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Published: 2005-05-30 14:22:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 130; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 7
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Description Touch,
the idle way to sympathise
with the girl whose
eyes are red as stoplights,
and whose voice is choked
by the hand, to which belonged the fingers
which were once laced with hers.
And for all of the times
that he called her his saviour,
he never really ran his fingers
through her hair with the intention
of untangling all of her knots
but contrariwise –
to tangle himself up in her locks.
This way, no matter what he drags her through
she’ll never be able to shake him off.

Dig deep down,
through the thin layers of skin,
- which barely provide a cover for her bones
let alone provide any sort of insulation -
to a place where the tiny hairs of her arms
(which are reaching toward the sky)
can no longer be felt.
Don’t be afraid to touch her
bones, as white as snow
and just as dense.
Take these daisy seeds
and plant them there
stand back and watch her grow.

Look at her now
would you ever dare touch such a thing?
With twisting vines
protruding from
twisted veins.
Beautiful blossom
overshadowing
blossoming pain.
One with any knowledge of sentiment
would never even dream
of infatuating such chaos,
yet you insist on carrying
your daisy chainsaw where ever you go
all set to cut her down
whenever she grows.
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Comments: 8

xdeusx [2005-07-30 13:26:38 +0000 UTC]

thats like the style of writing I used to read for english class in high school. Very nice. Here's chalenge, write a powerful poem in six lines.

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flutter-of-wings In reply to xdeusx [2005-07-30 19:20:17 +0000 UTC]

thanks very much :heart
hehe bit of a tough one, but it's been done before so I'll give it a shot! x

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fragilemacabre [2005-05-31 00:01:55 +0000 UTC]

A little too redolent of Bright Eyes.

But I'm feeling happy.

So a fave for you.

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forestmelandarke [2005-05-30 20:03:33 +0000 UTC]

...i wish i could write like this...its just beautiful. I won't try to describe it, beacause i don't think my words would do it justice. Also like the nod to Daisy Chainsaw !

xxx

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flutter-of-wings In reply to forestmelandarke [2005-05-31 10:05:56 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much for all of your kind words i can't tell you how much they mean to me

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forestmelandarke In reply to flutter-of-wings [2005-05-31 10:11:38 +0000 UTC]

my pleasure

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xCatchMyFallx [2005-05-30 15:14:34 +0000 UTC]

you are such an amazing writer

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flutter-of-wings In reply to xCatchMyFallx [2005-05-30 16:33:02 +0000 UTC]

awh thank you! that means so much to me, and thanks for the also

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