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The title is a bit of a joke.For a [link] (contest) at I won second place!
It was the only idea I could come up with, and it requires some explaining, I hope that doesn't disqualify me outright.
There's a bit of story here. It's not a fanfiction, just a story in my head, if you want to whole summary, feel free to ask. Hell, if you want a full outline because you feel like writing it yourself, feel free to ask.
The Invention: It's a type of magic-scanner. It's the size of a building, and the main portion is a large room with four circular apparatuses on the walls. It's main function is supposed to be medical - it help determine/diagnose many magic affecting diseases(of which there are many, though none as severe as the one featured in cannon). It can also detect any kind of life/living organic tissue within. Set a rock in the middle, turn it on, it tells you if there's something alive in the rock. This tends to vaporize lone single-celled organism though.
There's a flaw, however, a fairly dangerous one; while turned on, it's very sensitive to magic. If someone inside were to cast a spell, the whole thing could blow up. There are safeties that turn it off before that can happen of course.
The Scene: Artemis's body is host to a pseudo-alien(put there by a real alien) that grants him telepathy(Dreamcatcher anyone?). The telepathy allows him to communicate with the small group of refugee aliens who are trying to help save Earth from the Destroyer.
For some reason, the alien inside Artemis reacts badly with the machine, causing him tremendous amount of pain. An avatar of the Destroyer captures Artemis and traps him in the main room of the machine and uses it to torture him for information. Artemis is aware of the machines flaw(also that the safeties have been turned off so the Avatar can use it), and flings a fistful of magic into one of the main apparatuses, blowing the whole thing to pieces.
Holly runs in and finds him near dead, Folly tells her not to heal him, to just run out of there because of the crazy amount of wild magic in the room. She disregards his advice.
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Comments: 31
FooHasMoved [2010-10-16 00:09:31 +0000 UTC]
Oh, you have GOT to write this fanfic!
(If you do, I hope you're an ArtyxHolly shipper. It would make a grwat story.)
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General-EbonRose In reply to FooHasMoved [2010-10-16 13:25:16 +0000 UTC]
I'm a mild fan of ArtyX Holly to be sure, but it's not often I write fanfiction. I might though. If I do, I'll let you know.
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FooHasMoved In reply to General-EbonRose [2010-10-16 18:55:55 +0000 UTC]
Okay, thank you. I would love to read it (if you make it, that is).
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Bumble-Buizel [2010-05-26 23:18:42 +0000 UTC]
oooh. this is cool. and now i want you to write a fanfic... cos this story is AWESOME
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General-EbonRose In reply to Bumble-Buizel [2010-05-27 11:51:28 +0000 UTC]
I was going to give the outline to ~Beau-Penemuel , so you keep an eye on her
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Beau-Penemuel [2010-02-27 16:13:40 +0000 UTC]
I like this, I might write something with your outline if I ever get the time.
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General-EbonRose In reply to Beau-Penemuel [2010-02-27 19:18:06 +0000 UTC]
You like Artemis Fowl? Or just the story?
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General-EbonRose In reply to Beau-Penemuel [2010-02-27 19:51:42 +0000 UTC]
Woo! You're welcome to write it of course, if you want me to give you more information on the idea I will, or you can take what's here and run with it.
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Beau-Penemuel In reply to General-EbonRose [2010-02-27 23:36:28 +0000 UTC]
More information would be awesome, thanks!
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General-EbonRose In reply to Beau-Penemuel [2011-07-19 07:26:34 +0000 UTC]
[link] Sorry. I wrote this up right after I sent that message... then promptly lost it until now.
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General-EbonRose In reply to Beau-Penemuel [2010-02-28 07:21:07 +0000 UTC]
I'll send you a note.
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General-EbonRose In reply to Zeirina [2010-02-25 20:37:10 +0000 UTC]
*laughs* If only I actually wrote fanfiction. I this story, but I can tell you now it'll never be born from my pen.
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RipCityXX1 In reply to General-EbonRose [2010-02-25 20:36:37 +0000 UTC]
lol no probs its special in a good way!
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Calawyn [2010-02-25 16:12:25 +0000 UTC]
I don't know much about Artemis Fowl, but I am amused by the title and the glow effects are really nice.
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General-EbonRose In reply to wolfjmk [2010-02-25 20:39:55 +0000 UTC]
I'm not a grammar nazi, just confused, there's a pause between "nice" and "where is the story for this"?
To answer the question I assume you asked, the story is in my head. Few stories ever make it out of there, and very few of those are fanfiction.
But I might write up some of it if people keep asking XD I'm sucker for that kind of thing.
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wolfjmk In reply to General-EbonRose [2010-02-26 02:30:35 +0000 UTC]
It's ok. My Grammer sucks. XD
I think it would make a great fanfiction.
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addictedtogerardway In reply to casicapa22 [2010-02-25 17:05:27 +0000 UTC]
me three!! amazing!
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