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Published: 2007-08-17 06:36:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 25908; Favourites: 181; Downloads: 32
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Description Not for the faint hearted sasuke fangirls, may have a tiny spoiler.

“Sasuke-kun?” Sakura Haruno asked timidly as she opened the cell to Sasuke Uchiha’s cell. Ever day since Naruto brought Sasuke back Sakura has come into his cell and brought him food, drink and tried to talk to him.
As she knelt don’t before him and placed the tray of fresh ramen before her love, she stole a glance up into his black eyes shed dreamt about for years on end. That’s when he saw it in her eyes. Her sparkling green eyes shone so intensely with her love, her unyielding love, as his face dropped as he stared into her eyes he saw something he thought he would never see again, someone willing to do anything to help him, to protect him, to be with him.
The Uchiha smiled back at the blushing kunoichi and placed his hand on her chin, lifting it up so he could look her full in the face. Heat built up in his face as she moved closer to him. Every time they got close enough she would try to kiss him, and again she tried. For the first time in around 13 years he didn’t pull away.
He gasped the back of her neck and pulled her into him roughly. Fan girl after fan girl tried to glomped him again and again and after all this time, Sakura’s patience had worn off. In his tiny cell all there was, was a single mattress on the cold dusty floor with one single sheet, Sasuke pulled the young kunoichi onto of him as his tongue madly danced along side hers.
The young pink haired girl felt as though all her wishes had come true, all her day dreams, all her wishes, all her hopes and dreams, were now crashing down on her for this moment with her love. Sasuke twisted her around and began kissing down her neck, slyly pulling a kunai out from her belt.
Sasuke stopped kissing her and held the kunai at eye level then looked down at the horror struck girl. With a smirk he cut open her shirt and continued to kiss her body.

