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flutter-of-wings — Life's No Storybook
Published: 2004-06-10 20:58:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 173; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 9
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Description Steel nerves, charming words
I always get what you deserve
Every fault, every flaw
Never belongs to you

Girls sing,
Words spin
Please melt the plastic I’m coated in
What good is the mind
When thoughts are background noise?

Can I dress this mess in flames?
Burn the mistakes,
Stop these games
Decorate your wounds with salt
Kiss and heal all the scars
Create a universe made of candy and bliss

God made,
God saved,
God has the power to take away
Toxic chemicals and rain
That’s what dreams are made of

Would you photograph my world?
A million stars,
A million girls
Pollute my dreams with sick obsessions
Find sleeping beauty and touch her skin
Wake her up to live happily ever after

Think now,
Think fast,
Can you stop living in the past?
I’ll take my time
The last one to cross the finish line
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Comments: 21

Suffering-in-silence [2004-07-14 16:55:32 +0000 UTC]

its so pretty!!!
I love it
xxx

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flutter-of-wings In reply to Suffering-in-silence [2004-07-15 18:25:01 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!!

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Suffering-in-silence In reply to flutter-of-wings [2004-07-15 20:13:13 +0000 UTC]

no problem
xxx

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chamelious [2004-07-11 18:54:15 +0000 UTC]

This is excellent, really really good. ^_^

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flutter-of-wings In reply to chamelious [2004-07-12 17:08:44 +0000 UTC]

thank you!! *smooches* and thanky for the devwatch

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meandermind [2004-06-27 13:34:43 +0000 UTC]

this is so amazing. the rythm, the depth, the words...

Girls sing,
Words spin
Please melt the plastic I’m coated in

= my favourite lines. but the whole thing is just fantastic!

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flutter-of-wings In reply to meandermind [2004-06-27 17:33:17 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much
have a lurvly day

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panda-eyes [2004-06-11 15:26:44 +0000 UTC]

BRILLIANT!

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flutter-of-wings In reply to panda-eyes [2004-06-11 19:00:39 +0000 UTC]

fankooo mah darling

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sundayschild [2004-06-11 04:50:31 +0000 UTC]

god i love the rythm its just like every verse reads really well untill the last line, which is a bit longer, and so its sounds really quite hectic or something. Its really awesome emmaaaaa you are shooper good!

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flutter-of-wings In reply to sundayschild [2004-06-11 12:06:17 +0000 UTC]

yeee thank you sweetie!!!

i'm thinking about writing poems for a few of my friends....*ponders* shall do one especially for you

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sundayschild In reply to flutter-of-wings [2004-06-11 15:06:23 +0000 UTC]

awhhhhhh wow that would be so cool!

xxxxxxxxxx

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fragilemacabre [2004-06-10 21:49:56 +0000 UTC]

OMG I loooove you.


Go BE and Thursday.

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flutter-of-wings In reply to fragilemacabre [2004-06-11 12:07:44 +0000 UTC]

loooooove you to!

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alabamawhirly [2004-06-10 21:24:41 +0000 UTC]

not all of it fitted imo but its good and i like i always get what you deserve hehehe so kool i like

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flutter-of-wings In reply to alabamawhirly [2004-06-11 12:09:10 +0000 UTC]

thanky mah darling not all of it was meant to fit though

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alabamawhirly In reply to flutter-of-wings [2004-06-11 12:16:20 +0000 UTC]

okies kool i just like rhyming becoz i dunno lol i just do

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Rupt-Egg [2004-06-10 21:01:52 +0000 UTC]

oooooh, prettyful...yes I must say very prettyful indeed! I like! I like!

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flutter-of-wings In reply to Rupt-Egg [2004-06-10 21:10:53 +0000 UTC]

yeee thank you very much!

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darklost [2004-06-10 21:01:29 +0000 UTC]

i really like this piece, its very insightful

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flutter-of-wings In reply to darklost [2004-06-10 21:09:34 +0000 UTC]

thanks!!!

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