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Published: 2012-07-29 02:34:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 4002; Favourites: 126; Downloads: 0
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Ehrgeiz in the process of unleashing a brutal kick.Related content
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Hi Gareath is it okay if i use this pose as reference for my character assignment? Actually i already used it but i thought it would be nicer if i still ask
I will remember to credit you when i upload that assignment.
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Anyway... to the point: Kudos here 
Some aspects I'd like to point out are: her breasts couldn't possibly pop like that if she's wearing a sarashi (that band around her bust). A well-wrapped sarashi ends up squeezing them, not fitting their form. I, uh... will chalk it up to you giving us an idea of her... power, yeah, ha ha. Though, please, take that in mind when clothing your characters.
Also, her belly seems very retracted. I do understand you wanted to give her a thin waist, but she needs to breathe 
Great job on the lighting 
Please, what are those marks running down her cheekbone areas?
To finish: we have here a truly a**-kicking amazon! Great, great job!!! You have a quite diverse gallery there. And here's hoping to see more from you
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She is indeed an original character from a series I have currently in the making. She is a prominent character and leader. I want to focus on exalting her character in a way that would dissolve the fact that she is female amongst more important context and canon.Β
Her physique Β is meant to be strong but retaining of the feminine silhouette; admittedly her breasts are too large in this illustration of her and I plan on making that much less of a focus. I do not plan on making her into a sexual icon or anything along those lines. She will be beautiful but sophisticated and deadly.Β Her femininity would be something rarely seen as she would absolve herself of it when in any sort of formal interaction.
Those lines on her face are just indicative of an exaggerated crease along the lower rim of her orbital socket and the zygomatic bone ( a family trait). It did come out a bit stronger than it should.
Thank you for such in-depth feedback, it is greatly appreciated!
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Only real critique I can give here is that her pants are so tight, they almost look like a part of her skin that's painted black.
Other than that, love the pose and sense of power here
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thanks!
I was trying to get a nice sense of movement in there.
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You did it pretty well, actually.
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yes, she is quite the warrior!
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