Hours later Sakura woke up holding the Uchiha prodigy in her arms, in pure bliss, their naked bodies entwined. She smiled at her love and reached over him to grab her watch on the ground beside him. As she leaned on him he turned into a puff of smoke, all that was left of him was a pillow. Tears filled her eyes, “ A substitution?” she cried as she jumped for her clothes and dressed in a hurry.
She reached her belt and realized her keys were gone Sasuke had used her.
She realized that she had just given her innocence to the only man, who could never love her. A condom was discarded on the floor next the mattress. Clear signs were every-were of what had happened between the two. As tears poured down her face she ran to the door and pulled on it madly but with no difference. She forced chakra into her hand and punched into the steel door. The room consisting of a chakra barrier only broke her wrist. She cried out in pain and fell back on the mattress. “I can’t believe what I did! I let him escape I cheated on Naruto and betrayed Konoha!” she screamed as she burst into uncontrollable sobs, ‘Naruto is coming,’ she thought with a hiccup as she looked at the door. Every morning Naruto would bring Sasuke breakfast, just like she always brought Sasuke dinner.
Her blonde boyfriend chose that moment to open the door to Sasuke’s cell. Sakura jumped to her feet and dove into his arms.
Naruto dropped the fired eggs and bacon he was carrying for Sasuke when Sakura jumped into his arms, her makeup was smudged and pushed around her face, he pulled her back from his to examine her properly “Sakura-chan? What hap-“ he stopped when he saw her properly, her shirt was cleanly cut down the front, she had hikkies around her neck and along her chest, not even ending when her skirt began had her navel, white stains were all along her skirt, and next to the bed a used condom wrapper was on the floor, the same brand Sakura kept in her wallet for when she was ‘married’.
Naruto let go of his girlfriend, dropping her onto the mattress before turning out of the cell to leave her there, he turned back at the weeping woman with an thick mask, hiding his emotions, before dropping a diamond ring on the ground in front of him, then opened the door for her to leave.
Gathering herself up she picked up the rest of her belongings, then her to be engagement ring. It was gold with lines of diamonds all around its base, the words ‘eternal love’ engraved on the inside. She put the ring into her pocket and ran from the Hokage tower, where Sasuke was jailed.
Sakura ran to the Hyuuga complex to find her friend Hinata. As she neared the training grounds of the Hyuuga estate she saw the young Hyuuga heiress talking to her ex boyfriend, Naruto.
“Hinata-Chan, could I talk with you?” Sakura chan asked her friend, avoiding looking at Naruto.
“Umm,” the Hyuuga mumbled looking back and forwards from Sakura and Naruto. After a small nudge from Naruto she stood and walked away from Naruto to talk with Sakura.
“Hinata-chan, please help me! I need to find Sasuke,” she begged grabbing Hinata’s shoulders, “he could be anywhere and I don’t have the time to search for him, please use your Byakugan to help me find him!” she begged the puzzled Hinata.
After a moment Hinata said the unthinkable, “no Sakura-chan,” after a little moment of playing with her fingers she continued, “you really hurt Naruto-kun, I can’t help you hurt him any further,” she said stepping out of Sakura’s grasp and looking anywhere but the pink haired ninja.
After a minute or so of gaping at Hinata, the shy Hyuuga that never said no, never was mean and was always helpful, “Hinata,” Hinata could help but notice the drop of the ‘chan’ “I know you’ve always loved Naruto, im sorry if I hurt you by dating him but I need to find Sasuke-kun for a different reason, please don’t do this,” Haruno Sakura begged.
Hinata’s eyes flared as the glared back at her friend for the first time, “true I’ve always felt for Naruto-KUN even when everyone hated him, including you Sakura! Don’t try to pretend with me that you loved Naruto, he loved you and I bet you didn’t even take his emotions into consideration when you slept with Sasuke! And don’t think im so naive to think you are not going to go find your beloved, Sasuke-kun,” the name she used an imitation of Sakura’s voice, “to re-enact last night, and destroy the last bit of sanity Naruto-kun still has after you broke his heart! I wont let you hurt Naruto-kun anymore, if you want to leave for the traitor Uchiha, then do it without my help,” Hinata ended furiously walking away from the young girl and sitting back with Naruto shaking.
Sakura was in shock, utter bewilderment that Hinata would snap so badly at her. She snapped out of her confusion and began to run once again on her search for Sasuke. She ran into the Konoha forest a couple of minutes away from the Hyuuga complex when her prey found her.
She was in a small clearing in the middle of the Konoha forest, Sasuke on the other side smirking at the distraught ninja. “Come back for seconds?” the arrogant Uchiha asked as he stepped towards her, “sorry but I wouldn’t bother,”
“You bastard!” she screamed pulling out a handful of shuriken’s, adding massive doses of chakra into them and throwing them at her supposed love. She never expected to see it, Sasuke’s face dropped as he was impaled but the ninja stars.
She stated forward when soft breath blew across her exposed neck as the Sasuke in front of her turned into a tree trunk, “the site look familiar lover?” he said from behind her tauntingly, “you couldn’t kill me even if you wanted, you didn’t even want to then,” he said turning her around.
A kunai was in hand as he twisted her around she placed it at his neck.
Sakura held the kunai firmly placed on Sasuke’s neck, his katana was pointed directly at her heart. She hated him for what he did to her, for ruining her life the way he did, but because she had loved him for all those years she couldn’t seem to move.
“All this time Sakura, and you still think I could love you?” Sasuke asked casually, “I could have any girl, in any village if I wanted, why would I go for the most desperate, unattractive girl that clung to me?” he asked the teary girl, poking her abnormally large forehead with his index finger, slightly containing his chakra, bruising her with little force “what on earth makes you think your special enough for me to love you? Or even like you?”
She shifted her weight and adjusted her kunai before saying softly, “Because I always loved you,” her hand beginning to shake.
“Well,” he continued with leaning forward into her kunai making a thin line of blood drip from his neck and Sakura loosened her grip on her weapon, Sasuke pressed his sward deeper into her clothes, “you wasted your emotions, I can’t love Sakura, I won’t love. And even if I could one day, I would never waste it on you,” he spat at her.
“If you hate me so much, why am I still alive as such a hindrance?”
Maliciously Sasuke swiftly swept forward, his sward driving into Sakura’s chest. With his trademark smirk he kissed her on the lips then pulled away from the just as quickly. “Why do you even bother?” he asked in his bored tone looking into the green eyes of the kunoichi.
“I-I l-loved“
“No,” Sasuke simply whispered as Sakura dropped her weapon, as always unable to injure him. With a final thrust he drove his sward further into her chest, until the hand he held at the handle was touching her chest.
Blood began to cascade from his sward. * Cough * the warm taste of metal began to fill in her mouth until it slid down the crevasses of her mouth until her hole chin was covered in blood. Sasuke lent towards her, whispering into her ear, “I never loved you, and no one ever loved you because you loved me. Now you will die, unloved… like me.” And the he lent back and swept his sward out of her chest and walked away as she fell to the ground, in a pool of her own blood.
With that he turned away from the dead girl and left Konoha.
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Comments: 454

firerubydragon In reply to ??? [2007-12-02 03:35:52 +0000 UTC]

lol

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Mimy1091 In reply to firerubydragon [2007-12-02 23:30:58 +0000 UTC]

