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FoxyTeah In reply to DiannaPhantom27 [2016-05-01 22:49:13 +0000 UTC]

Well, you have my permission Pitch Pearl is optional in this au, the important thing is they feel an attraction, whether it be friendships, soulmates (lol, soulmates indeed) or more is irrelevant. Just be sure to credit me if you do write it, and send me the link please!

p.s. I know some people in the comments sent links to oneshots they wrote, tho I'm not sure if they wrote multi-chaptered fics too. Be sure to check it out if you feel like writing a fic  about an au that's already been written about is not your thing, tho really I don't mind. The more the merrier, and this au has such nice potential in fics, in my opinion!

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FoxyTeah In reply to FleurElisePhantom [2014-03-23 17:00:12 +0000 UTC]

Of course you can Frankly, I'm starting to feel a little lost at the positive attention this idea is getting, and all the people offering to write it xD Currently only one has actually started (with that I mean posted) a chaptered fic, but they're young and I have no idea how long they'll be motivated Frankly I have no idea how this'll look like if all the people who offered actually posted (that'd be a whole lot of stories on the same idea) but who cares! I'm encouraging and everyone's free to write it if they want! I'll be ecstatic either way XD

If you need any help with characterization you aren't sure about (read: have a clear picture of it in your head, because I don't want to impose on the author's own version of this AU) feel free to ask me

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FoxyTeah In reply to Mathiais [2014-03-23 17:09:20 +0000 UTC]

Definitely a mindwipe, or just a lot of therapy with Jazz... or more likely he'll try dealing with it on his own (cuz let's face it, he's not really going to admit to anyone that he remembers HOW he merged back, what it entailed and that he was on BOTH sides of it- I'm sorry Danny, I'm sorry I can't stop laughing when I think of this I know it's not really funny but I can't-

Ahem. Anyway yeah, Pitch Pearl is rare considered to canon, bit thanks to Tangerine, FireTrance and their Pitch Pearl blog it's a lot bigger part of the Phandom than it was before. And we all wish there'd be updates (believe me) but we'll just have to be either patient, insistent or creative enough to bombard them with motivational fanart

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Mathiais In reply to FoxyTeah [2014-07-24 05:00:48 +0000 UTC]

Hehe yeah... One order of Brain Bleach stat. LOL

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FoxyTeah In reply to DemApples2598 [2014-03-05 00:33:38 +0000 UTC]

You need my help with any plot points, just ask It may take me some time to reply tho...

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DemApples2598 In reply to FoxyTeah [2014-03-05 01:44:09 +0000 UTC]

Ok :3

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FoxyTeah In reply to NinjaWarriorTenTen [2014-02-22 01:24:06 +0000 UTC]

Oh, umm, that's, wow. I think it shows how much I've been stuck in the DP fandom if I'm actually surprised by this question xD Pitch Pearl is the official name for the DP/DF pairing. Explanation why is here pitch-pearl-chicks.tumblr.com/…

Also, you might want to know that the DP fandom has such names for every freaking pairing. Google 'Danny Phantom pairings' and you'll see the long list. And no, I have no idea who or what or WHY someone came up with this weirdness

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FoxyTeah In reply to Esoulix [2014-01-28 14:19:45 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow. Combined with your other enthusiastic comment, wow! Thanks for lovin' it so much As you can see from the comments, a number of people have already thought about writing it, there are some oneshots in there too, but you're welcome to try as well

(Damn, I never thought this idea'd get so popular o_O)

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Esoulix In reply to FoxyTeah [2014-01-29 00:20:09 +0000 UTC]

FoxyTeah, I've been reading through a lot of these comments and I saw your Eninem idea on one of the comments. I have to say this, you're filled to the brim with amazing ideas. I just listened the song and I'm just.... 

Wow.           

