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Published: 2004-06-11 19:27:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 142; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 21
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Description This room is filled with tension
My heart is in my mouth
Your heart is on your sleeve
Conversation consists of lip biting and nail chewing
Staring at the floor but there’s no words there
No prompts.
No script.
No noise.

Your hand rests on my leg
Trying hard to hold me – or are you
Trying hard to hold back
Body language is unclear and thoughts are mixed
Full to the brim with anxiety and about to overflow
Lights.
Camera.
Action.

Reality is lost in heavy breathing
There is no right or wrong
This is all or nothing
And you’re taking everything and I’m taking you away
Soft whispers are the lyrics flowing to the pulse of a hopeful heart
One track
One mind
Two sets of skin

Two bodies laced together
Your touch makes me panic
And your kiss is planted on my neck
Slowly moving further down
This breathing has gotten too loud and we’re taking each other higher
Heat spreads through my veins
Until my toes tingle
This is where it ends
Will I ever see you again?
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Comments: 9

fragilemacabre [2004-06-15 15:50:35 +0000 UTC]

I usually pick a favorite stanza, a favorite line.
If I did that, I'd have to copy the ENTIRE THING.

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flutter-of-wings In reply to fragilemacabre [2004-06-15 21:13:33 +0000 UTC]

oooohmigosh!!! thank you so much!!! your soooooooo encouraging and supportive!!! thanky!!!!!

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alabamawhirly [2004-06-13 09:44:49 +0000 UTC]

i like this lots i think its my favourite one so far

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flutter-of-wings In reply to alabamawhirly [2004-06-13 21:22:41 +0000 UTC]

thanky mah deerest

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alabamawhirly In reply to flutter-of-wings [2004-06-14 07:03:47 +0000 UTC]

anytime hunny

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raggy-doll [2004-06-12 11:26:13 +0000 UTC]

'Reality is lost in heavy breathing
There is no right or wrong
This is all or nothing
And you’re taking everything and I’m taking you away
Soft whispers are the lyrics flowing to the pulse of a hopeful heart'

This is my favourite section it just flows so well i got lost in the poem all clear 'pulse of a hopeful heart' so sad yet so beautiful Just wonderful hunny then the end 'Will I ever see you again?' just finishes it off perfectly full of confusion and you want everything answered but it can't be just aw hunny bee another good piece from you and all full of meaning..I hope you are well hunny bee..

Lily..XOXOXOX

Lovely hunny

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flutter-of-wings In reply to raggy-doll [2004-06-13 21:22:03 +0000 UTC]

yup i'm great thanky sweetie
thank you so much for the lurvly comment!!!! you got everything right to a tee. glad you can relate so well

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raggy-doll In reply to flutter-of-wings [2004-06-13 21:24:56 +0000 UTC]

Im glad to here your well sweety daling **huggles for you**..
It was a very lovely poem very very lovely.


Lily.
oxoxox
Take care

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flutter-of-wings In reply to raggy-doll [2004-06-13 21:31:59 +0000 UTC]

yeeeee **huggles back**
thanky so much!!!!! hope you are well also

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