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Published: 2004-07-29 19:15:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 85; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 7
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Baby Doll put on your dressThere’s a heart inside your chest
Cut it out
Now you’re a mess
What a shame
You’ve spoilt yourself again
You’re all skin and bones
Sticky palms
You’re a nervous wreck
It’s a sign of weakness
But this is as good as you’ll get
You’re slowly learning
High off the fumes of burning skin
We’re all numb in here
Dull with contentment
Sending our prayers in
Come into our hearts
You’re as welcome as a fatal mistake
It’s time you told yourself that lie
The one you’ll long to take back
We accept the fact that guilt spreads like a cancer
Now you talk only in vowels,
with a bruised and bloody jaw
Now you can’t tell anyone, can you?
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Comments: 13
That's amazing Em, you've got a great yarn *giggles* sorry I couldn't resist!
But joking aside, really brilliant writing, keep it up!
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hehehe! thank you sweet pea
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Baby Doll put on your dress
There’s a heart inside your chest
Cut it out
Now you’re a mess
What a shame
You’ve spoilt yourself again
WOw the first stanza just sort of blowed me away just amazing hunny really well written i like how it doesnt all ryme just all odd but perfect just amazing your writng has taken a step up was allways really good but this piece i adore lovely work.
*Kisses*
Lily.
XOXOX
Take care hunny bee
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yeeeee *is overwhelmed* thank you so much sweetie! your words mean a lot to me
take care
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Your very welcome hunny bee amazing work deserves much attention and Love.
Always hoping your well.
XOXOXO
*kisses*
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wow, i love this. especially the stanza:
High off the fumes of burning skin
We’re all numb in here
Dull with contentment
Sending our prayers in
Come into our hearts
You’re as welcome as a fatal mistake
i just love the concept...
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thanks
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