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FoxyTeah In reply to Esoulix [2014-01-29 20:48:35 +0000 UTC]

Heh, yeah, I got a ton of ideas that I'll never realize, I think there's some 3-4 more in my gallery (like Danny with ectoplasmic hands, Danny crossdressing, a Guilty Crown crossover, an EXTENSIVE idea of a MLP crossover world, a theory of mine about the typical Phantom/Fenton separation story...), and those are just the ideas I actually drew. DP ideas originating from songs are rare though... I think there's only one more, an angel-ghost idea to Fefe Dobson's "Stuttering"... I could tell you that one so you can imagine it with the song, if you want I actually had some sketches of that drawn, but I don't do wings well so it was scrapped

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Esoulix In reply to FoxyTeah [2014-01-30 08:48:23 +0000 UTC]

Now I'm interested. It's kind of that you won't realize all these interesting ideas. Although your plot bunnies are contagious, and I'm also that you share them with everyone. I for one have many ideas that I'm probably never going to realize too. 

 (Like this idea that Danny and Sam die after they turn the Earth intangible at the end of Phantom Planet and the whole Earth descends into chaos as Danny becomes full ghost and has amnesia (you inspired that part), ending up in Clockworks lair who then reveals to Danny that he is to be Clcokworks successor. Meanwhile Sam becomes ghost and is searching endlessly for her love, and Tucker has to handle being the last remaining Team Phantom member because Jazz has a mental breakdown.)   

 (Or the idea where Danny has a revamped life in which Vlad had interaction with the Fentons earlier on than just Bitter Reunions. This one starts just at the start of D-Stabilizing and goes on without PP (because Vlad never truly snaps like he does in Canon) and instead goes on to a war between humans and ghosts after a class of students in Casper High are held hostage by an evil unnamed ghost who then later steals the crown of fire from Vlad and unseals Pariah Dark. Half the class dies (tortured to death in front of the other half) and half are returned injured and broken (mentally). This ones significantly darker, and Danny is torn between his ghost half and his human half because he has much more allies and friends in the Ghost Zone than in Canon but his home is in the human realm with his family and friends.)  

Oh wow. I'm babbling sorry. I seem to do that allot.   I'm interested in that Fefe Dobson 'Stuttering' idea though. Care to share?  

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FoxyTeah In reply to Esoulix [2014-01-30 16:57:33 +0000 UTC]

*just before she presses Submit Comment* PREPARE YOURSELF!!! D8

Haha, naaah, I'm kinda clingy about them in the first year or so, thinking I'll actually write them, and after that I make peace with the fact that'll prolly never hapen so then my paranoia at my ideas being stolen is overwhelmed with the need to just share them with someone

No babbling. Believe me this isn't even close to what I call babbling. You can see below what I call babbling.

Wow, that's a lot of death. I generally avoid death (or at least mass death) in my stories (mostly because I'm not into imagining that whole 'omg he's/they're dead' scenario). Actually, I'm kinda bored with imagining anything cliche so my story ideas are either hilarious enough to cover for that or (maybe, dunno if they are) original. (I wrote out one such idea right here, but then cut it out cuz the rest of the reply was getting too long )

Your first story idea is open-ended, right? ...though I don't see how they'd die unless someone killed them, and how the word descends into chaos unless Danny was somehow a critical balance-factor. Ghosts and humans at war maybe? Umm, I'm not criticising your theory, just trying to work out the logistics The angel-ghost idea has Danny as Clockwork's successor too, but I'll get to that And I had the idea of Vlad being a constantly present family friend too (no wait, in your story he's still antagonistic, yeah?), a long time ago, but that idea was very... out there, and I gave up on it when I found Cordria's story "Real Life", which had very similar elements

((It was about Maddie and Jack staying in Wisconsin with Vlad during his rehabilitation. Vlad never told them about his "ghostly" problems, and they just attributed their inventions going crazy around him to the Accident exposing him to some ecto-radiation. Their staying by his side allowed him to let go of Maddie, forgive Jack and become close to him again, and accept them as a couple. Although, since they continued their ghost-related research, there was an ecto-radiation-related accident when Maddie was pregnant with Danny, and he was born... well, normal, but his pupils had a tendeny to turn light-gray, which was creepy but generally accepted. What they didn't know was that Danny was also born with the ability to see spirits, which were ghosts-who-are-not-quite-yet-ghosts. Human spirits move on almost instantly due to their acceptance of their death (otherwise they're so in denial they become ghosts), but the long-term spirits are usually animals, much MUCH waker than any ghost, and look just like they did at the moment of dying. If they ever become resentful or exhibit too much negative emotion they turn into ghosts. Oh, and even ghosts can't see spirits. So Danny's a bit of a loner, having imaginary friends (because Jack and Maddie can't pick up anything with their scanners) and he's basically surrounded by rotting roadkill animals that he loves playing with (kinda like Paranorman, now that I think of it). Then there was a kidnapping when he was six years old cuz his parents worked for the government and got enormous grants for their weapon research, and he was saved by a talking ferret that is an almost-ghost, and it scarred him so much his parents quit working for the government, decided to dedicate themselves to just ghost research, and moved to Amity Park, promising Vlad they'd stay in touch. The surprisingly sarcastic ferret became his best friend, and the Accident still occured, just maybe some 2-3 years earlier. He still talks with invisible rotting animals every moment he gets, making other people, Tucker and Sam included, keep away due to the weirdness. And that's basically where I got stuck with the story ))

