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Granitoons — AMJ-Police and ThankYou part 1

Published: 2009-01-12 00:23:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 2817; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 29
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Description Girrrrls in uniform

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BluebottleFlyer [2009-02-10 18:40:22 +0000 UTC]

All three girls' personalities are being used to devastating effect here, May's ditziness in particular. Superbly sneaky villain as well.

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Granitoons In reply to BluebottleFlyer [2009-02-12 18:37:00 +0000 UTC]

I've no idea how they got into the force however, but who cares?

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Elise-Lucy [2009-01-16 20:08:38 +0000 UTC]

I gues the criminal was the guy in a reception But I'm not sure.

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Granitoons In reply to Elise-Lucy [2009-01-16 20:10:01 +0000 UTC]

Yes indeeeeed

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MeGaDuDeX [2009-01-12 22:02:43 +0000 UTC]

The uniforms are a nice change from the usual American style.

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Granitoons In reply to MeGaDuDeX [2009-01-13 14:19:59 +0000 UTC]

Uniforms always interest me as well a the ranking systems they have for different divisions etc.

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starkelstar [2009-01-12 20:08:07 +0000 UTC]

yay police gals great gags the clothes being left behind is classic - he really is a master of disguise June stealing a lollipop off a small child tut tut

Cool how you done the b/w background too

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Granitoons In reply to starkelstar [2009-01-12 20:11:12 +0000 UTC]

She's keeping the lollipop as evidence

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starkelstar In reply to Granitoons [2009-01-12 20:15:28 +0000 UTC]

surely having it in her mouth may contaminate the forensic evidence ?!

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Granitoons In reply to starkelstar [2009-01-12 20:17:54 +0000 UTC]

Now why bring logic into it? She's examining it for possible illegal substances.

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starkelstar In reply to Granitoons [2009-01-12 20:25:14 +0000 UTC]

ahh she works for the CSI (candy sugar investigation) team !

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ShaneJensenToons [2009-01-12 19:41:53 +0000 UTC]

Hahahaha... I love all the random jokes in this. The staff and maid ones laugh. I love this, it's too funny. You are very good with the details like the "sound effects". I've never seen sound effects like this in a comic, I actually feel like I'm watching an animated cartoon. Bloody brilliant.

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Granitoons In reply to ShaneJensenToons [2009-01-12 19:44:02 +0000 UTC]

That's onomatopoeia [link] for ya

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ShaneJensenToons In reply to Granitoons [2009-01-12 19:52:11 +0000 UTC]

There is even a term for it. Haha... You use it very well in your stuff.

By the way, I sent you an email late last night containing the references for the commission I'd like you to do. Finally got around to typing it all out.

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Granitoons In reply to ShaneJensenToons [2009-01-12 19:54:46 +0000 UTC]

I haven't got any emails from you I'm afraid. I've just checked.

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ShaneJensenToons In reply to Granitoons [2009-01-12 19:55:40 +0000 UTC]

Check your bulk mail folder. I sent it to the Yahoo address you have listed in your journal.

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QwertyChris [2009-01-12 16:04:36 +0000 UTC]

"Maid in Heaven?" Cute, cute joke

I'll be keeping me eye on this story. Just the mention of "leg work" grabbed my attention...kidding

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Granitoons In reply to QwertyChris [2009-01-12 18:18:28 +0000 UTC]

Reference to dancing (Foxtrot, Tango )

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AgentC-24 [2009-01-12 14:49:23 +0000 UTC]

I got a good chuckle out of the small part of June playing with the bell! And the girls look and act great here! Even though I read the read-through, I can't wait for the conclusion here! Well done so far, pal.

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Granitoons In reply to AgentC-24 [2009-01-12 18:20:02 +0000 UTC]

June's mainly a visual character so her bits are just made up as I draw! She's apparently confiscated the boy's lollipop too, not scripted

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Itchyscratchy [2009-01-12 07:07:11 +0000 UTC]

Ha ha love it when that thief runs out of his clothes.

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Granitoons In reply to Itchyscratchy [2009-01-12 08:02:43 +0000 UTC]

That was actually a last-minute thing as I wanted to make it obvious it was the disguise guy

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TopperHay [2009-01-12 00:34:01 +0000 UTC]

I like how the girl's personalities are so strong, you can put them in any situation, and it works.

Also, I like the camp "hotel manager". I can just imagine his voice!

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Granitoons In reply to TopperHay [2009-01-12 00:35:46 +0000 UTC]

Frank Nelson! Yyyyeeeeeeeeesssssss??!?!?!? I love girrrrrls.

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