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Published: 2005-09-16 10:29:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 133; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 11
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It stirs pins and needles in your feet,gradually rises up your legs
and glides over the curvatures of your spine,
pouring over your bruised body like liquid silk.
Slowly It creeps in-between your shoulder blades
and climbs your neck,
leaving behind a trail of petrified hairs and perturbed skin.
Imagine yourself in a horror movie.
You are the clueless victim who ran to hide in your upstairs bedroom.
It is the crazed axe-murderer with a hunger for death.
Your body is the staircase.
It crashes against nerves,
and tatters skin
before running nervous fingertips across scar tissue,
as if It were almost pleased to find a flaw
on your seemingly unspoiled body.
During a serious of collisions with your teeth,
It scrapes at the enamel,
tearing your lips as it hurtles against your mouth.
You would not be mistaken if you could detect a silent laughter during this destruction.
Before is begins to leak out of your veins,
It stares into your eyes
as if it were in competition with your favourite beauty.
And argues with previous injuries,
like a pair of burn victims comparing scars.
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Comments: 13
flutter-of-wings In reply to xdeusx [2005-10-30 20:10:21 +0000 UTC]
Thank you ever so much!
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flutter-of-wings In reply to Jem16 [2005-09-18 10:51:08 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much my dear. I'm glad you liked it!
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flutter-of-wings In reply to xCatchMyFallx [2005-09-17 08:34:40 +0000 UTC]
Thank you ever so much my dear! And thanks for the
I can't tell you how much it means to me
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Chizbe [2005-09-16 11:26:18 +0000 UTC]
oooo, this is very good. Langguage and imagery , and yeh, vurry nice
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flutter-of-wings In reply to Chizbe [2005-09-16 11:38:20 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it
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Silvarith [2005-09-16 10:34:42 +0000 UTC]
oh my goshness...beautiful poem out of this nasty feeling/ state of felt you are.
I hope you get better...and feel fine again...
i will watch you closely for now. one poem is enough to convince me of what i want to find out
Me likes...me keeps
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flutter-of-wings In reply to Silvarith [2005-09-16 10:40:20 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much dear. It means a lot to me. Also, thanks for the fav and the devwatch
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buttonater [2005-09-16 10:34:03 +0000 UTC]
oh WOW. i absolutely love the imagery, the tone, the mood, the flow, everything. this is sensational work.
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flutter-of-wings In reply to buttonater [2005-09-16 10:35:05 +0000 UTC]
Thank you ever so much!
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