Hah, babbling. Anyway, second idea sounds interesting. Anything where Vlad doesn't go off the deep end, and where Danny finds it hard to choose between humans and ghosts, is interesting. If his parents became increasingly anti-ghost and if Sam and/or Tucker died in that kidnapping incident, it'd be very hard for him to decide

Uh, but anyway, I got WAAAY off-track up there, lol. The angel-ghost idea, right? Okay, here goes *listens to "Stuttering" by Fefe Dobson*
*intro* There's an old angel statue in an abandoned clearing in Amity Park. It's night. Above, flashes of green and pink. Usual sight, but different. One ghost is going for the kill, and the other is exhausted. A pink flash, a scream, a charred body falls from the sky and lands in front of the statue. A cruel grin, the other entity disappears. (Yeah, it's Plasmius.) *first verse* Sam's past being worried for Danny, she's pissed. Danny doesn't come to school for days, instead fighting ghosts all the time. They're best friends, but now he can't even look her in the eyes, not even acknowledge her when she's screaming at him when she sees him mid-fight in the streets. She can put up with a lot of his moods, but this is too much. And there's this feeling like something's wrong, and Danny won't tell her what it is, doesn't even give her a chance. But she has to know. This ends now. *pre-chorus* It's evening, and she stumbles on him mid-fight again. It's now or never. When he sucks the ghost into the Thermos and looks like he'll disappears again, she shouts that it was always them against the world, that's what you said, that's what you said, if you can't be honest with me, then I'm afraid this is the end. *chorus* (more lyrics) She sees him stutter, stop abruptly. She sees she finally got to him. She pushes on, and he descends enough that she can grab him and demand answers. He just looks at her silently, obviously uncomfortable and feeling guilty at her angry words.  Then something in him snaps and he grabs her forearm, turning around and dragging her with him. *second verse* He's leading her to the park, through a forest, and no amount of questions can get him to talk. She's not sure why he won't just fly them through, but something about the forest feels... quiet, calm, oppressive. She's getting impatient, tho. *pre-chorus* They emerge in a clearing, but she's had enough by then. Turns to him to demand why he's doing this, what the point is, but he's not looking at her. He's looking at something in the distance. She turns to look... *chorus* --cut to aerial perspective from the top of the angel statue-- Feathers obscur vision. The angel is holding a staff, and on top of the staff a real angel lands. Danny, with giant white wings, flapping once, twice. Strong wind blows in Sam's hair. She can't detach her eyes from the sight. Behind her Phantom releases the ghost from the Thermos, and Danny shoots off to intercept it in mid-air, and they're both enveloped in light. Then it's just Danny there, and somehow she knows the ghost has passed on. She looks at him, and she isn't even aware tears are falling from her eyes. *bridge* She collapses to her knees and buries her face in her hands. Feels him land in front of her, and then he's hugging her tightly like it's the last thing he'll do. *bass* She looks up at him, and he's smiling sadly. She feels him put something in her hands gently. Cup her face. Stop stop stuttering your words, it's only making you look worse~ *pre-chorus* He stands up, slowly moves past her. She stays on her knees, staring ahead and crying. Barely notices Phantom besides her giving her a sad smile and disappearing. Looks at the phone Danny put into her hands, and dials 911 as she watches the charred remains of her friend's decomposing body at the foot of the statue. Puts a hand to her moith in horror. *chorus* Cut across town, to FentonWorks. Danny descending stairs to the lab. Jazz left on the stairs, in fetal position, crying, and clutching a giant white feather in her hands. Danny walking towards the portal, step by step. Danny stepping through the portal. Danny's clothes changing to a black robe with a hood, and his white wings to black. In Clockwork's lair, the ghost and his lover finally acknowledge that a new ghost era has come, and they're happy to finally be relieved of their duty.
*end*

