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Description Not for the faint hearted sasuke fangirls, may have a tiny spoiler.

“Sasuke-kun?” Sakura Haruno asked timidly as she opened the cell to Sasuke Uchiha’s cell. Ever day since Naruto brought Sasuke back Sakura has come into his cell and brought him food, drink and tried to talk to him.
As she knelt don’t before him and placed the tray of fresh ramen before her love, she stole a glance up into his black eyes shed dreamt about for years on end. That’s when he saw it in her eyes. Her sparkling green eyes shone so intensely with her love, her unyielding love, as his face dropped as he stared into her eyes he saw something he thought he would never see again, someone willing to do anything to help him, to protect him, to be with him.
The Uchiha smiled back at the blushing kunoichi and placed his hand on her chin, lifting it up so he could look her full in the face. Heat built up in his face as she moved closer to him. Every time they got close enough she would try to kiss him, and again she tried. For the first time in around 13 years he didn’t pull away.
He gasped the back of her neck and pulled her into him roughly. Fan girl after fan girl tried to glomped him again and again and after all this time, Sakura’s patience had worn off. In his tiny cell all there was, was a single mattress on the cold dusty floor with one single sheet, Sasuke pulled the young kunoichi onto of him as his tongue madly danced along side hers.
The young pink haired girl felt as though all her wishes had come true, all her day dreams, all her wishes, all her hopes and dreams, were now crashing down on her for this moment with her love. Sasuke twisted her around and began kissing down her neck, slyly pulling a kunai out from her belt.
Sasuke stopped kissing her and held the kunai at eye level then looked down at the horror struck girl. With a smirk he cut open her shirt and continued to kiss her body.

