” the Hyuuga mumbled looking back and forwards from Sakura and Naruto. After a small nudge from Naruto she stood and walked away from Naruto to talk with Sakura.
“Hinata-chan, please help me! I need to find Sasuke,” she begged grabbing Hinata’s shoulders, “he could be anywhere and I don’t have the time to search for him, please use your Byakugan to help me find him!” she begged the puzzled Hinata.
After a moment Hinata said the unthinkable, “no Sakura-chan,” after a little moment of playing with her fingers she continued, “you really hurt Naruto-kun, I can’t help you hurt him any further,” she said stepping out of Sakura’s grasp and looking anywhere but the pink haired ninja.
After a minute or so of gaping at Hinata, the shy Hyuuga that never said no, never was mean and was always helpful, “Hinata,” Hinata could help but notice the drop of the ‘chan’ “I know you’ve always loved Naruto, im sorry if I hurt you by dating him but I need to find Sasuke-kun for a different reason, please don’t do this,” Haruno Sakura begged.
Hinata’s eyes flared as the glared back at her friend for the first time, “true I’ve always felt for Naruto-KUN even when everyone hated him, including you Sakura! Don’t try to pretend with me that you loved Naruto, he loved you and I bet you didn’t even take his emotions into consideration when you slept with Sasuke! And don’t think im so naive to think you are not going to go find your beloved, Sasuke-kun,” the name she used an imitation of Sakura’s voice, “to re-enact last night, and destroy the last bit of sanity Naruto-kun still has after you broke his heart! I wont let you hurt Naruto-kun anymore, if you want to leave for the traitor Uchiha, then do it without my help,” Hinata ended furiously walking away from the young girl and sitting back with Naruto shaking.
Sakura was in shock, utter bewilderment that Hinata would snap so badly at her. She snapped out of her confusion and began to run once again on her search for Sasuke. She ran into the Konoha forest a couple of minutes away from the Hyuuga complex when her prey found her.
She was in a small clearing in the middle of the Konoha forest, Sasuke on the other side smirking at the distraught ninja. “Come back for seconds?” the arrogant Uchiha asked as he stepped towards her, “sorry but I wouldn’t bother,”
“You bastard!” she screamed pulling out a handful of shuriken’s, adding massive doses of chakra into them and throwing them at her supposed love. She never expected to see it, Sasuke’s face dropped as he was impaled but the ninja stars.
She stated forward when soft breath blew across her exposed neck as the Sasuke in front of her turned into a tree trunk, “the site look familiar lover?” he said from behind her tauntingly, “you couldn’t kill me even if you wanted, you didn’t even want to then,” he said turning her around.
A kunai was in hand as he twisted her around she placed it at his neck.
Sakura held the kunai firmly placed on Sasuke’s neck, his katana was pointed directly at her heart. She hated him for what he did to her, for ruining her life the way he did, but because she had loved him for all those years she couldn’t seem to move.
“All this time Sakura, and you still think I could love you?” Sasuke asked casually, “I could have any girl, in any village if I wanted, why would I go for the most desperate, unattractive girl that clung to me?” he asked the teary girl, poking her abnormally large forehead with his index finger, slightly containing his chakra, bruising her with little force “what on earth makes you think your special enough for me to love you? Or even like you?”
She shifted her weight and adjusted her kunai before saying softly, “Because I always loved you,” her hand beginning to shake.
“Well,” he continued with leaning forward into her kunai making a thin line of blood drip from his neck and Sakura loosened her grip on her weapon, Sasuke pressed his sward deeper into her clothes, “you wasted your emotions, I can’t love Sakura, I won’t love. And even if I could one day, I would never waste it on you,” he spat at her.
“If you hate me so much, why am I still alive as such a hindrance?”
Maliciously Sasuke swiftly swept forward, his sward driving into Sakura’s chest. With his trademark smirk he kissed her on the lips then pulled away from the just as quickly. “Why do you even bother?” he asked in his bored tone looking into the green eyes of the kunoichi.
“I-I l-loved“
“No,” Sasuke simply whispered as Sakura dropped her weapon, as always unable to injure him. With a final thrust he drove his sward further into her chest, until the hand he held at the handle was touching her chest.
Blood began to cascade from his sward. * Cough * the warm taste of metal began to fill in her mouth until it slid down the crevasses of her mouth until her hole chin was covered in blood. Sasuke lent towards her, whispering into her ear, “I never loved you, and no one ever loved you because you loved me. Now you will die, unloved… like me.” And the he lent back and swept his sward out of her chest and walked away as she fell to the ground, in a pool of her own blood.
With that he turned away from the dead girl and left Konoha.
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Comments: 454