.....really>_>

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firerubydragon In reply to Mimy1091 [2007-12-03 09:01:01 +0000 UTC]

its ok well ill think of something

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Mimy1091 In reply to firerubydragon [2007-12-03 23:58:54 +0000 UTC]

^///^ Thank You very much

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Emo-Kiddo-Stock In reply to ??? [2007-11-19 09:38:10 +0000 UTC]

it was really awesome
i'm so glad you killed sakura
i would have done it if you didn't
i hate that girl with such a passion
i think she's the most annoying creature on this earth
and i agree with you sasuke would have used her to escape i mean it's like a payback for all those years when she annoyed him.
really niceu deserve a prise

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firerubydragon In reply to Emo-Kiddo-Stock [2007-11-19 10:27:45 +0000 UTC]

thanx you, my thoughts exactly, i wouldnt have wrote it if i couldnt kill the b**ch

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loser-in-uniform In reply to ??? [2007-11-15 01:39:08 +0000 UTC]

wow.....that has to be one of the best (and most likely to happen) fanfics ive ever read. i hate it when sasusaku fanfics get all lovey dovey la di da di da. boring. but this was great

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firerubydragon In reply to loser-in-uniform [2007-11-16 23:16:18 +0000 UTC]

kool, im glad you liked it!
and thants why i wrote it, the hole lovey dovey crap gets old XD

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lilgherl In reply to ??? [2007-11-14 03:12:45 +0000 UTC]


sasuke'z a ass!!!!!!!!

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firerubydragon In reply to lilgherl [2007-11-14 09:07:09 +0000 UTC]

id like to think more or less... honest...

sorry

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PinkFairy14 In reply to ??? [2007-11-13 23:23:48 +0000 UTC]

That is so sad

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LittleDeviant3 In reply to ??? [2007-11-13 00:06:37 +0000 UTC]

*bows down to you* I absolutely love this. More than just about anything else I have ever read about Naruto.
I hate Sakura with a passion, the end where he killed her, was just beautiful.
*adds to favorites*

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firerubydragon In reply to LittleDeviant3 [2007-11-13 10:27:42 +0000 UTC]

wow, that is the sweetest thing ive ever herd, finally someone who dshares my passion lol i absolutly loved writing the end, i got butterflies with exitement XD im really glad you like dit, and thanks a bunch for your fave on it

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LittleDeviant3 In reply to firerubydragon [2007-11-13 20:12:11 +0000 UTC]

^_^
I like to make people happy.
You're welcome on the fave. But it was just such a great read, and when she found out he used the substitution on her, I was like "YES!!!!"
Cause in truth, I hate SasuSaku lovey dovey crap! In my opinion he would never like her because she is so freaking obsessed with him.
He deserves someone who isn't such a freak fangirl, (like Sakura).

I got butterflies too XD. I just wrote a little story with a character of my own killing Sakura, but it wasn't nearly as detailed as yours.

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firerubydragon In reply to LittleDeviant3 [2007-11-14 10:00:58 +0000 UTC]

lolz, thanx anyways, it is apiciated! when iwas writing it, i thought, "what would sasuke REALLY do? and the whole story came to mind XD
ive neever been a fa of sasusaku, i think they LOOK nice togethe,r but their persnalities make the pairing impossible!
im more of a fan of sasuhina or sasuten, really, but with sakura,, i dont think sasuke or naruto..

ooo and im so glad ive inspired you!(well i think i did XD) but it sounds interesting, ill have to read it!
i really dont like sakura
im really really glad you enjoyed my story so much XD i didnt expect nearly as many complements for this fic!!

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LittleDeviant3 In reply to firerubydragon [2007-11-14 21:40:43 +0000 UTC]

Well I believe Sasuke would REALLY murder her. No matter what anyone else thinks.
It takes her way too long to develop some courage in the show.
Sasuke needs someone who has a clue.
SasuHina is kinda nice, better than SasuSaku. But although, she does stutter a lot and she is really shy.
I think I would like them better as a coupld if they spoke more.
But indeed I do like the pairing more than him being with Sakura.