I'm reeeaaally not sure, but I think I almost shed a tear when I first synched this song to the story. This is just one scene, tho. The story's more complicated than that. Danny first had tiny little white wings and an aureola like any other freshly-dead-guy-meant-for-heaven. He spent a day or two accepting his death and the fact that Phantom had apparently always been a separate entity (plus he's mute). Then he felt the Calling, grabbed Phantom, and together they ascended to heaven. Danny had just stepped on the steps leading to the Gates when he felt Phantom resisting. He turned around to find him... full of holes. Disintegrating. Cuz Phantom's a ghost, and if his obsession moved on, then he'll move on, only the part of him that can move on is Danny, so Phantom will just... disappear. And Danny can't accept that. He throws his aureola to the ground and plunges to the earth with Phantom before he can fully disappear, and by the time they're back down there, his wings are twice his body length. Up by the Gates, an old man picks up the aureola and laments Danny's bad timing. Apparently if Danny had done this fallen-angel ritual a few days later he'd still be able to go to heaven eventually, but as it is, he came just in time to get cursed to a 5000-year-old guardian duty acting as the Grim Reaper, while the person he sacrificed heaven for (which shuld have been a lover, so he could take comfort in them during all those millenia) would become the new Master of Time. And the day when Sam finds the body is Judgment Day, 12.21.2012., and it's the day when every ghost in the Ghost Zone will forcefully pass on and a new Ghost Era begins (hence why there are no dinosaurs in the GZ, it's cleansed every 5000 years).

And yeah. Yeah... I'm pretty sure this idea blew your mind. Maybe. And geez, now you know what it's like when I babble -____- I think that I WILL post a pic or two for this idea. It's just too detailed not to. ANd, of, I forgot to tell you the name. It's "Post Mortem"

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Esoulix In reply to FoxyTeah [2014-01-31 16:48:03 +0000 UTC]

**((This has the potential to be obnoxiously long))**

Okay, first off:

"(Like this idea that Danny and Sam die after they turn the Earth intangible at the end of Phantom Planet and the whole Earth descends into chaos as Danny becomes full ghost and has amnesia (you inspired that part), ending up in Clockworks lair who then reveals to Danny that he is to be Clcokworks successor. Meanwhile Sam becomes ghost and is searching endlessly for her love, and Tucker has to handle being the last remaining Team Phantom member because Jazz has a mental breakdown.)"

Now that I think about it, I didn't really explain this too much. Okay so the whole idea is that the GiW were planning on surrounding the ghosts after they save their butt, capture as much as they could (and hopefully Danny too(for them at least I personally wouldn't want that to happen)), and do the whole 'painful interrogations' mash up. This leads to an angry mob of ghosts who are now convinced that humans can not be trusted, and they think, 'hey, we're here, fully ready to attack and cause terror, why don't we--I don't know, attack?' and do just that. Danny is just as angry as the other ghosts, but so are Sam, Tucker and Jazz and they fight against  the GiW as well. Jack and Maddie are confused, but they still hold strong on the whole 'ghost's are evil post human consciousness' ideal and are fighting off ghosts left right and centre. Cujo, the ghost dog if you don't remember, is almost shot down protecting Sam, who goes into a GiW downing frenzy at seeing an animal--let along Cujo--be shot down so cruelly, ghost or not. The GiW see her as a threat and have one of their operatives shoot her down, and they do that and Danny, who had been racing to get to her side the moment he realized they were targeting her, watches her die before him. This leads to a Ghostly Wail erupting from within him, and he basically wipes out over 70% of the GiW forces before collapsing and turning human from the exhaustion. (Jack and Maddie immediately stop fighting because, you know, 'Omigawde my son's a ghost, how did we not notice that?') The GiW see the mass destruction and think that Danny is too much of a threat to be held captive, and snipe him down like they did Sam. Tucker is forced to watch, as a GiW was holding him down, and Jazz is paralyzed out of fear and horror. As for the ghosts, they had been banking on Danny being their ultimate weapon, and seeing him go down leads to an full retreat. 