firerubydragon In reply to ??? [2009-01-15 03:09:40 +0000 UTC]

thanks, im glad you enjoyed it

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WolvesReign13 In reply to ??? [2008-12-21 20:53:46 +0000 UTC]

I'm a SasuSaku fan but, I totally see the point in this. At first I was going to say something else, but I finished reading it. It's not my favorite, but everyone has their own opinions. I have to admit, it was excellent. 5 outta 5

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firerubydragon In reply to WolvesReign13 [2008-12-22 12:21:57 +0000 UTC]

wow thanks! im glad you enjoyed it

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WolvesReign13 In reply to firerubydragon [2008-12-22 23:46:42 +0000 UTC]

no prob!

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ThePurpleHeart8 In reply to ??? [2008-12-13 03:09:21 +0000 UTC]

hmm not really wat i expected but hey i'll give it a 5/5 ^^

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firerubydragon In reply to ThePurpleHeart8 [2008-12-13 04:26:08 +0000 UTC]

lool thanks

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ThePurpleHeart8 In reply to firerubydragon [2008-12-14 16:29:15 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome ^^

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rdevierte In reply to ??? [2008-12-01 22:09:35 +0000 UTC]

i cant beleive that you would really go that far!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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firerubydragon In reply to rdevierte [2008-12-05 14:01:44 +0000 UTC]

why not? its my story and other people have gone further in their imagination making sick senerios and unbelivable situations that are completely unreasonable, so why cant you belive that i would make an assesment on the characters and create this scenerio, that may not be lovey dovey but its more realistic than most fluff.

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Theangel02 In reply to ??? [2008-11-26 15:03:20 +0000 UTC]

I really like this story.The story I always find is about how sasuke is falling in love,forgets about the revenge of clan and others...I wanted to look for something else.And I did found.Your story is soo amazing.Love isn't alwasy rainbows and butterflies.In a sasusaku pairing it always has to be a little bit of sadness or evil. I have seen this in your story,and believe me : It's soo awesome!!!

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firerubydragon In reply to Theangel02 [2008-11-27 07:47:50 +0000 UTC]

thanks im glad you enjoyed it, i just wanted to be realistic so im glad you apriciate it! thanks for reading

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KibaHina123 In reply to ??? [2008-10-15 19:30:41 +0000 UTC]

FUCK SASUSAKU>.<

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Breathing-Death In reply to ??? [2008-10-11 07:54:51 +0000 UTC]

First I'll say, I like SasuHina a lot, but it seems only to work in fanfics, unfortunately. I hate Sakura, too, and she's too annoying and obsessive. Sasuke's too cruel, for sure. I also hate that the people on the show that I love are always dying, but none of the people I hate are. I think that, IF, they get Sasuke back to Konoha one day, they should just kill him off the bat. It's not a cruel punishment, you know? For everything he did... also, aren't they supposed to do that to a rogue ninja? Or something like that...

Well, great story! Is this all there is to it, though? It's really interesting, definitely! I'm glad Sakura died that way, at the hands of the one she claims ever-so often as the one she loves. Stabbed in the chest by his samurai (so gay, lol) sword. Well, once more, awesome job!

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firerubydragon In reply to Breathing-Death [2008-10-11 08:03:09 +0000 UTC]

LOOOL well im glad liked it. im happy to say that with naruto only one of my fave chars died but gaara came back to life so im happy. but about the whole sasuke returning thing i think youl be interested in how naruto pans out, i wont give anything away but the manga is alot further into the story than the anime

i know sasuhina wont work in the actual anime, but it just seems more plausable because of their personalities were as sasuke detests sakura any way im rambeling! thanks for the fave and the support.