: ] Well you did inspire me in a way.
I wanna write another one where she gets murdered, perhaps I will make it more descriptive and bloody though, I want her to suffer with all of her annoying fangirl-ness.
I don't like her either!

Well you have all of my compliments. Just don't bother with anyone else who says otherwise.

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xteenuh102593 In reply to ??? [2007-10-27 15:38:36 +0000 UTC]

im crying...i never cry and im CRYING omg tht was amazing

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firerubydragon In reply to xteenuh102593 [2007-10-28 02:46:54 +0000 UTC]

i know im a bit like that as well,

im sorry i made you cry but umm thanx for the complement...

can i ask why your crying, yet still like it ??? lolz

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xteenuh102593 In reply to firerubydragon [2007-10-29 22:06:05 +0000 UTC]

ot makes th lasting affect of th story evn more awesome lol powerful ending lol

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firerubydragon In reply to xteenuh102593 [2007-10-30 09:06:38 +0000 UTC]

im glad you like it, i must admit im not getting as much hate mail as i thought i would, im actually quiete releaved XD

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xteenuh102593 In reply to firerubydragon [2007-10-29 22:05:41 +0000 UTC]

cause everyone loves a good tragety, well i do lol

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icyvfrost In reply to ??? [2007-10-27 04:59:19 +0000 UTC]

Can you write one about when she gets found and the feelings that come from that?

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firerubydragon In reply to icyvfrost [2007-10-27 05:09:28 +0000 UTC]

ooo... thatd be kool...
wow thanx i might just do that XD

thanx a bunch!

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pebblesdork In reply to ??? [2007-10-06 20:46:14 +0000 UTC]

i cried at the fact that naruto got crushed,pobresito
and i understand how u wanted sasuke to kill her and all,
but u were a little too harsh,
i mean, evan if he didnt like her, she is his past time friends and would never do that,
and yes i am a sasusaku fan and i agree with ur point of view, but i just dont know,
well i still think it was an awsome story, and evan though sasuke was an asshole, he was a hot asshole nevertheless =>

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firerubydragon In reply to pebblesdork [2007-10-08 11:13:29 +0000 UTC]

XD thanx! im glad you like it, and i understand why you se it as harsh, heck i thnk its harsh but i think thats why i wote it, ages of frusteration being thrown into one fanfic
i did the hole thing with anaruto to give hinata a chance to shine for her freinds and role model XD
i exaggeratted all their personalityies and made them over whatever they were orrigonally, (so i realised after an awsome commment on fanfiction.net) but i like it none the less.
i know why you dont like it alot, but i can see why you like it a little to
thanx heap for the comment XD

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pebblesdork In reply to firerubydragon [2007-10-08 14:52:40 +0000 UTC]

no no,
i do like it, a lot,
its realy dramatic,and i like those stuff,
and i dont always like reading sasusaku, i also like reading,
narusaku, naruhina, sasuhina, gaasaku, shikatema, shikaino, nejiten...the list goes on,
but wat i realy mean to say is,
that i'll read about any two people as long as its dramatic,
and ur story doesnt hav a couple(much)but i dont mind that,
its still dramatic, and i like it =>

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firerubydragon In reply to pebblesdork [2007-10-09 07:13:26 +0000 UTC]

lolz ok ok awsome! well in that case im glad you like it XD

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pebblesdork In reply to firerubydragon [2007-10-09 20:44:27 +0000 UTC]

np =>

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witchgirl4 In reply to ??? [2007-10-05 00:24:14 +0000 UTC]

make sequel

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firerubydragon In reply to witchgirl4 [2007-10-05 08:07:23 +0000 UTC]

lmao! umm with sakura dead i dont know if i can make a sequel, and like hell id bring her back to life
but im really glad you like it XD

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SymbioteGangsta In reply to ??? [2007-09-30 03:50:25 +0000 UTC]

i dont know why but i laughed when he totally used her lolz XD i odnt know why tthough cuz i said to mself that b!tch! how dare he use Sakura then leave cuz well i'm die hard fan of SasuSaku and i odnt know i laughed so this is so AWESOME!!!!!! CONGRATS ^_^

