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Published: 2019-09-14 23:07:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 189; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 0
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The bonesetter's in the house.
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Art and Edward (c) T-R-I-C-K-E-R-Y
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LOOK AT MY BOY, HES ALL GROWN UP! KILLING PEOPLE LEFT AND RIGHT
UGHΒ
I'M SO PROUD
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HE DOESN'T KILL PEOPLE I PROMISE
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WELL THAT'S DEPRESSINGΒ
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I'M SORRY TO DISAPPOINT HE'S NOT A VIOLENT MAN
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he is my fear
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bRO HE'S PRETTY SCARY
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HE'S MY BABY BOY
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NO ONE I PROMISE IT'S JUST PART OF HIS JOB
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I PROMISE HE DIDN'T Getting blood on him is just part his job because he's a bonesetter
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NOPE ACTUALLY He's a bonesetter/doctor, so he's used to getting blood on him while doing his job.
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Thank goodness.
Can I ask you something?
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Of course, dude! What's up?
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Do you think you can check out my art?
I know that sounded a bit selfish.
And I am pretty sure you'll be somewhat weirded out.
At the end of the day, the answer is your call.
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Sure can! What kind of feedback are you looking for?
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Right about anything that isn't too negative, that's all I can say.
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Sure thing! Saying that, are you looking for constructive criticism?
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That and a compliment.
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Sure thing, dude!
First of all, I love the variety of poses and expressions you use! It doesn't look like you recycle the same pose all the time and I think that's a great skill to have! I also like the creatures you draw. This one here (fav.me/ddbubtm ) looks awesome! I love the detail you put into it and the pose, as well. It looks very fitting! I noticed that you draw different body types, as well. That's awesome! Diversity in characters is a great thing and you don't always see bigger-bodied characters. Not to mention, it's traditional! Traditional art is amazing in the ever-growing community of digital artists!
As for constructive criticism, I think you should colour your art more! Don't get me wrong, I love the look of traditional sketching, but I saw your coloured pieces and they look awesome! Colouring and shading can give a drawing more depth and make it look a lot livelier. If you don't like colouring, try shading your sketches! It can add a lot more depth to it, even just simple shading. Secondly, less of an art critique, but you should try taking pictures of your art in better lighting. It's hard to see every detail in a dark-ish picture, so a bright room or even outside makes a better picture!
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For the compliments,
1. I can be creative, I mean one of my characters is literally a beach ball.
2. Expressions, I love them.
3. Different body types, for extra flair, besides the chubbs, I'm extremely fond of chubby girls, and trust me, you'll be seeing a lot of those when you exit some zones of deviantart and enter other zones.
4. Someone else has told me that I have a lot of influence from cartoons, considering that kinda summed up a good chuck of my childhood, shouldn't surprise me.
For the criticism,
1. The way I color (and my usage of colored outlines) can be... iffy when it comes to lighter colors, ESPECIALLY PALER SKIN TONES ON HUMANS. Shading is possible, but that doesn't cross my mind on a regular basis, but shading I can do.
2. Lighting is kind off an issue, I'll admit, especially in some of the earlier pieces of my gallery, you could see my phones shadow in those.
I'm also making a series of Metroidvania maps, as well as some Minecraft maps, and what I put in my gallery... those were not my first attempt at those.
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