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Published: 2007-08-17 06:36:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 25908; Favourites: 181; Downloads: 32
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Description Not for the faint hearted sasuke fangirls, may have a tiny spoiler.

“Sasuke-kun?” Sakura Haruno asked timidly as she opened the cell to Sasuke Uchiha’s cell. Ever day since Naruto brought Sasuke back Sakura has come into his cell and brought him food, drink and tried to talk to him.
As she knelt don’t before him and placed the tray of fresh ramen before her love, she stole a glance up into his black eyes shed dreamt about for years on end. That’s when he saw it in her eyes. Her sparkling green eyes shone so intensely with her love, her unyielding love, as his face dropped as he stared into her eyes he saw something he thought he would never see again, someone willing to do anything to help him, to protect him, to be with him.
The Uchiha smiled back at the blushing kunoichi and placed his hand on her chin, lifting it up so he could look her full in the face. Heat built up in his face as she moved closer to him. Every time they got close enough she would try to kiss him, and again she tried. For the first time in around 13 years he didn’t pull away.
He gasped the back of her neck and pulled her into him roughly. Fan girl after fan girl tried to glomped him again and again and after all this time, Sakura’s patience had worn off. In his tiny cell all there was, was a single mattress on the cold dusty floor with one single sheet, Sasuke pulled the young kunoichi onto of him as his tongue madly danced along side hers.
The young pink haired girl felt as though all her wishes had come true, all her day dreams, all her wishes, all her hopes and dreams, were now crashing down on her for this moment with her love. Sasuke twisted her around and began kissing down her neck, slyly pulling a kunai out from her belt.
Sasuke stopped kissing her and held the kunai at eye level then looked down at the horror struck girl. With a smirk he cut open her shirt and continued to kiss her body.