          The aftermath of the battle is this: most of the worlds citizens has seen Danny as a hero. the GiW's attempt on backstabbing leads to a civil war, and the ghosts are apathetic at best and antagonistic at worst, leading to general distrust between the two worlds. Danny's traumatic experience of seeing the girl he loves being killed in front of him leads to him blocking the memory, and any memory he had that had Sam's influence in it. So he can't remember anything personal beyond kindergarten, and anything before that is blurry anyways so he has a memorial blank (the trauma comes from the natural human assumption that she's gone for good). Sam meanwhile is slowly forming into a ghost, and the natural process is a full memory blank, however she fights it like so many do, and is more successful than other ghosts, as she holds onto any memory of Danny with vigor. She basically becomes a ghost looking fruitlessly for her 'love', because that's all she remembers besides a little about Tucker and Jazz, and Danny's parents. Tucker meanwhile is sure that his friends are full ghosts now and is (almost insanely) insisting to look for them in the Ghost Zone. Jack and Maddie are still over themselves in about the whole 'my son is a ghost, and is now dead' thing, and can't wrap their minds around anything else. Jazz is stuck on the whole 'we don't know what happens when a half ghost dies, for all we knew he might be gone for good' thing, and is slowly slipping into insanity at the prospect and the ever growing possibility that Danny is in fact, 'Gone for Good'. 

While Danny is still trying to figure out what's happening, Clockwork decides to be an asshole and tells him Danny is to be his successor and the only way that can happen is if Danny can remember what his human life was like, and for him to be 'ready'. Unfortunately every attempt to remember is blocked by sudden sorrow, and Danny doesn't like that so he shies away from 'remembering' and thus his development. Clockwork can't help because it's against some cosmic rule to help ones successor in their 'test' as it is. Clockworks only hope for Danny is that Sam eventually finds Danny and you know, happily ever after and all that shiz. This is unlikely however because Clockworks Tower can only be found when it's supposed to be found, and even Clockwork can't change that. 

Holy Shite this is long.

As for the second idea, thanks. I actually wasn't all that impressed with that one, as the whole 'inner conflict' thing (I do that "'(words)' thing" a lot  don't I?) seems a little overdone for some reason. However, your interest is making me rethink it. I was going to have Vlad be all 'I want Maddie, but I want her to be happy, and she seems happy...but I want Maddie, and it boils my blood to see her with Jack.' and seem antagonistic at times but really just wants Maddie to be happy--only be happy with him and it's really confusing for him because he also just wants her happy but---ah, I think you get it. Anyways Danny's just sixteen at the start of my story, and he doesn't understand that sometimes Vlad can't help being the way he is because he does love Maddie in this one, and it's not some sick need to own her like it becomes apparent in canon. So Danny sees him as an enemy. But while Vlad is an enemy at times, he isn't at the same time, because he'll do his best to protect Maddie and all that makes her happy, but at the same time he wants to be the only thing that makes her happy, which is kind of sad now that I think about it, and is probably going to be the reason that Maddie lets Vlad stay around because she feels bad for him and know's he just wants her happy. *cough* Anyways.

Meanwhile an evil ghost (I'll remain unnamed to keep the suspense if I'm ever to publish it) is wanting a war between humans and ghosts for his own enjoyment, and kidnaps a class from Casper High to kill half and send the other half back as a call for war, which enrages the people in america enough for them to wage it, and their allies do come to their aid and eventually the whole earth bands together to wage this war with the ghosts. Danny, who's ghost sides obsession is to protect those who need to be protected, is having a little inner war with himself because he wants to protect his friends from the ghost zone, but he sees himself as a human boy with ghost powers, and Sam and Tucker are calling him to use his ghost powers to help the human side of the war. Meanwhile his parents beliefs that all Ghosts are evil are strengthened and Danny wants nothing more than to prove them wrong, but he can't bring himself to reveal himself lest they believe that their son was dead and now an evil ghost, and do unspeakable things to him. This worry is affirmed when Danny's parents insisted he help with the dissection and application painful tests on a child-ghost who pleads for him to let them go. Danny does so, much to his parents ire, and Jazz is the only one that understands Danny's inner conflict, and is working to get Sam and Tucker (who were woefully apart of that class) understand.... (But where is Vlad in all this?)