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firerubydragon In reply to SymbioteGangsta [2007-09-30 05:49:04 +0000 UTC]

lolz, wow thanx i laughed too! lolz, i think it might just be the cercumstances that make it funny to those who dont get offended alot but thanx, im really glad you liked it XD

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SymbioteGangsta In reply to firerubydragon [2007-09-30 05:53:52 +0000 UTC]

no prob! yeah my friend might cry and start cussing cuz she wants SasuSaku to happen so badly lolz XD well i do to but i dont get offened easily ^_^ such funny stuff

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firerubydragon In reply to SymbioteGangsta [2007-09-30 06:06:26 +0000 UTC]

lolz, yer ive had quite a few people abusing me about this so far

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SymbioteGangsta In reply to firerubydragon [2007-09-30 16:58:36 +0000 UTC]

abuse of what!? O_O

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firerubydragon In reply to SymbioteGangsta [2007-10-01 05:04:16 +0000 UTC]

lolz some people think im crewl, well ive only got one or two bad comments on here, on fanfiction.net i think someone called me heartless but i dont really mind i think its funni XD

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SymbioteGangsta In reply to firerubydragon [2007-10-01 06:33:16 +0000 UTC]

lolz heartless yeah that sounds like something my friend would say to you XP anyway dont mind them! they take things to seriously they need to lay back and chill! lmao

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firerubydragon In reply to SymbioteGangsta [2007-10-01 07:37:05 +0000 UTC]

lamao yer, out of all the fanfic ive read ive only flipped out at one! but yer i dont mind, i wrote it because i thought it was plausable so i dont really care if other people like it

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SymbioteGangsta In reply to firerubydragon [2007-10-01 21:47:53 +0000 UTC]

okay >_> lolz

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sasusaku4ever009 In reply to ??? [2007-09-09 14:52:31 +0000 UTC]

that was horrible!!!!!! how mean and low can you get???

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firerubydragon In reply to sasusaku4ever009 [2007-09-10 06:08:44 +0000 UTC]

lolz, well i warned you at the begining didnt i? a fanfiction is an authors veiw of a senario they wish to happen, i think this could happen and i wrote it, and just to be extra nice, i wrote a warning at the begining warning all sasuke fangirls...

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narutogirlfriend In reply to ??? [2007-09-06 02:02:35 +0000 UTC]

wow didnt see that comin

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firerubydragon In reply to narutogirlfriend [2007-09-06 08:31:02 +0000 UTC]

lolz, glad i got that reaction!

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s4kur4h4run0 In reply to ??? [2007-08-26 19:18:50 +0000 UTC]

aargghhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! -sobs- he would never be that mean!...would he?? -looks uncertain-

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firerubydragon In reply to s4kur4h4run0 [2007-08-27 11:16:30 +0000 UTC]

hehehe see you dont know these things and if you think about saskue's charicter, he verry well could be that mean. sorry to be the barer of bad news.

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tptzre In reply to ??? [2007-08-19 18:52:13 +0000 UTC]

actually that was rather refreshing. I cant stand some of the fanfics where they make Sasuke into this guy who just becomes good, marries sakura, and remakes his clan. blec. very good fan fic *claps hands* besides all storys need some sort of evil, or antagonist, or for something bad to happen, its just boring to read a story when every thing is all La-de-da and happy, makes for a very boring read. Once again great story

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firerubydragon In reply to tptzre [2007-08-20 06:57:38 +0000 UTC]

wow thanx heaps! i was really expecting hate mail i did this because of the same thing, after seeing alot more of sasuke i realise, like hell there is going to be a happily ever after with him and sakura! he'd prolly use her to escaape then kill her, so i wrote a fanfic about it! really glad you like it XD XD

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darker-deep-down In reply to ??? [2007-08-17 12:54:11 +0000 UTC]

no its okay, personaly i like sasusaku but you have a point . i will hold sasusaku as my faves but only if he comes back. also go to my page and read my jounal por favor

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firerubydragon In reply to darker-deep-down [2007-08-17 23:51:00 +0000 UTC]

i dont expect many people to like my sasusaku but thanx for sayying its ooright i think that might be the best comment im going to get for it lolz... i read your jornal and commented to

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raja-uchiruno8 In reply to firerubydragon [2010-12-17 08:49:43 +0000 UTC]

you do watch fairytail???
wow...me too...i really like it..

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