Hours later Sakura woke up holding the Uchiha prodigy in her arms, in pure bliss, their naked bodies entwined. She smiled at her love and reached over him to grab her watch on the ground beside him. As she leaned on him he turned into a puff of smoke, all that was left of him was a pillow. Tears filled her eyes, “ A substitution?” she cried as she jumped for her clothes and dressed in a hurry.
She reached her belt and realized her keys were gone Sasuke had used her.
She realized that she had just given her innocence to the only man, who could never love her. A condom was discarded on the floor next the mattress. Clear signs were every-were of what had happened between the two. As tears poured down her face she ran to the door and pulled on it madly but with no difference. She forced chakra into her hand and punched into the steel door. The room consisting of a chakra barrier only broke her wrist. She cried out in pain and fell back on the mattress. “I can’t believe what I did! I let him escape I cheated on Naruto and betrayed Konoha!” she screamed as she burst into uncontrollable sobs, ‘Naruto is coming,’ she thought with a hiccup as she looked at the door. Every morning Naruto would bring Sasuke breakfast, just like she always brought Sasuke dinner.
Her blonde boyfriend chose that moment to open the door to Sasuke’s cell. Sakura jumped to her feet and dove into his arms.
Naruto dropped the fired eggs and bacon he was carrying for Sasuke when Sakura jumped into his arms, her makeup was smudged and pushed around her face, he pulled her back from his to examine her properly “Sakura-chan? What hap-“ he stopped when he saw her properly, her shirt was cleanly cut down the front, she had hikkies around her neck and along her chest, not even ending when her skirt began had her navel, white stains were all along her skirt, and next to the bed a used condom wrapper was on the floor, the same brand Sakura kept in her wallet for when she was ‘married’.
Naruto let go of his girlfriend, dropping her onto the mattress before turning out of the cell to leave her there, he turned back at the weeping woman with an thick mask, hiding his emotions, before dropping a diamond ring on the ground in front of him, then opened the door for her to leave.
Gathering herself up she picked up the rest of her belongings, then her to be engagement ring. It was gold with lines of diamonds all around its base, the words ‘eternal love’ engraved on the inside. She put the ring into her pocket and ran from the Hokage tower, where Sasuke was jailed.
Sakura ran to the Hyuuga complex to find her friend Hinata. As she neared the training grounds of the Hyuuga estate she saw the young Hyuuga heiress talking to her ex boyfriend, Naruto.
“Hinata-Chan, could I talk with you?” Sakura chan asked her friend, avoiding looking at Naruto.
“Umm,” the Hyuuga mumbled looking back and forwards from Sakura and Naruto. After a small nudge from Naruto she stood and walked away from Naruto to talk with Sakura.
“Hinata-chan, please help me! I need to find Sasuke,” she begged grabbing Hinata’s shoulders, “he could be anywhere and I don’t have the time to search for him, please use your Byakugan to help me find him!” she begged the puzzled Hinata.
After a moment Hinata said the unthinkable, “no Sakura-chan,” after a little moment of playing with her fingers she continued, “you really hurt Naruto-kun, I can’t help you hurt him any further,” she said stepping out of Sakura’s grasp and looking anywhere but the pink haired ninja.
After a minute or so of gaping at Hinata, the shy Hyuuga that never said no, never was mean and was always helpful, “Hinata,” Hinata could help but notice the drop of the ‘chan’ “I know you’ve always loved Naruto, im sorry if I hurt you by dating him but I need to find Sasuke-kun for a different reason, please don’t do this,” Haruno Sakura begged.
Hinata’s eyes flared as the glared back at her friend for the first time, “true I’ve always felt for Naruto-KUN even when everyone hated him, including you Sakura! Don’t try to pretend with me that you loved Naruto, he loved you and I bet you didn’t even take his emotions into consideration when you slept with Sasuke! And don’t think im so naive to think you are not going to go find your beloved, Sasuke-kun,” the name she used an imitation of Sakura’s voice, “to re-enact last night, and destroy the last bit of sanity Naruto-kun still has after you broke his heart! I wont let you hurt Naruto-kun anymore, if you want to leave for the traitor Uchiha, then do it without my help,” Hinata ended furiously walking away from the young girl and sitting back with Naruto shaking.
Sakura was in shock, utter bewilderment that Hinata would snap so badly at her. She snapped out of her confusion and began to run once again on her search for Sasuke. She ran into the Konoha forest a couple of minutes away from the Hyuuga complex when her prey found her.
She was in a small clearing in the middle of the Konoha forest, Sasuke on the other side smirking at the distraught ninja. “Come back for seconds?” the arrogant Uchiha asked as he stepped towards her, “sorry but I wouldn’t bother,”
“You bastard!” she screamed pulling out a handful of shuriken’s, adding massive doses of chakra into them and throwing them at her supposed love. She never expected to see it, Sasuke’s face dropped as he was impaled but the ninja stars.
She stated forward when soft breath blew across her exposed neck as the Sasuke in front of her turned into a tree trunk, “the site look familiar lover?” he said from behind her tauntingly, “you couldn’t kill me even if you wanted, you didn’t even want to then,” he said turning her around.
A kunai was in hand as he twisted her around she placed it at his neck.
Sakura held the kunai firmly placed on Sasuke’s neck, his katana was pointed directly at her heart. She hated him for what he did to her, for ruining her life the way he did, but because she had loved him for all those years she couldn’t seem to move.
“All this time Sakura, and you still think I could love you?” Sasuke asked casually, “I could have any girl, in any village if I wanted, why would I go for the most desperate, unattractive girl that clung to me?” he asked the teary girl, poking her abnormally large forehead with his index finger, slightly containing his chakra, bruising her with little force “what on earth makes you think your special enough for me to love you? Or even like you?”
She shifted her weight and adjusted her kunai before saying softly, “Because I always loved you,” her hand beginning to shake.
“Well,” he continued with leaning forward into her kunai making a thin line of blood drip from his neck and Sakura loosened her grip on her weapon, Sasuke pressed his sward deeper into her clothes, “you wasted your emotions, I can’t love Sakura, I won’t love. And even if I could one day, I would never waste it on you,” he spat at her.
“If you hate me so much, why am I still alive as such a hindrance?”
Maliciously Sasuke swiftly swept forward, his sward driving into Sakura’s chest. With his trademark smirk he kissed her on the lips then pulled away from the just as quickly. “Why do you even bother?” he asked in his bored tone looking into the green eyes of the kunoichi.
“I-I l-loved“
“No,” Sasuke simply whispered as Sakura dropped her weapon, as always unable to injure him. With a final thrust he drove his sward further into her chest, until the hand he held at the handle was touching her chest.
Blood began to cascade from his sward. * Cough * the warm taste of metal began to fill in her mouth until it slid down the crevasses of her mouth until her hole chin was covered in blood. Sasuke lent towards her, whispering into her ear, “I never loved you, and no one ever loved you because you loved me. Now you will die, unloved… like me.” And the he lent back and swept his sward out of her chest and walked away as she fell to the ground, in a pool of her own blood.
With that he turned away from the dead girl and left Konoha.
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Comments: 454