Okay, enough talk about my ideas. 

((That story you told me about, is is on going? Or is on hiatus?))

And that Fefe Dobson inspired story. Wow, that's just tragic with a capital T. Danny as a Grim Reaper? Phantom as Master of All Time? Turning your back on Heaven for Phantom? Sam? I just.   Wait--mute Danny. Woah. 

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FoxyTeah In reply to PhantomTrainer [2014-01-28 14:22:51 +0000 UTC]

Of course not, I gave like a dozen people already permission to write this, no idea if they'll actually follow up on it But there's some oneshots in the comments already

(Original? Really? Thanks for that high praise! )

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FoxyTeah In reply to DarkHunter41 [2014-01-10 00:45:57 +0000 UTC]

Nope, just me yelling out my idea to the world. There are, however, quite a few oneshots in the comments (), and another pic in my gallery that relates to this verse foxyteah.deviantart.com/art/No… (I should prolly post the link the description too, I completely forgot to do that )

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DarkHunter41 In reply to FoxyTeah [2014-01-10 05:13:58 +0000 UTC]

Have you ever thought of writing it as a fanfic. I have already read some of the oneshots in the comments but i would rather much like to read it from the creator themselves. After all it is your idea. Its like your little baby and as your little baby you should raise it so it can grow. But thats just what i think, all in all its really up to you but as i said it before i would really like to read it if it was from you yourself.

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FoxyTeah In reply to DarkHunter41 [2014-01-10 15:26:39 +0000 UTC]

Mmm, of course I have, but:
1.) I don't have a conclusive idea about the fic, the ideas constantly keep changing and expanding. I just gave the premise and general plot, but anyone's welcome to tweak it in their version.
2.) I don't have time and the only thing I'm capable of writing in the DP fandom are oneshots like once in a year.
3.) Have you read any of my multichapters? I wouldn't encourage it, none of them are completed cuz I lost the inspiration, and they more or less break of in a cliffhanger that will never be climbed

It's better for me this way, making pics in a verse. No rush to complete it, just returning to it if I feel like it. Fanfic writing has given too much stress in my life to be worth it, and forcing myself to write this will just ruin it for me.

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DarkHunter41 In reply to FoxyTeah [2014-01-10 20:05:32 +0000 UTC]

I see. Humm? You would not mind if i give it a try would you? I dont really do oneshots, i like the story to be big and long but i'll give it a try. But just to let you know i'm not the best of writer but i try. If its ok with you?

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FoxyTeah In reply to DarkHunter41 [2014-01-10 23:54:44 +0000 UTC]

Oneshot or long story, I don't mind. I put the idea out there for people to make of it what they will Just the same rule as with everyone else: if you ever post anything, just a little mention of me? Would be nice

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DarkHunter41 In reply to FoxyTeah [2014-01-11 01:02:53 +0000 UTC]

Of course. I would never be so rude as to make it my own. It is your idea after all. It will take some time for me to write but i will let you know what i have once its done. For now i hope you have a nice week

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FoxyTeah In reply to DarkHunter41 [2014-01-12 20:47:13 +0000 UTC]

No worries, and just because you told me you want to write doesn't mean you now must (just putting that out here, because more than once I experienced unnecesaary stress for this stupid belief) Thanks, I'll try not to fry my brain too much this week

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FoxyTeah In reply to ParadoxalOrder [2013-11-14 21:06:23 +0000 UTC]

Wow, so many interested people! Well, I did pracically beg people to write this, I just didn't expect the huge response. BUT you're welcome to write anything based on this idea (since I did beg xD AND I kind of wanted this to become another widely accepted version of Pitch Pearl), just y'know... link me if you do write anything?

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FoxyTeah In reply to darkloveforanime1 [2013-11-14 21:03:00 +0000 UTC]

This. THIS. THIS.

