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Published: 2004-07-12 17:27:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 55; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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I cannot control my mindI know not what I do
Feelings scream
Tears stream down my face
Weapon in hand,
Do I dare?
Feeling contagious,
Do I dare to care?
This is a funeral
for the person who is controlled by logic
The requiem spills words so bitter
for someone so sweet
Losing a battle of Heart Vs Mind
Quick make your move
This army of reason is fleeting.
Moving kings and queens,
Hearts and souls
I’ll trade you this one for that one
These are black market relationships
And these are black hearts competing with
one girl and one fate
Resistance is futile
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Comments: 4
abyssmalwind [2004-08-11 00:45:39 +0000 UTC]
Wow. I love your usage of question in poetry. And the ending, it's really chilling. What a lovely poem!
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flutter-of-wings In reply to abyssmalwind [2004-08-12 19:57:41 +0000 UTC]
awww thank you very much! ^_^ what a lovely person!
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flutter-of-wings In reply to abyssmalwind [2004-08-12 20:02:35 +0000 UTC]
anytime, and thank you!
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