AkatsukiGirl27 In reply to ??? [2008-03-22 20:16:48 +0000 UTC]

It made me sad................... I was in a happy mood but now I'm sad, its was good though.

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SasuSaku4eva88 In reply to ??? [2008-03-18 23:08:23 +0000 UTC]

BRAVO! I'm not mad at you, that was awesome! Also,(I know that SasuSaku would NEVER happen) but it is still my favorite pairing. Anyway, NICE JOB!

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sasukesakura20 In reply to ??? [2008-03-08 03:13:55 +0000 UTC]

this is so sad......GREAT JOB!![link]
Sadness
:thumb62528026:

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lilypadwaters In reply to ??? [2008-03-04 03:39:37 +0000 UTC]

this was good it was bound to happen right

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lilypadwaters In reply to lilypadwaters [2008-03-07 00:17:37 +0000 UTC]

your welcome it was great

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firerubydragon In reply to lilypadwaters [2008-03-06 05:54:51 +0000 UTC]

of corse it was bound to happen, and im glad you like it

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Butterflier00 In reply to ??? [2008-01-26 01:08:54 +0000 UTC]

I've never read so much conflict in my short life.

*Thumbs Up*

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firerubydragon In reply to Butterflier00 [2008-01-27 11:57:28 +0000 UTC]

lolz, then my job here is done

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MILLYCHAN In reply to ??? [2008-01-24 04:00:16 +0000 UTC]

i say this to alot of people but dont take it personaly...UR A BITCH.....but then i add...i love you and theres nothing you can do about it...its my new thing yo!!!

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firerubydragon In reply to MILLYCHAN [2008-01-27 12:01:29 +0000 UTC]

lmao, im glad to be a bitch you love
lolz no probs no hard feelings aye

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MILLYCHAN In reply to firerubydragon [2008-01-27 23:08:53 +0000 UTC]

i loe being allies with bitches cuz u never know when somestupid idiot is being a worse bitch to u and u can use ur allie bitch powers... BITCHINGUN!!!!!!! hell yeshhh ahhahaa

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firerubydragon In reply to MILLYCHAN [2008-01-28 13:10:26 +0000 UTC]

so true, but i dont need bitch allies, im enough bitch to protect my non bitchy firends no one i know is bitcher then me when im pissed off.

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MILLYCHAN In reply to firerubydragon [2008-01-28 21:40:39 +0000 UTC]

HENCE its good for ME to get bitch allies cuz i suck ass at arguments yo....ahhaa

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firerubydragon In reply to MILLYCHAN [2008-01-29 09:48:36 +0000 UTC]

lolz ahh ok that makes perfect sence

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MILLYCHAN In reply to firerubydragon [2008-01-30 00:09:58 +0000 UTC]

chiaa.....AHHAHAA

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sexySAKURAx In reply to ??? [2008-01-15 20:48:55 +0000 UTC]

You really like to fuck-up the ending of a story you know that and it was good until the last 14 lines
if only you ended it without Sakura dying it would have been great but hey it is you'r story you can fuck it up if you like but who would read it! hahahaha!

