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Published: 2005-08-04 02:49:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 14116; Favourites: 547; Downloads: 61
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Description Her words are meaningless just like her life
it’s always been about the pain, it’s always been about the strife
She calls his name out from the dark
Her heart is dead, he left his mark

She screams out loud to soften the pain
Her tears they come, like falling rain
The notes she writes, he tears apart
He abandoned her there, and stole her heart

She feels so used, so broken, so bent
All the words he told her, he never meant
She lies awake and wonders why
She crosses her heart and hopes to die
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Comments: 79

MizzR23 [2019-06-06 13:28:41 +0000 UTC]

Omg I felt thatπŸ˜”it was as if I was reading what I’m exactly going through rn. Β Such a touching poem.Β 

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willow90lawrence [2016-06-05 02:34:57 +0000 UTC]

Phenomenal. Absolutely phenomenal.

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Mr-Bliksem [2015-02-02 19:56:48 +0000 UTC]

The same has happened to me, only I'm male.

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Marethyn [2014-10-13 18:27:11 +0000 UTC]

Touching

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corrneliia [2014-08-02 16:43:12 +0000 UTC]

So beautiful...

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BeccaMacD141 [2014-03-10 11:48:17 +0000 UTC]

This is a nice poem, I can really relate to it and I'm sure other readers can too

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Codawinx [2014-03-01 23:44:33 +0000 UTC]

Seems like I'm stuck here. Mezmerizing.

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jazewel [2013-08-22 04:51:48 +0000 UTC]

I have been there Very well written piece.

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Numbcutie04 [2013-07-12 15:59:25 +0000 UTC]

very good!

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Bekaboou [2013-07-08 05:13:00 +0000 UTC]

soo sad

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brOKen-Mayhem17 [2013-07-01 02:16:35 +0000 UTC]

Amazing

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DonnaJSullivan [2013-05-02 21:32:35 +0000 UTC]

Really like this one....

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simply-awesome [2013-04-23 20:37:07 +0000 UTC]

Amazing work!

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BuwanAnsu [2013-04-04 03:55:20 +0000 UTC]

Very nice. c:

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fairytale8495 [2013-03-09 06:03:12 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing.

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Elisama00 [2013-02-25 04:39:35 +0000 UTC]

I love it u.u...

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Akyiella [2013-02-22 21:49:19 +0000 UTC]

amazing <3

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twilightXmystery [2012-12-16 04:17:46 +0000 UTC]

this speaks to me, and it says that my feelings are shared.

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KatnissTeamGale [2012-12-02 03:08:01 +0000 UTC]

It's perfect. It's true. And it's exactly how I feel sometimes.

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KikiElric [2012-07-08 09:05:51 +0000 UTC]

this is how I feel right now... wonderfully writen.

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LA34 [2012-05-09 05:27:48 +0000 UTC]

So beautiful, I can relate

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WitchKayla [2012-05-06 15:38:38 +0000 UTC]

beautiful. absolutely beautiful
(i can relate)
*~CoMETotHeDarKsIdE~*

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gleekfreak547 [2012-03-19 00:42:52 +0000 UTC]

depressing...meaningful...perfect!

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martinapavlovska [2012-03-04 15:49:32 +0000 UTC]

All the words he told her, he never meant
She lies awake and wonders why
She crosses her heart and hopes to die...

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jdepp101 [2012-02-08 01:35:33 +0000 UTC]

beautiful

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UnreturnedLove [2012-01-20 02:18:29 +0000 UTC]

So perfectly describes my main mood............

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animelover74 [2011-12-16 23:30:45 +0000 UTC]

I love!

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MuffinRawrXD [2011-12-12 23:33:08 +0000 UTC]

Exactly how I feel

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belovedbabi [2011-12-09 03:58:04 +0000 UTC]

This is exactly how I feel. Heart stopping words.

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thewaves4lifegirl [2011-12-06 11:45:49 +0000 UTC]

sweet!

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WillfulIntrospection [2011-12-04 00:41:07 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful! amazin poetry skills! ur word reli feel like how it is u did a nice job describin nd rymin very nice!

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Tsuki-Tai [2011-10-07 23:29:34 +0000 UTC]

Its beautiful and yet it is sad. I know I have laid awake at nights and have wondered the same. Lovely poem i expecally like the last two lines in the final stanza. Wonderful work

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chocolatedesires [2011-10-01 09:44:16 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful

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vegangurl03 [2011-09-27 02:04:10 +0000 UTC]

hella good

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XVinfeX [2011-05-24 00:56:42 +0000 UTC]

I faved this a long time ago but I restumbled on it and its just as amazing. I love it good job!

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MrRikko [2011-05-21 22:13:03 +0000 UTC]

I have to admit : WOW
It's is great you almost can feel the melancholic atmosphere filling out the room.

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lunarlover98 [2011-04-10 22:56:37 +0000 UTC]

i love this its beautiful.

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serenityninja [2011-03-15 04:47:16 +0000 UTC]

amazing

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zalez8 [2011-03-07 16:27:07 +0000 UTC]

You've put into words what I could not. Thank u

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Emo-Panda123 [2011-03-04 13:47:44 +0000 UTC]

That was an amazing poem...it breaks my heart to read this cause it is true...This is truely the most beautiful poem I have read

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loonymoon101 [2011-01-15 02:50:17 +0000 UTC]

i love this poem

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Malice-in-lala-land [2010-11-17 04:56:43 +0000 UTC]

damn.. feel like this right now..

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SilverWolf316 [2010-10-19 21:16:20 +0000 UTC]

wow, that was amazingly written, its the last line that really got me. very nice.

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xmarialaurenx [2010-09-22 19:10:53 +0000 UTC]

Exactly how I feel... It hurts like hell...

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ThePockyFox [2010-09-06 21:51:01 +0000 UTC]

very beautiful piece! ... been feelin this way myself....

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crazyworld1 [2010-08-28 09:08:14 +0000 UTC]

: (

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un-loved-and-alone [2010-08-14 20:33:49 +0000 UTC]

thats just what i felt after a tough break up, i totaly get this.

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bellascribbles [2010-08-12 03:18:45 +0000 UTC]

Wow.. Thank you.. You wrote the words that I couldn't express myself so perfectly.. This is perfect.
Very well done.

=]

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brokenbylove [2010-06-26 17:44:04 +0000 UTC]

aw

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jojoluva23 [2010-06-25 03:34:28 +0000 UTC]

so deep and makes you think........

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