...how the hell do I enlarge the font here because I want to spell out a freaking huge T.H.I.SSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

Woah, this was totally not one of the scenes I thought about when designing this story, but it's PERFECT. Just like I imagined the flow of the story. All mysterious, the ghost halves themselves not knowing what to make of their beings, of their very own existence that shouldn't be but was, and they can't explain it. The desperation of missing something vital, and then the realization of what they were, if only in the simplest terms possible: "Cold."

Dude, you get a cookie. This pressed all my buttons and feels for this story. Bloody perfect. Heck, I feel so much feels at this, I could draw a pic for you! I don't make a habit of this, but you just caught me in an awesome mood and then these feels ;___; If you want anything drawn, just say it and I'll make a sketch at the very least.

And I'm sorry for the late reply, you prolly taught I skimmed over this and deleted it Not so, I just don't have time to check dA often anymore, at least for the next few weeks

One last thing about your story version: I want to yell at you to get out of my head because reading minds is intrusive, but then you wouldn't be able to make such perfection anymore so I give you permission to stay there for a while

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darkloveforanime1 In reply to FoxyTeah [2013-11-14 21:17:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh! Um... *Blushes in embarrassment* I didn't know it was THAT good, I kind of just threw something together. Nah, I'm good with a cookie, *Snatches and munches on it* although, you could make another of these two... This little plot bunny has been bothering me since I saw it. I want to make another small thing for when frostbite finds him, or when Hot wakes up but I can't seem to get a feel on how his awakening will go. Maybe something about being empty other then the warm core inside him? Or maybe he lands somewhere blistering hot, but that kinda sounds like Cold's story so... Or-OR maybe I could make him wake up to Skulker or Ember finding him and feeling his forehead while saying "Crap, he's hot. Burning my fingers just touching him." and Hot just takes that as his name and latches onto them like an adorable puppy.

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FoxyTeah In reply to darkloveforanime1 [2013-11-17 15:40:10 +0000 UTC]

I'll see what I can do Won't come out for quite some time, but it'll be the first pic that does. School just doesn't leave me time to draw right now

I'll be happy if you do anything more, tho you don't have to As for Hot: I dunno, my thoughts on his awakening keep changing as much as yours. Right now I'm affected by a dark fanfic or two I read, and the atmosphere in your story of Cold, that I keep imagining him in darkness, flitting in and out of consciousness, with Skulker's and Ember's voice in the distance, always discussing him. They find him, maybe he lands somewhere on the island. They can see something's wrong, but they quckly take him in before someone notices they've got Phantom - wouldn't do if the humans came crashing on their island due to gossiping ghosts. And then they notice how his hair is changing while he's still out on a spare bed/couch, and he's becoming more ghost-like, more like... he isn't alive. And he won't wake up. And Hot hears all of this in pieces while he's unconscious, but they keep repeating 'hot', 'getting hot', 'becoming hottter', he does the same thing as Cold and assumes that's his name. They start to develop a flimsy bond while taking care of him. And then some scenes with Ember and Skulker sitting worried at a table, thinking about what this all means, what the humans or Vlad would do if it came out a dead Phantom resided at their lair... and then when Hot wakes up and they realize he's amnesiac, they simply decide to go along with it and don't tell him anything. By then his hair is already a flame like Ember's, and his eyes as red as the ones of Skulker's true form. After that Hot never even considers the possibility of leaving, and the two ghosts don't mention it either. They just sort of... become stuck together.

Well, that's what I see right now. Might have a completely new theory by next week tho But anyways, don't have to listen to me, I'm sure whatever you come up with will be good

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darkloveforanime1 In reply to FoxyTeah [2013-11-18 02:45:34 +0000 UTC]

Hey, it's okay, I just want to see more of these guys cause they're so cute. (And this bunny had been attacking me...)

*Reads while nodding* Hmm, the more I think about it, the more it's sticking to me. I like your idea, I'll see what I can do with it (Add a little something to it too).

You know, I actually like a lot of your ideas, they make me want to write them so if you want me to write something for you, I will gladly do it (Don't be shy, I would love to get new stuff from you, you are good at plots). I also have a little something about Sam and Tucker's side to all this (It's after months and months of fruitless searching and Tucker snaps, I quite like it for some odd reason) and I can PM it to you if you want me to. I enjoy writing and new ideas are fun to try out and twist a little.

