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Published: 2006-09-09 23:46:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 387; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 2
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Not sure if I'm going to bother finishing this.Suggestions more than welcome.
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Damn this is sweet. Have you ever thought about doing any jewellery design? I think you would be very good at it.
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Brilliant worryingly living looking brass instrument!..with electrical wiring??
I would not like to put my lips to it but bet it makes an amazing sound..any idea what kind of sound?
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oh wow...
that already looks amazing! what's not done with it?
p.s.
you seriously have to tell me what you smoke...
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nicole you have to finish this. believe me this will be one of your great work or perhaps become one of your masterpiece..
i can't stand to wait it finished.
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Thank you! I've got so much stuff for school right now that I can't get back to this for a while, but your encouragement means lots, and I'll defintely pick it up again when I get the chance. 
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In the small view it looks like there's a person worked into it. I like it. The shading is definately well done.
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Wow what's that? O___O please tell me everything. How you've done this?
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Hey
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Awwwh. Crossing the lines is fun way to work. And there's so many ways to cross a lines ^___^
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Excellent job with the shading...the crosshatching is very effective in bringing out the contrasts...I never have been good with that, and you do an excellent job with it!!
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Looks cool, perhaps you should keep with the current image, and just do a dizzy winding metal pipe type image. I dunno, let it take you wherever your mind goes as it comes out.
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I would definitely finish this piece. It has great form and functionality. The crosshatching is superb and has the begging elements of great composition if it were finished. Love the uniqueness of it.
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I think I agree with Jett... consider exploring these ideas further in a new, seperate piece. You've used nice shading and an interesting combination of forms to render an abstract that is strong compositionally and has a good dynamic range. The hints of angular order are just enough to throw the organic, flowing lines into focus, and provide spiritual as well as compositional counterpoint.
It reminds me of a large heart, touched by Giger. More of a place, though, than an object.
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Yeah, this might be a little played out... and sketch work, especially from live models is sooo much fun. Thanks for your comments on this piece... and I love that you mentioned that it's more a place than an object, because that's how it seems to me too. Thanks for the wonderful comments... I'm looking forward to your next upload.
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oh yes---one other thing---since we are different artists---we are all unique of course---me?? From looking at it again I know where I'd pick it up---that's me though--I usually fill up every square inch of a page lol It's such a personel thing.
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this is some piece. I can't tell you where to end this---you have to really look into it and see where (if anywhere) this is telling to to go or halt. What you have there is real fine---nice work.
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i really hope you do finish this, i mean if im favin it now, then i cant wait ta see a finished version! 
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it almost looks like a musical instrument, where the flat area at the bottom right is a keyboard and the other parts emit sound...
i love the shape and balance!
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... yeah, it does look kinda like an instrument now that I look at it. Now why didn't I think of that? Thanks for your creative insights.
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you're welcome
hmmm... it really would look good with keys there
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great shading, srry i got nothing else to comment about cuz i dont know abstract very well =0
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that's something... can't wait to see the dinal touch!
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Yeah... this is what I am all about - Surrealism - Great pencil technique... love the range of values.
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Thank you! If I remember correctly, it was a surrealist piece in your gallery that first grabbed my attention.
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Wow... that's awesome... it's nice to hear memories like that.
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Hi Nicole -- it is at the point not to add anymore to it -- if you do so you will destroy how well you laid out your comp for this incredible drawing -- showchase it -- just fiish it to th point to where you are happy with it & then if you can put a very simple frame around it -- this is high class work my Dear Friend -- let us see how well you do draw -- I am excited -- take care 
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