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Published: 2004-02-08 16:37:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 83; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 16
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To touch a flowers beautyYou get pricked by the thorns
Love’s splendour,
leaves her battered and torn
Place her cards on the table,
royal flush charms shame
Broken hearts,
a pointless game
Colour flows out of her body,
skin tainted only with subtle tones
Fragile and slender,
with gentle tendencies laced into her bones
A gold-rimmed heart
Inside,
love blossoms in buds
Draw your thorns
Drain her blood
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Comments: 12
this is very lyrical. i especially like the imagery of "laced into her bones." and thanks for the comment to me.
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no problem 
take care
xxx
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awww thanky!! 
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this is awsesome! yay! so beautiful, nice imagery! 
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thanks
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why thankyou kindly!!! very much appreciated
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That is beautiful it would make an excellent song
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