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FoxyTeah In reply to darkloveforanime1 [2013-12-25 02:42:16 +0000 UTC]

If you haven't yet seen: foxyteah.deviantart.com/art/No…

O-oh, thanks! Actually, I kinda forget what sort of ideas I keep talking about on dA, since I've got a crapload more in my brain and it all gets mixed up over time. I'm a writer myself, tho I write like once a year or something, and right now my writing is drawing inspiration from another fandom. But if you feel an urge to write any particular idea of mine, run it by me (if just so I know what exactly you're gonna write) and there's a 99% chance I'll give you the okay (if you actually get me to talk about some of my story ideas, you'll prolly get a migraine from all the text I'll send you xD)

And I am SO sorry for replying back so late. Dunno if you knew, but I took a forced hiatus cuz I was (and still am) seriously behind in my studies and there's too much schoolwork and yeah, in short, college's killing me. And I'd love to see that part about Tucker, tho this reply is so late you might've just deleted it by now Sorry again OTL

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darkloveforanime1 In reply to FoxyTeah [2013-12-28 03:16:19 +0000 UTC]

Oh my-That pic is awesome! You have no idea how much I want to hug you for that, it's so cute!

Of course I would tell you, if I didn't that would be plagiarizing. Hey, I'm good with walls of text, I love them.

I didn't know you were on hiatus but you know how it is, studies come first. It's totally fine, I've been wondering where you went but I wouldn't just delete your message like that. Oh and I'll send you the little part where Tucker snaps through a pm. *Whispers* I think I broke the duo a little, and I'm not sorry.

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FoxyTeah In reply to XxXNightcoreQueenXxX [2013-10-14 21:36:00 +0000 UTC]

*hyperventilates* ...What did I just say about a feel overload? omg this is so awesome you are the best~ loveyousomuch I'm so faving these :'D
(I must be on a sugar high or something, I'm so sorry for all my babbling )

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XxXNightcoreQueenXxX In reply to FoxyTeah [2013-10-15 15:24:23 +0000 UTC]

well up for a penny up for a pound, i drew one more in class today. 

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FoxyTeah In reply to XxXNightcoreQueenXxX [2013-10-14 21:29:56 +0000 UTC]

It's good... tho not really what I'm looking for. Good try tho

Sorry, but everyone's got their own version of the same thing (and I don't mind yours at all), but mine's a bit more like WHOOSH everything's white and FWOOO wind blowing and WHITE and where the heck am I so cold and no, I still haven't got a name for myself cuz the girl who conceived this idea can still only refer to me as Hot and it's all so mysterious and confusing and I'm gonna black out (white out) and I'm falling and I think there's someone before me I see someone before me or is it just my mind playing tricks there's a shadow over me talking saying something it looks worried but I can't hear over the wind too tired to stay awake please help? Oh, and I know nothing about this other guy cuz my conceiver just likes keeping everyone in the dark unnecessarily so I won't find out anything about him within the next 5000 words or so, even tho we'll prolly spend all that time in a cave waiting out the storm and getting to know each other and yeah, my conceiver is just a major sadist to her characters and readers

Argh, not even that describes it well xD If I went on about how I imagine it, I'll end up writing a story excerpt and believe me, you don't want that. You'll be hit with a wall of text so thick you're gonna have migraines for days xD And me too, for that matter, since I've still got a nasty cold and staring at a screen doesn't help -__- Tho, I'd put the story in distanced third person, I like keeping the mystery going so the characters can't accidentally put in random spoiler thoughts- no , I'm not mocking YOU at all, I'm just remembering this one attempt years ago when I tried first person omg I still shudder when I think of it xD

I really do appreciate your attempt at the story, tho (Man, why is this so popular. Did I really manage to make a bandwagon for people to jump on? Cuz if I did, I'm gonna flip out. Already one person made fanart, and now a mini-fanfic. GUYS, THIS SORT OF EXCITEMENT IS NOT GOOD FOR MY FANGIRL MENTALITY. It might get a feel overload xD)

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