Hours later Sakura woke up holding the Uchiha prodigy in her arms, in pure bliss, their naked bodies entwined. She smiled at her love and reached over him to grab her watch on the ground beside him. As she leaned on him he turned into a puff of smoke, all that was left of him was a pillow. Tears filled her eyes, “ A substitution?” she cried as she jumped for her clothes and dressed in a hurry.
She reached her belt and realized her keys were gone Sasuke had used her.
She realized that she had just given her innocence to the only man, who could never love her. A condom was discarded on the floor next the mattress. Clear signs were every-were of what had happened between the two. As tears poured down her face she ran to the door and pulled on it madly but with no difference. She forced chakra into her hand and punched into the steel door. The room consisting of a chakra barrier only broke her wrist. She cried out in pain and fell back on the mattress. “I can’t believe what I did! I let him escape I cheated on Naruto and betrayed Konoha!” she screamed as she burst into uncontrollable sobs, ‘Naruto is coming,’ she thought with a hiccup as she looked at the door. Every morning Naruto would bring Sasuke breakfast, just like she always brought Sasuke dinner.
Her blonde boyfriend chose that moment to open the door to Sasuke’s cell. Sakura jumped to her feet and dove into his arms.
Naruto dropped the fired eggs and bacon he was carrying for Sasuke when Sakura jumped into his arms, her makeup was smudged and pushed around her face, he pulled her back from his to examine her properly “Sakura-chan? What hap-“ he stopped when he saw her properly, her shirt was cleanly cut down the front, she had hikkies around her neck and along her chest, not even ending when her skirt began had her navel, white stains were all along her skirt, and next to the bed a used condom wrapper was on the floor, the same brand Sakura kept in her wallet for when she was ‘married’.
Naruto let go of his girlfriend, dropping her onto the mattress before turning out of the cell to leave her there, he turned back at the weeping woman with an thick mask, hiding his emotions, before dropping a diamond ring on the ground in front of him, then opened the door for her to leave.
Gathering herself up she picked up the rest of her belongings, then her to be engagement ring. It was gold with lines of diamonds all around its base, the words ‘eternal love’ engraved on the inside. She put the ring into her pocket and ran from the Hokage tower, where Sasuke was jailed.
Sakura ran to the Hyuuga complex to find her friend Hinata. As she neared the training grounds of the Hyuuga estate she saw the young Hyuuga heiress talking to her ex boyfriend, Naruto.
“Hinata-Chan, could I talk with you?” Sakura chan asked her friend, avoiding looking at Naruto.
“Umm,” the Hyuuga mumbled looking back and forwards from Sakura and Naruto. After a small nudge from Naruto she stood and walked away from Naruto to talk with Sakura.
“Hinata-chan, please help me! I need to find Sasuke,” she begged grabbing Hinata’s shoulders, “he could be anywhere and I don’t have the time to search for him, please use your Byakugan to help me find him!” she begged the puzzled Hinata.
After a moment Hinata said the unthinkable, “no Sakura-chan,” after a little moment of playing with her fingers she continued, “you really hurt Naruto-kun, I can’t help you hurt him any further,” she said stepping out of Sakura’s grasp and looking anywhere but the pink haired ninja.
After a minute or so of gaping at Hinata, the shy Hyuuga that never said no, never was mean and was always helpful, “Hinata,” Hinata could help but notice the drop of the ‘chan’ “I know you’ve always loved Naruto, im sorry if I hurt you by dating him but I need to find Sasuke-kun for a different reason, please don’t do this,” Haruno Sakura begged.
Hinata’s eyes flared as the glared back at her friend for the first time, “true I’ve always felt for Naruto-KUN even when everyone hated him, including you Sakura! Don’t try to pretend with me that you loved Naruto, he loved you and I bet you didn’t even take his emotions into consideration when you slept with Sasuke! And don’t think im so naive to think you are not going to go find your beloved, Sasuke-kun,” the name she used an imitation of Sakura’s voice, “to re-enact last night, and destroy the last bit of sanity Naruto-kun still has after you broke his heart! I wont let you hurt Naruto-kun anymore, if you want to leave for the traitor Uchiha, then do it without my help,” Hinata ended furiously walking away from the young girl and sitting back with Naruto shaking.
Sakura was in shock, utter bewilderment that Hinata would snap so badly at her. She snapped out of her confusion and began to run once again on her search for Sasuke. She ran into the Konoha forest a couple of minutes away from the Hyuuga complex when her prey found her.
She was in a small clearing in the middle of the Konoha forest, Sasuke on the other side smirking at the distraught ninja. “Come back for seconds?” the arrogant Uchiha asked as he stepped towards her, “sorry but I wouldn’t bother,”
“You bastard!” she screamed pulling out a handful of shuriken’s, adding massive doses of chakra into them and throwing them at her supposed love. She never expected to see it, Sasuke’s face dropped as he was impaled but the ninja stars.
She stated forward when soft breath blew across her exposed neck as the Sasuke in front of her turned into a tree trunk, “the site look familiar lover?” he said from behind her tauntingly, “you couldn’t kill me even if you wanted, you didn’t even want to then,” he said turning her around.
A kunai was in hand as he twisted her around she placed it at his neck.
Sakura held the kunai firmly placed on Sasuke’s neck, his katana was pointed directly at her heart. She hated him for what he did to her, for ruining her life the way he did, but because she had loved him for all those years she couldn’t seem to move.
“All this time Sakura, and you still think I could love you?” Sasuke asked casually, “I could have any girl, in any village if I wanted, why would I go for the most desperate, unattractive girl that clung to me?” he asked the teary girl, poking her abnormally large forehead with his index finger, slightly containing his chakra, bruising her with little force “what on earth makes you think your special enough for me to love you? Or even like you?”
She shifted her weight and adjusted her kunai before saying softly, “Because I always loved you,” her hand beginning to shake.
“Well,” he continued with leaning forward into her kunai making a thin line of blood drip from his neck and Sakura loosened her grip on her weapon, Sasuke pressed his sward deeper into her clothes, “you wasted your emotions, I can’t love Sakura, I won’t love. And even if I could one day, I would never waste it on you,” he spat at her.
“If you hate me so much, why am I still alive as such a hindrance?”
Maliciously Sasuke swiftly swept forward, his sward driving into Sakura’s chest. With his trademark smirk he kissed her on the lips then pulled away from the just as quickly. “Why do you even bother?” he asked in his bored tone looking into the green eyes of the kunoichi.
“I-I l-loved“
“No,” Sasuke simply whispered as Sakura dropped her weapon, as always unable to injure him. With a final thrust he drove his sward further into her chest, until the hand he held at the handle was touching her chest.
Blood began to cascade from his sward. * Cough * the warm taste of metal began to fill in her mouth until it slid down the crevasses of her mouth until her hole chin was covered in blood. Sasuke lent towards her, whispering into her ear, “I never loved you, and no one ever loved you because you loved me. Now you will die, unloved… like me.” And the he lent back and swept his sward out of her chest and walked away as she fell to the ground, in a pool of her own blood.
With that he turned away from the dead girl and left Konoha.
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Comments: 454