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animewannabees123 In reply to ??? [2008-10-07 04:45:44 +0000 UTC]

wow [link]
although i like sasusaku..
but anyways great story

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ayjw1234 In reply to ??? [2008-10-06 13:13:52 +0000 UTC]

sakura's such a bitch.

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firerubydragon In reply to ayjw1234 [2008-10-06 13:39:52 +0000 UTC]

that she is

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Animerokz6 [2008-09-27 14:29:00 +0000 UTC]

that was very dramatic! i liked it. and serves her right for loving sasuke! NARUSAKU 4EVA!

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firerubydragon In reply to Animerokz6 [2008-09-28 03:25:34 +0000 UTC]

lol glad you liked it, immore a naruhina fan but i agree about sakura she hould get on with her life

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Animerokz6 In reply to firerubydragon [2008-09-28 15:23:51 +0000 UTC]

yea. kool

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3xsa In reply to ??? [2008-09-23 05:16:25 +0000 UTC]

poor sakura

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Thot-Shop In reply to ??? [2008-09-22 01:12:00 +0000 UTC]

I MOTHER FUCKIN HATE YOUB RIGHT NOW SASUSAKU IS AWSOME AND YOU FUCKED IT UP HOW DARE YOU PUT IT AS A SASUSAKU FANFIC

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firerubydragon In reply to Thot-Shop [2008-09-22 08:03:28 +0000 UTC]

Hey its my story i can write whatever the hell i want. and sasusaku isnt a awsome paring, some people like it, but its flawed, alot of people agree with me, just like alot of people and agree with you.

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Thot-Shop In reply to firerubydragon [2008-09-22 20:18:06 +0000 UTC]

i had a love like sakuras i loved him but never had the neve to tell him how i felt and on the day i planned on telling him i saw him kissing a girl me and him where best friends i guess thats how he saw it as thats why i like sasusaku

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firerubydragon In reply to Thot-Shop [2008-09-22 23:10:30 +0000 UTC]

But your story isnt like SasuSaku, its more like NaruHina. Sakura threw herself at Sasuke every chance she got so it wasnt a hidden love, she had no sence of pride in what she did and its more of a hollow effection than anything substantial.

Your situation is more like Hinatas love for Naruto, she doesnt love him for his looks or his power of his popularity, she loved him for him and his personality.

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Thot-Shop In reply to firerubydragon [2008-09-23 00:22:02 +0000 UTC]

i guess that makes sence but i want to be like Sakura and tell him how i feel openly and well lets face he and sasuke act extacly the same

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firerubydragon In reply to Thot-Shop [2008-09-23 09:32:25 +0000 UTC]

but dont be like her in the sence that you persue a man that hates you. in your case your male friend is a friend and probabily a genuine guy otherwise you wouldnt be head over heals for him. but sakura has corage and all, but she is also arrogant. you yourself seem genuine, not arrogant like her, thats a good thing

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Thot-Shop In reply to firerubydragon [2008-09-23 20:23:24 +0000 UTC]

ok um thanks

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Suchiko-Chan93 In reply to ??? [2008-09-16 23:24:59 +0000 UTC]

OMG I LOVE YOU!! xDD
Aww.. Poor Naru-chan.
That whore.. I would've done that myself, kudos to Sasuke.
Lovin' it, I've read it twice! Keep it up!
xx

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Thot-Shop In reply to Suchiko-Chan93 [2008-09-22 01:10:19 +0000 UTC]

I HATE YOU

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Suchiko-Chan93 In reply to Thot-Shop [2008-09-24 19:04:25 +0000 UTC]

That's your opinion, unfortunately. :/

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Thot-Shop In reply to Suchiko-Chan93 [2008-09-25 01:01:36 +0000 UTC]

STFU

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Suchiko-Chan93 In reply to Thot-Shop [2008-09-25 17:37:24 +0000 UTC]

Sorry that you don't appreciate my comment, but if you don't have anything nice to say, please don't say anything.

