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he now resides in susurration:shaken from our summer sheets,
flags drawn taut and shuddering,
and wispseeds rising into the light
with their dressing gowns unbuttoned,
planting onto my lips that name
i've tried to hang with himself;
on a late morning,
while folding your laundry,
i found him again and held his tongue
when he yearned to speak of love
that once transpired in his passion,
or maybe it was the infatuation
of surrealists: brown skin but touched
upon each other,
marking the insignificant with brands
of remembrance: like the crinkling of
tinfoil or the crisping of smokers' lungs
or the thought that cigarettes are only
romantic if you can witness their glow
or hear them faintly burningβ
white ash rests on the dashboard
and his fingers are caked with rust
in my flashbulb drug collections:
the color of blood that's been drying
in my mouth while i try to recall how it felt
to hold someone who might have come
and remained forever breathing
if that letter had never reached my door:
blue ink reminds me of death,
black of his pupils,
and red of ghosts who awaken
when one unfolds
paper.
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Comments: 15
QuirkyCuriousBex [2013-06-04 03:10:10 +0000 UTC]
Holy shiiit, you are amazing. I'm flabbergasted.
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jskullly [2013-04-13 17:21:33 +0000 UTC]
I could see that in some anthology right up next to Ashbery and not bat an eyelash.
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glossolalias In reply to jskullly [2013-04-13 17:28:35 +0000 UTC]
that is a huge compliment, thank you
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Nemonus [2013-03-14 01:38:26 +0000 UTC]
Very nice. I love the first line and "brands of remembrance", and the way the love (?) story waves in with the image of colors and substances and households. It's a very full poem, in a good way.
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oviedomedina [2013-03-10 04:06:29 +0000 UTC]
Amazing. Love the way you describe things!
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Is-lnds [2013-03-07 04:20:26 +0000 UTC]
damn, you've got some detailed imagery in there mate.
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glossolalias In reply to Is-lnds [2013-03-07 04:31:37 +0000 UTC]
haha, thank you.
i have been fucking with this for like three weeks every time i look at it i change something
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Is-lnds In reply to glossolalias [2013-03-08 18:49:33 +0000 UTC]
i do that with almost all my stuff in drafts. its a problem. lol
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glossolalias In reply to Is-lnds [2013-03-09 13:50:35 +0000 UTC]
i'm so much worse with my prose than my poetry. i can eventually leave my poetry alone.
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glossolalias In reply to PrideofPanem [2013-03-06 00:59:59 +0000 UTC]
haha, far from, but thank you.
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