xpushux In reply to ??? [2008-08-05 12:06:20 +0000 UTC]

ima a bit upset that he killed her .. BUT MAN that was so awsome "fan girl squeel" sasuke's even cooler now XDD i love it :3 <33

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sakuratiger4 In reply to ??? [2008-08-01 20:03:13 +0000 UTC]

That was pretty messed up, dude. Um, wow. I don't even want to know why I read that....

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sasukes-gurl1222 In reply to ??? [2008-07-31 01:20:22 +0000 UTC]

IM SORRY BUT THAT WAS HORRIBLE OKEY!!!!!!!![link]

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urra3214 In reply to ??? [2008-07-26 00:50:02 +0000 UTC]

how sad and dramatic! i'm gonna cry.......and kill SASUKE!

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Aalimay7 In reply to ??? [2008-07-25 18:33:04 +0000 UTC]

*sob* a little messed up but its ok thers times

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kathy-hikaara In reply to ??? [2008-07-20 20:30:14 +0000 UTC]

Sure whatever good story, but I can't say that Sasuke would be that much of an ass and kill her, sure he may not fall in love with her when he goes back to Konoha, but still you can't say that he won't fall in love with her. No not as soon as he see's her he'll be all over her. He also isn't a pervert like that.

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firerubydragon In reply to kathy-hikaara [2008-07-21 10:56:02 +0000 UTC]

hey what can i say, i wanted to write it, so i did

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kathy-hikaara In reply to firerubydragon [2008-07-21 15:34:42 +0000 UTC]

Ok, but it seems as if you're saying in the story that this will happen.

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firerubydragon In reply to kathy-hikaara [2008-07-22 03:51:52 +0000 UTC]

well there is a possibility i never said there wasnt, i wanted to show that it can happen because comon, it a story about ninjas with awsome abilitys, anything CAN happen and i wanted to show what i belive can and possibly would happen because even you cant deny the darker side of sasuke wich is growing darker by the week in the manga.

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kathy-hikaara In reply to firerubydragon [2008-07-22 16:17:25 +0000 UTC]

Sure the kids possesed, but that doesn't mean he will fuck Sakura leave her and then kill her. He's not going to be like that. Yes his darker side is coming more alive, but he won't be that much of an ass. He killed Itachi, Orochimaru is dead. The kid is free he went back to Konoha I think, he's not there to kill Naruto and Sakura.

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firerubydragon In reply to kathy-hikaara [2008-07-24 00:50:04 +0000 UTC]

well everyone is entitled to their opinion

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kathy-hikaara In reply to firerubydragon [2008-07-24 00:54:28 +0000 UTC]

Yes... It's just best if the stories seem more real, then what you want to be real.

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firerubydragon In reply to kathy-hikaara [2008-07-24 02:06:22 +0000 UTC]

well fanfiction is a way for people to express thier indevidual veiws desires, hopes, dreams, hates, anything really so you cant force a biased oppinion on someones work because it doesnt fit with your likes.
i personally have read a fanfiction were gaara molested hinata in an allyway with sand. being a gaara lover that killed me, but even the author said what im saying now, its a fanfiction and seeing i wrote it a can do whatever i want to do.
like she said i can make sasuke wear a pink tutu and dance on a clowns ball if i want, but because this didnt go like most people wanted i will get hatemail. i should have to base MY stories on what people want to read but on what I want to write.