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Thot-Shop In reply to Suchiko-Chan93 [2008-09-25 20:15:58 +0000 UTC]

fine

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firerubydragon In reply to Suchiko-Chan93 [2008-09-17 11:38:41 +0000 UTC]

lol happy fdor the support i hate her too so im glad you enjoyed it so much

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Suchiko-Chan93 In reply to firerubydragon [2008-09-17 13:49:56 +0000 UTC]

Lolz- no worries. I'm glad I've found someone that is actually not obsessed with SasuSaku.
To be honest, I could never see them together.. Their relationship is as likely as Dosu and Zabuza's. xD

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firerubydragon In reply to Suchiko-Chan93 [2008-09-20 12:41:52 +0000 UTC]

lol liewise, sasuke would bever fall for an obsessed controlling freaky ass chick like sakura, he's mmor elikely to go for karin than her

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Suchiko-Chan93 In reply to firerubydragon [2008-09-24 19:05:02 +0000 UTC]

*Totally agrees* We have the same way of thinking.

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Princezz92 In reply to ??? [2008-09-13 14:42:02 +0000 UTC]

Yo, like, what the hell? You aren't supposed to kill Sakura- I thought the story was pretty good! You obviously aren't a fan of SasuSaku if you made Sakura go out with Naruto, made Hinata say no, and made Sasuke kill Sakura! I'm sorry, but I'm never reading another one of your damn stories again.

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firerubydragon In reply to Princezz92 [2008-09-14 00:33:00 +0000 UTC]

eh, im sorry you fele that way about all of my fanifction, but your situation is understandable, not many people liek this story so im not to fussed about that.
but i wanted to kill her, so i did

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Princezz92 In reply to firerubydragon [2008-09-14 02:52:27 +0000 UTC]

very funny-you wanted to kill her... why? do you not like her or something?I don't really mind her at all, actually.

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firerubydragon In reply to Princezz92 [2008-09-14 07:48:51 +0000 UTC]

no i dont like her, and i guess its just a matter of opinion who you like, everyone likes differnt chars for eveything. i wanted to kill her because 1: i dont like her 2: her personality annoys me and 3: i can, its my fanfiction.

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sasusakucar In reply to ??? [2008-08-30 02:21:53 +0000 UTC]

i...i hate you

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firerubydragon In reply to sasusakucar [2008-08-30 03:02:33 +0000 UTC]

hahaha thanks

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Theanimepsycho003 In reply to ??? [2008-08-29 00:53:46 +0000 UTC]

i lve this one! It actually probably conveys how he feels about everyting. When i read this, it seems as if i could understand sasuke almost, and why he is the wya he is.

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prettyWaHine In reply to ??? [2008-08-28 17:32:44 +0000 UTC]

this one's really good.... though im a sasusaku fan, it doesn't bother me a bit... sasuke's character remained as it is in the real manga series...

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soulfightersu In reply to ??? [2008-08-17 19:25:09 +0000 UTC]

This is pretty good. I like people who write fanfics like this and express their opinion. I've written a fanfic about Sakura going mad and killing Sasuke(by accident, but no-one really cares 'bout that) It's my most viewed deviation, lol^^ I'm gonna collect this because it's really good.

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kaceycorn In reply to ??? [2008-08-07 01:17:47 +0000 UTC]

.....o.....m......g....... that... was.... terrible (but in a good way) i mean terrible because of what naruto hinata and sasuke did, but the fanfic in general was greata! ...but... i really liked it because it DID seam like something Sasuke would do... that little b******! poor sakura-- actualy scratch that; if sakura was going out with naruto (WHICH SHE SHOULD) then she shouldn't even have tried to kiss Sasuke *sigh* oh well... lets just hope that doesn't actualy happen in the series eheheheh.

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firerubydragon In reply to kaceycorn [2008-08-07 06:04:25 +0000 UTC]

im glad you liked it though personally i wouldnt mind seeing something bad happen to sakura, she just isnt on my top list of characters, as you can tell

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xXxAnimeXRulesxXx In reply to ??? [2008-08-05 22:00:56 +0000 UTC]

I read tons of different fanfics, it doesn't bother me although I am a SasuSaku fan I'm a ItaSaku fan as well (Never ItaSasuSaku)

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