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fragileHope — Lonely Home
Published: 2005-02-10 02:41:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 61; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description look at this house
a pitiful sight
dreary
and lonely
falling apart
like the person inside
decaying
like the bodies inside
the bloody walls
the hatred
pain
deception
and lies
how can this be right?
the screams
still haunt
that persons mind
who sits there
day by day
rotting away
with that stench
of dead bodies
steal blood
dried to the walls
the blood that stains
his hands
a basement full of the dead
all in this lonely house...
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Comments: 4

WindShadow [2005-02-10 20:53:35 +0000 UTC]

It's a powerful piece...I like it a lot because I can picture the house, and I can most definitely relate to it.

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fragileHope In reply to WindShadow [2005-02-11 19:54:17 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much!

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rainbowblossom [2005-02-10 17:45:15 +0000 UTC]

*looks around* why hasnt anyone commented yet??? its such a great poem! i love the flow of it and how it all plays out in my mind like a film

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fragileHope In reply to rainbowblossom [2005-02-11 19:55:08 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!!

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