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sonicfreak99 In reply to ??? [2008-07-18 15:50:06 +0000 UTC]

I think i'm gonna cry...thats a great story, though. You really captured Sasuke's personality.

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firerubydragon In reply to sonicfreak99 [2008-07-19 03:30:01 +0000 UTC]

im glad you think so, there are quite a few people who would prefer to belive their own version of sasuke than the true one. so thank you for your comment.

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Sasuke4Eva619 In reply to ??? [2008-07-08 21:57:41 +0000 UTC]

omfg....im a SasuSaku fan, but this story kinda tells the truth. Sasuke can't become all lovey-dovey as soon as he comes back and automatically falls inlove with Sakura right? Well Sasuke is dark and he did go evil. But one thing im not sure of is while i was a reading a manga (no its a stupid doujinshi) Sasuke was crying...yeah i know it was..really surprising...

ANY-WAY the story was good!

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firerubydragon In reply to Sasuke4Eva619 [2008-07-09 05:32:00 +0000 UTC]

i read that episode, but that was for itachi not sakura, am i correct? and im glad you see a truth in my story and moreso im glad you like it

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Anime-Freak-95 [2008-07-06 17:21:21 +0000 UTC]

i lyked it even thou i love sasusaku ^^

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Rosebarrye In reply to ??? [2008-06-26 21:26:30 +0000 UTC]

oh and YAY hinata finally gets a backbone! iwas really hoping for her to slap sakura actually.

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Rosebarrye In reply to ??? [2008-06-26 21:18:43 +0000 UTC]

i like happy endings but that was awsumness! i like sasusaku but he does seem more into character in this fic not that i think he would kill her but it was still really good ^_____^

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scarletdaemon In reply to ??? [2008-06-18 03:56:04 +0000 UTC]

OH GOD! I actually think youre one of the few people to write a sasusaku to pay attention to the characters! I really liked it, especially the fact that Sakura totally burned in the end, (Im one of the haters, sorry) but seriously, the emotions, the drama, the deceit, it was AWESOME!!!

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firerubydragon In reply to scarletdaemon [2008-06-18 09:43:45 +0000 UTC]

yeye glad you liekd it all! dont worry im a sakura hater too... incase you hadnt noticed i tried my darndest to make sure al the personalities fit as best i could. so thanks

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sakura252 In reply to ??? [2008-06-11 21:10:11 +0000 UTC]

I really dont get it are you against sasusaku or are u for it these are the questions that haunt me lol

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firerubydragon In reply to sakura252 [2008-06-11 22:47:15 +0000 UTC]

haha lol well im pritty much against sasusaku. i really dont see how the pairing could work.

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gracefulstrawberries In reply to ??? [2008-06-04 22:55:29 +0000 UTC]

thats horrible!!! even though sasuke is sort of evil....he would never kill someone that he called his best friend, (yes it is on an episode of naruto, where he thinks of naruto and sakura as his best friends) and he...wouldn't be so cold heartless unless he was possessed.

I don't think hes a pervert like that? hes more a quiet person than someone who would trick sakura into sleeping with him just so he could lead her on and kill her in the end.

besides, if he ends up doing this, then he is just as much as a devasting person as his brother, and he shouldn't have a reason to kill him.

also, i don't think naruto is that unforgiving, much less hinata. she wouldn't hold a grudge if someone slapped her across the face.

lastly, if naruto and sakura were together, i don't think she would do that to naruto unless she was raped.

honestly, i don't know how you can write such terrible things and live with yourself. i know they're just fictional characters but omy GOSh!!! how can you mistake the kind of person masashi portrayed them to be as these unkind people with no hearts????

i will admit naruto can be devastating, i did cry when i found out what happened to sasuke, but he shows his care for his friends if you watched some of the episodes...

that was so horrible, do you go around depressing people miserably everyday?

