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Published: 2005-08-04 02:49:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 14116; Favourites: 547; Downloads: 61
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Her words are meaningless just like her lifeitβs always been about the pain, itβs always been about the strife
She calls his name out from the dark
Her heart is dead, he left his mark
She screams out loud to soften the pain
Her tears they come, like falling rain
The notes she writes, he tears apart
He abandoned her there, and stole her heart
She feels so used, so broken, so bent
All the words he told her, he never meant
She lies awake and wonders why
She crosses her heart and hopes to die
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wow...i felt myself choke up when i read this.
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I hate those kind of people, those that take a person's heart(especially if it is a girl's) and destroy it. They act deaf to their victim's desperation, and ultimately become the deathbringer to their victim. 
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That's exactly how I feel now... Just that you put it in better words...
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very nice piece of work
if you're on Facebook I would like to invite you to my writers' group Spit It Out
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thats so beatiful the title is perfect for it 
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Hey this sounds really dumb, but my friends going through a bad break up and this reminds me of her I can never find the right words. But these are them they're amazing.
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it's a pretty poem but there's a grammer error...
"She FELT so used, so broken, so bent......"
i hope you do not feel so offended...xpp
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wow 
this is perfect
i love love love how you ended it
kudos!
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oh my god thats beautiful!!!!! It truley caputres what happens with a broken heart...i can relate xD
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i admire your wise choice in words. this is a very strong poem and many of us can relate to the feeling a broken heart suplies. even myself.
i really like it ^-^
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aww its so beautiful.But it does feel that way π: 0 β©: 0
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One of the best poems I ever read.
This is absolutely beautiful.
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Such a beautiful poem... i can totaly relate to it... so far the most beautiful poem ive read in my entire life...
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hey do u mind if i used a couple of these lines in a song im writing they are amazing
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she crosses her heart and hopes to die,
that is great...
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its beautiful...
i particularly love the last verse..
im that girl with the broken heart
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