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Elizasketchflux [2017-03-16 07:44:47 +0000 UTC]

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This art piece is cute! I love the simplistic style on the girls and the facial expressions on their faces are appealing to look at. (I especially like Ruby and her plate of cookies). It gives your art more of a personality and style to your work!

My only gripes with this artwork is that the outline and the colouring looks messy, there is a lack of shading and a background, which makes the white background look uncomfortable for my eyes.

But overall, it's a cute and fun-looking piece of art, but I think there is some room for improvement.

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Zixinus [2018-11-01 16:54:04 +0000 UTC]

This is totally how they'd pack. I imagine that Weiss's stuff is mostly unnecessary cosmetics, Blake with books and Yang carries everything else.

Well, no, they'd do this if they hadn't had any sense or restraint.

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eel227 [2017-10-27 15:58:24 +0000 UTC]

That's not preparation  that's a sugar high.

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YU-GI-OMG [2017-06-17 07:25:41 +0000 UTC]

Blake wants all the fish.

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Elizasketchflux [2017-03-17 06:27:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for liking my critique, it's actually the first time I'm doing this sort of thing.

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raigalcc [2017-03-15 04:21:22 +0000 UTC]

Hope I'm wrong but I think there's dust leaking out from Weiss-cream's bag

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5th--Dimension [2017-03-13 03:28:10 +0000 UTC]

So if all four have color-coded sleeping bags...

Who is the green one for?

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Viper-X27 [2017-03-12 14:22:26 +0000 UTC]

Yang Xiao Long: Camping pack mule.

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jots1106 [2017-03-11 23:09:33 +0000 UTC]

Only Ruby would bring cookies camping, Weiss seems in charge of first aid, Blake has a cat face and of course Yang would carry everything

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Keyblade-11 [2017-03-11 22:07:01 +0000 UTC]

Woo! Camping! x3
And this came from Ruby eating cookies, then went to camping. XP

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