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firerubydragon In reply to gracefulstrawberries [2008-06-08 01:32:26 +0000 UTC]

well he may have called Sakura and Naruto his best freinds, but this is set after he left,and he did do evil things and began to kill without hesitation, after all he did kill Orochimaru who did train him for 3ish years. after 3 years who is to say that he still has such connections? Masashi did show him as somewhat of a crewl bastard by the end of it and by Naruto shippuden. he didnt seem to show any sort of concideration towards Naruto or Sakura even yet from last weeks manga episode, (sorry if this is a spoiler) Sasuke is planning on declaring war against Konoha, wich is not only killing of his so called "best freinds" but his old comrades, his teammates, his school mates, his entire village wich makes him worst than Itachi, so you should not tell me to watch the anime episodes, im up to date with the manga wich the anime is based on.

Also, i do belive we have established that Sasuke is extreamly resorceful and there is a high possiblitly that he would use Sakuras annoying and undevoted love for him to his advantage. and its shown multiple times in the series that Sakura descracefully throws herself at Sasauke, making a fool of herself. and she wouldnt need to be raped, and she most likely would do that to Naruto just because she does have a tendancy of being short sighted and self centered and if things ended differently you wouldnt have a problem with the story if Sakura went to naruto told him, apologised and lived happily ever after with Sasuke i wouldnt have hate mail as long as theirs a happy ending, people dont care!

Now i agree with you about the Naruto and Hinata thing to a small extent. i did exaggerate some reactions but think of this and stop pitying Sakura. Naruto 'loved' Sakura, just like Hinata loves Naruto. For Sakura to do such a thing, Naruto does have the the right to act the way he did and he does have a tendancy to walk off giving him self time to cool off before becoming reasonable and she was dead before he could consider anything else other than his pain. As for Hinata, the man she admired and loved since she first met him, came crying to her and telling her that the woman he loved slept with his arch rival / best freind / whatever. i think she would have some resentment towards her to just because of her strong will to protect her freinds, namely Naruto.

and i dont go around delibratly depressing people everyday, this coupleing annoys me and i wanted to show my veiws on what is most likely to happen in this situation.

after all thats what fanfiction is all about. i mean Hinata woulnt screw her cousin Neji, though thats a large pairing. Sasuke wouldnt do his brother who killed off his whole family, but thats also a pairing. this is fanfiction and this is the kinda of storys your bound to find eventually. get over it. you cant dictate peoples veiws.

Long live the last free thinkers!!

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gracefulstrawberries In reply to gracefulstrawberries [2008-06-04 23:11:38 +0000 UTC]

plus!!!! ( ialready wrote a lot but whatever) there is the possibility that sakura will grow up, since she DOES become older. i hated her behavior around sasuke when she was younger also, but in the end the most important thing was how much she cared about him, and she was never immature when that side of her showed.
and i don't see how sasuke could possibly kill her even if he wanted to because....because of that one episode!!! that episode, don't you remember, when she fell from gaaras monster hand and sasuke leaped to catch her? why else would he save her if he hated her and didn't like her ? no one told him to do that, and yet he did it anyways.

moreover, proof that even the most horrible people can change was found when gaara acknowldged naruto. just look at what happend to him! he was betrayed terribly; he wanted nothing more to kill people for how he had been treated, and yet after seeing someone filled with good spirit, he found room in his heart to notice and maybe possibly admire naruto. (not like that, don't take it the wrong way)

and you say sasuke hates the world? I think not. hes not weak, but hes not heartless either. face it, i already gave u the proof.

sasuhina?? wtf?? when did he ever even glance at her that way?? I mean come on!!! why would that happen? there has been like, NO indication from either person that they like eachother. and their personalites, come on, they would never clash.

and sakura and kakashi? don't you think thats a little gross even for sakura? kakashi DIES, you know, why would he even think of her that way? I mean i know he's a pervert, but he wouldn't betray his own student, hes not some crazy rapist with no control over his actions like pervy sage seems to be. and the same goes for freaking sakura? you already said she's obsessed with sasuke, why would she even consider an old man like kakashi?

i wanted to add: maybe sakura will mature when she gets to the age you wrote her as? i don't think she s as stufpid as you portrayed her. i'd think, shemight even be mad at Sasuke, or maybe even forget him.