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firerubydragon In reply to sexySAKURAx [2008-01-21 11:58:38 +0000 UTC]

lolz i dont know if thats a complement or an insult, but either way thanx. i knew people would hate the ending, but i did it anyway because i loved the ending! id always wante dit to happen in a story and i just got sick of waiting to find one so i wrote one myself. and i love it.

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3startemari [2008-01-08 00:13:01 +0000 UTC]

...wow
ending surprised me to say the least...
I do like sasusaku, but this story makes so much sense!
It's all sooo much more hard and realistic than most sasusaku fans would like it to get...
welll, quite dramatic, and it's good too!

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firerubydragon In reply to 3startemari [2008-01-08 11:14:43 +0000 UTC]

wow, im glad you see my warped logic in this story XD i had a ball writing this because this is what i thought would make the most scence, so im glad you agree with me

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Sasuke4Eva619 In reply to ??? [2008-01-03 07:40:38 +0000 UTC]

That was horrible!!! ok ok it wasnt that bad lol

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firerubydragon In reply to Sasuke4Eva619 [2008-01-03 11:25:19 +0000 UTC]

lol? thanx for your comment and im glad you liked it, i think :S

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Linel In reply to ??? [2008-01-03 07:32:54 +0000 UTC]

Your story was refreshingly different, really standing out from the other fanfics. I love how you wrote w/o caring what other people thought of it. Great job.

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firerubydragon In reply to Linel [2008-01-03 11:26:10 +0000 UTC]

wow thanks. im glad you liekd the story and thanks for your complement
thanks again

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iluvsasusaku365411 In reply to ??? [2007-12-27 14:13:18 +0000 UTC]

u made sasuke too mean and i should say that cause he is my bf so he would never kill anyone he love s and he does loves sakuura so thats just sad.




p.s. but goos quality though

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firerubydragon In reply to iluvsasusaku365411 [2007-12-28 01:50:12 +0000 UTC]

lolz, well your entitled to your opinion as much as i am.

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GaarasxSandxCookie In reply to ??? [2007-12-21 09:49:37 +0000 UTC]

omg i hate sakura but i feel sorry for sakura in this!!

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firerubydragon In reply to GaarasxSandxCookie [2007-12-22 02:02:38 +0000 UTC]

true, well thats understandable

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Babyluc In reply to ??? [2007-12-09 21:38:50 +0000 UTC]

TT TT so sad but so good!

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firerubydragon In reply to Babyluc [2007-12-11 04:32:15 +0000 UTC]

glad you liked it

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azu0o In reply to ??? [2007-12-08 21:49:50 +0000 UTC]

your story was sad but I enjoyed it anyway. I love sasusaku so much and I hope that nothing similar to this would happen...
even though I adore sasusaku as a couple it's had for me to believe that they would ever be together...

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firerubydragon In reply to azu0o [2007-12-09 12:48:31 +0000 UTC]

ah ok, im glad you liked it even if you are a sasusaku fan.

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p1j5a In reply to ??? [2007-12-04 16:59:20 +0000 UTC]

it was horrible!! no im just kidding ya i like sasusaku and all but i dont think sasuke would swallow up his pride so easily so anything could be a possibility and plus im not easily offended by anti-sasusaku cuz i noe everyone has a right to picture their own endings and scenarios and such, thats what fanfics are for right????

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firerubydragon In reply to p1j5a [2007-12-04 22:44:34 +0000 UTC]

exactly and i guess this is kinda my way of trying to get other people to realise that fact as well,
im actually suprised at how many people think that all fanfics about certain people should all follow guidelines. i used to, but it gets dull, its good to have random things happen in fanfics and it and with a BANG!

