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Published: 2018-08-21 23:41:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 1707; Favourites: 213; Downloads: 3
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In real life I'd be either watching Eric play or ruin everything and sit there confused.I finally drew something in that aesthetic, I adore art with dark tone and neon lights shine.
Critiques are appreciated!
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Itβs too good I canβt think of a critiqueΒ
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The colours and poses look great here, I like how you shade!
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Since critiques also include good points, I have to say that the color scheme looks amazing
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Thank you!!
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I really like this.
This isn't realy a critique but if you wanted a smother look to your lighting and shading may I suggest using an airbrush tool (if the program your using has one) it creates a really nice smooth and blended look (at least in my opinion it does) again I really like this peice
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I'm a fan of hard shading techniques. Airbrush seems to make art blend and dull, at least when I use it.
I'll try to play with softer shading techniques and see how it goes! Thanks for feedback, it means a lot!
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no problem and the way you shade does look good, I was just making a suggestion and don't really mind if you stick with the hard shading techniques, I love your art all the same.
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i'd say it look fantastic! my only critique is that the lighting and shading are fighting clashing a lot??
other than that's it's wonderful!
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I'll try to pay more attention to clean shading next time! Thanks for the feedback, it means a lot!
And thanks!!
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Just gonna offer a bit of critique here
I'd make the game Dira is playing the main lightsource, so it's more of a focal point. I'd also make it a lot lighter and make behind Dira and her back much darker, to add a lot more contrast. Otherwise this looks pretty good! The poses and faces are very expressive!
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Ahh, that was the main lightning plan, but I kind of went with the flow!
But I think you're totally right! I should've gone with game as a main light source.Β
Thanks so much for critique, it means a lot! <3
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Alright! And of course, glad to help!
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