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firerubydragon In reply to gracefulstrawberries [2008-06-08 01:46:30 +0000 UTC]

yes she does become older and prolly more mature, but your forgetting this is my story and i can do whatever the hell i want. also i dont think Sakura is smart enough to get over him she still cries over a guy who knocked her out to leave Konoha. Also Sasuke may have saved her, but thats before he left Konoha in search of power and logiclly thinking, if she were to die it would hinder the team and infact slow him down and if you paid attention, he is extreamly focused on his strenght.

And yes i understand the whole thing about Gaara. he is my favorite character, but he also hated his father, wich he never stopped hating because of what he did to Gaara as a child. And he changes his ideals because of the similarity between him and Naruto. also he got over his hate for everyone gradually and as seen in the series, Sasukes hate has just begun. and i knew Sasuke was a revengeful little prick.

SasuHina. well they have similar personalities in the way thier both quiet, but Sasuke clearly hates those who throw themselves at him like Sakura and Ino, even Karin. But Hinata always liked Naruto, so whos to say he doesnt like a little challange, and again, my fanfiction, my rules. be open minded.

KakaSaku well that was a spur of the moment thing and i was bored, i dont think Kakashi would sink so low as to Sakura, so your kinda right there. i was going to delete it just for that fact, but ive had so many faves for it, i decided not to delete it.

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wicked13th In reply to ??? [2008-06-03 02:32:21 +0000 UTC]

I liked that alot!!!! I mean sasuke, like you said, isn't a pussy! He wouldn't fall in love wit Sakura! killing her is a little drastic but still...Sakura needs to get over him (GOD I hate her XP)!
*thumbs up*

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Fayamilie In reply to ??? [2008-06-01 23:30:21 +0000 UTC]

i dont hate u
i HATE sasuke.

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DramaQueen14 In reply to ??? [2008-05-30 22:08:55 +0000 UTC]

i may be a major sasusaku fan, but i still think that this is a great story. as much as i would like to believe that sasuke would always have a tender spot for sakura, i know it will only be in fanfics. but you are a great writer and this story is REALLY good! ^^

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evaspaz In reply to ??? [2008-05-18 17:10:39 +0000 UTC]

HOW COULD YOU CALL THAT A SASUSAKU STORY?THAT UPSET ME ....now I'm crying.....man if it's a story where sasuke claims to never love sakura and ultimately kill her, don't say it is a sasusaku story...or else I wouldn't have wasted my time reading it.

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firerubydragon In reply to evaspaz [2008-05-20 09:43:09 +0000 UTC]

im sorry i missinformed you, i figured the warning at the begining warned people. guess i was wrong.

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Sasuke-Uchiha84 In reply to ??? [2008-05-13 13:28:57 +0000 UTC]

ARGGHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!I HATE IT!!!!!!!!!!!SASUKE ISN'T THAT MEAN YOU KNOW?!YOU MAKE THIS JUST TO MAKE SASUSAKU FAN'S VERRY MAD AND I WANT TO FUCKING KILL YOU X(X(X(X(X(X(X(

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firerubydragon In reply to Sasuke-Uchiha84 [2008-05-14 12:25:36 +0000 UTC]

well thats you opinion. personally i belive sasuke could be so straight foreward in expressing himself to sakura. i didnt make this to anger sasusaku fans, but justs to break the stereotype of a happily ever after story with a couple who have been growing further apart in the series, and were one of the charicters have never actually shown ANY sought of affection towards the oposing charicter.
in my opinion sasuke does detest sakura, same as he detests the rest of his crazy fangirls. as i said at the begining of the story, this isnt for faint hearted sasuke fangirls.
and lastly, thats awfully mean.

