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gauravpatel — Alone
Published: 2004-12-20 13:38:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 305; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 50
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Harsh words & violent blowsHidden secrets nobody knows
Eyes are open, hands are fisted
Deep inside I'm warped & twisted
So many tricks & so many lies
Too many whens & too many whys
Nobody's special, nobody's gifted
I'm just me, warped & twisted
Sleeping awake & choking on a dream
Listening loudly to a silent scream
Call my mind, the number's unlisted
Lost in someone so warped & twisted
On my knees, alive but dead
Look at the invisible blood I've bled
I'm not gone, my mind has drifted
Don't expect much, I'm warped & twisted
Burnt out, wasted, empty, & hollow
Today's just yesterday's tomorrow
The sun died out, the ashes sifted
I'm still here, warped & twisted
Just something that protrays how I have really been feeling for a long time.
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Comments: 9
OMG this is amazing... this really touches me
deep down, in my special place.. i cant tell which one impresses me more, the beautiful visual or the unleashed emotions in the words. You should be proud that youre able to really let things out like that, this really is a unique piece. +FAV!! ^_^^^ <3 
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Powerful; very, very powerful. It has a lot of depth and emotion, good work.
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who wrote that poem? is that a song or somethin ???
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OMG this is amazing... this really touches me
deep down, in my special place.. i cant tell which one impresses me more, the beautiful visual or the unleashed emotions in the words. You should be proud that youre able to really let things out like that, this really is a unique piece. +FAV!! ^_^^^ <3
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agreed with spiritbreath. very powerful. the poem is meaningful as well. great job on this.
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Powerful; very, very powerful. It has a lot of depth and emotion, good work.
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