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p1j5a In reply to firerubydragon [2008-04-01 15:55:23 +0000 UTC]

yea and besides we can't control how it really happens so for all the people out there who takes these things too seriously, GET OVER IT!!......."be a fan not a fanatic" i hear that alot and i agree. just follow along on the manga or anime and enjoy watching it.

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Ria0127 In reply to ??? [2007-11-28 01:53:45 +0000 UTC]

Ding dong the wicked witch is dead! :]
I hate Sakura. And I'm glad to see her dead!
I can honestly see Sasuke using her too. You did great <3

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firerubydragon In reply to Ria0127 [2007-11-28 10:59:30 +0000 UTC]

glad u liked it, i had a ball writing the end!

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Mimy1091 In reply to ??? [2007-11-19 19:49:19 +0000 UTC]

i dont like how sakura died but i have to say tha fan fic was AWSOME! great work

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firerubydragon In reply to Mimy1091 [2007-11-24 10:39:17 +0000 UTC]

thanx, but do you mind if i ask what you didnt like?

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Mimy1091 In reply to firerubydragon [2007-11-25 21:42:01 +0000 UTC]

..umm how do I say tHis In English....................mmm.....The Fact That Sasuke make Fun of Her ... and All... But really it was a Nice Fan Fic ^_^

oh and sorry if there's something wrong Im not Good At English

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Mimy1091 In reply to firerubydragon [2007-11-25 21:41:32 +0000 UTC]

..umm how do I say tHis In English....................mmm.....The Fact That Sasuke make Fun of Her ... and All... But really it was a Nice Fan Fic ^_^

oh and sorry if there's something wrong Im not Good At English

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firerubydragon In reply to Mimy1091 [2007-11-26 22:38:46 +0000 UTC]

ahh ok, thats ok, your english is probabily better than mine.
i guess your right about her death, but that was caused by alot of built up annoyance at sakura and sasusaku the pairing.

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Mimy1091 In reply to firerubydragon [2007-11-26 22:45:20 +0000 UTC]

sorry if I ofend you is just that Im A sasusaku fan and I dont like them to be sperated ...

But looking at it not with fan eyes but with talent eyes you do have alot of talent and I like it ^-^

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firerubydragon In reply to Mimy1091 [2007-11-27 06:35:04 +0000 UTC]

its ok, im not offended in any way, im really glad you like my work and think im a talented writer!
i knew when i worte it not many people would like my story or the entire thing.
but im really glad you did like what you liked of it

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Mimy1091 In reply to firerubydragon [2007-11-27 23:07:44 +0000 UTC]

I onestly dont really know I just Love it you Have a AWSOME way with word ... we I read it ... it feel so really

I Love it Really .......

Can you make a nother one ...?

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firerubydragon In reply to Mimy1091 [2007-11-28 08:46:22 +0000 UTC]

wow, im really glad you liked it so much! i am in the proces of writing a few few more but im just alittle slow at the moment
again, thank you for your kind words, its great to know you like my sotries so much

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Mimy1091 In reply to firerubydragon [2007-11-28 20:42:25 +0000 UTC]

Your Welcome i cant wait to read more ^-^

can you make one for me???

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firerubydragon In reply to Mimy1091 [2007-11-29 09:05:16 +0000 UTC]

ie started heaps already, but what did you have in mind?

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Mimy1091 In reply to firerubydragon [2007-11-29 21:05:04 +0000 UTC]

onesly I have no Ide

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firerubydragon In reply to Mimy1091 [2007-11-29 22:06:57 +0000 UTC]

ahh ok, well um if you think of something gimmie a yell, im always up for good fan fic ideas!

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Mimy1091 In reply to firerubydragon [2007-11-30 18:23:48 +0000 UTC]

Im not Good Wiht That .... V_V

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