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IceValaxy In reply to ??? [2008-05-06 02:09:22 +0000 UTC]

o my...that was a shocker at the end! ha! but great story!

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cabomb In reply to ??? [2008-05-03 14:11:54 +0000 UTC]

im holding my peace for now. but im pro sasusaku. manga chapter 364 started w/ a qoute 'neglected comrades, a castaway love..blahblah..' i dont know what that implies to others, but to me, there could b a hope for that or ends as simply as it states. whatever..

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firerubydragon In reply to cabomb [2008-05-05 06:57:25 +0000 UTC]

i can understand your veiws on the pairing, it is so popular one could imagine that the creators of the series would one day put it in the story. but this fanfiction is just my ideas of what the situation could become. i belive this just because of the annoyance and isolation that sasuke shows towards sakura and basically all the girls in the series. personally i belive sasuke has a higher chance of becomeing gay than falling for any of the chicks who throw themselves at him seeing he shows little to no interest in any of them.

but that is just my veiws, and the veiws of the people who have faved this story. but fanfiction is just your ideas and is free to do whatever you want. i can understand your veiws and respect them, all im saying in this story is that these are my veiws.

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cabomb In reply to firerubydragon [2008-05-06 14:00:32 +0000 UTC]

golly, im drawn to fanfic because my preference to sasusaku was largely fanned by these sites..but i think most fans making these fanficsare going overboard by creating all these feverish and lustful stories. i may like those nicely done but im getting sick with most, esp with off-characters stories. thats why im saying im holding my peace for now.. i dont argue over opinions, and you might be right of sasuke going gay, but im crossing fingers for my favorite angsty couple. none of the yaoi wil do, more pervert.

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sakuraharuno998 In reply to ??? [2008-05-01 02:48:59 +0000 UTC]

OMFG i hated it^!!!!!!!!!

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firerubydragon In reply to sakuraharuno998 [2008-05-02 06:39:48 +0000 UTC]

meh, well you get that...

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IlurfCalen In reply to ??? [2008-04-27 02:25:32 +0000 UTC]

dude, sakura got what she deserved. sasuke and sakura make a good couple in fanfics, but sreoulsy she's a fan girl beesh. so i congradulate you on this story.

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firerubydragon In reply to IlurfCalen [2008-04-27 06:23:01 +0000 UTC]

why thank you!

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IlurfCalen In reply to firerubydragon [2008-04-27 08:53:50 +0000 UTC]

Hehe no problem-o. and yaoi is fuc- i mean freaking awseome! Hehe ^^"
Inner me- KAKASHI AND IRUKA! SHYA, I LOVE IT!!
Me- >> i am watching you.

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CassandraUzumaki In reply to ??? [2008-03-29 22:10:47 +0000 UTC]

Hm, I never thought it would end that way...Good thing I really don't like that couple, or I would be like, "OMG, HOW COULD YOU?!"

I thought it was good. That would probably happen if Sasuke returned...So yeah, you were just being realistic. And I liked it for that. Good job. <3

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firerubydragon In reply to CassandraUzumaki [2008-04-11 02:10:33 +0000 UTC]

lolz thanks aye!

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Teine-tor In reply to ??? [2008-03-29 16:33:27 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry to say this sasuaku lovers (as am I) but I feel for naruto. Why did she always try to kiss him if she was with naruto? that's not right. But this was a good fanfic! ^^

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firerubydragon In reply to Teine-tor [2008-04-11 02:17:01 +0000 UTC]

thanks its good to hear/read your veiws on my fic im glad you see it my way

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Teine-tor In reply to firerubydragon [2008-04-11 12:24:06 +0000 UTC]

^^

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ChhkzFan In reply to ??? [2008-03-23 07:15:33 +0000 UTC]

It's a really good fic... but....
SASUKE'S SUCH A BASTARD IN IT!!! *SOB* THIS MADE ME WANT TO CRY!!! IT ACTUALLY BROUGHT TEARS TO MY EYES!!!
then again... this is what Sakura gets... but... it's just too cruel still

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