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GothaWolf — CoV ch2 p45 - OLD version
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On this page Valen talks a lot
And because of that you can find out about him a little more 
Gosh! Background on this page took me a lot of time... --------------------------------------------------------------------
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Story by hellwarior and GothaWolf
Illustrations by GothaWolf
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Comments: 34
Valen tell's a lot. I see, is he a member of the Morag Tong?
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wow the deatil on balmora is outstanding!
great work gotha!!
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Gotuś, błagam Cię, jak piszesz tekst do komiksu, daj komuś do zbetowania.
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Tak jak Hell powiedział to on pisze teksty.
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Ja pisze teksty
zwykle nie ma czasu dać komuś do "bety"
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is the sixth house going to be involved in this comic? XP
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Awsome job on the background it was worth the time
Awsome work too
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Valen with Morag Tong, but he stayed with Neila at the Cuncil Club(Camonna Tong place)? Morag Tong is Camonna's(and Dark brotherhood) enemy, how it could be? O_o
btw i like this page and Valen's remark about Drarval Andrano
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Yes, they are enemy, but who said that Valen is a member of Morag Tong?
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Cool! I always look forward to these!
Okay, you do have a few spelling mistakes:
Bubble 2.) "...I never paid any attention to any of the bullshit they said about our Dunmer traditions. (you'll probably want this to be plural, b/c singular it means you're refering to a particular dunmer tradition, while traditions makes it more vague and in general.) But this was the only thing (assasination? A little vague, I mention that only b/c it's a bit too vague. Perhaps "a job" or "a hobby" "a group" "some people" etc.) I remember and I liked. Angahran is my old friend there; I hope he can help."
2.) Nothing grammatically/spelling wrong with it, but worded a little awkwardly.
3.) Nothing technically correct with it.
4.) "The Fighters' and the Mages' Guild...Wayn is a fine warrior. We traveled together for awhile. Maybe he can share some local gossip."
5.) And Galbedir the mage owes me a recommendation to a daedra specialist. (or rather, if you prefer to keep the sentence more in the same order as you have it) "And Galbedir the mage, she can recommend me to a daedra specialist, she owes me that at least."
6.) Should be "dice"
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Bubble:
1. Okay.
3. I don't understand... Everything is wrong or what?
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Ooops!
Sorry, that was supposed to be incorrect" 
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In the words of about 50% of the Star Wars cast:
"I've got a bad feeling about this."
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W 6 kadrze powinno być "gossips", o ile nie chodziło o nazwę jakichś tajemniczych, straszliwych stworów nawiedzających Balmorę 
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Some bugs:
* attention
* remember
* appearance
* recommend
Just for improvement of the title itself
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