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Published: 2006-09-04 09:41:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 10299; Favourites: 97; Downloads: 519
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A quick one I did about an hour ago for practice, just felt like uploading it because I don't have anything else to do. :3 A girl getting tf'ed by some gloves, boots, under garments... etc, obviously inspired by bigbossman's story hosted on soty's site... cept for soty's illustration is five kajillion times better than this quick sketch.
Anyhoo, I tried to make the head smaller this time, but somehow ended up stretching her entire body. Believe me, I didn't intend that... >_< I really need to work on my anatomy...
Eh... I really don't have anything else to say, so I guess I'll stop typing now... Critiques are more than welcome, I would appreciate any tips or advise, so.... critiques... please?
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This would be awesome in a sequence. I could see her feet changing and tail starting in the first pic. This would probably be the next pic. Then for the final one she could have rear cat legs, real paws instead of hands, and fur over all of her. Probably not standing on two legs due to having cat legs.
I'm not saying go do all that (although I wouldn't mind if you did!), but this image made me think of it. Btw have you ever considered doing a sequence?
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As a matter of fact I did... though everytime I try to start I got lazy... XD Really oughtta do one some day though, can't draw one frame ones forever. :3
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I'm absolutely flattered!
Great work, H Dubbya! One thing I might advise on: typically, a woman's hips are just as wide or wider than her shoulders. Only in dudes are the shoulders generally wider.
Otherwise, you're lookin' good.
Oh yeh- if you liked the Halloween Costume stories, check your messages.
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Thanks! 
And thanks also for pointing out that error to me. I'll keep that in mind the next time I draw a girl. ;D
Sorry about replying to your note before I even read your comment, I tend to be impulsive sometimes. >_< *slaps head*
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Your welcome. 
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Looks like she's becoming more of a lioness then a cat
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That's why it's a generic feline tf instead of just cat tf. Coz I seriously wasn't sure what she's turning into.
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Well, okay.
Trying for ol' Soty's style? God, that spaz needs to update, and more of an update than just telling us "Ohhh, I'm poor, nobody pays me!"kinda update.
God, just put the commission in your desk drawer and move on!
Okay, critique. Well, your upper body is magnificent, although y'could use a little differential between t3h b00bz and the torso, just to show they're not a single unit, but two interlinked ones, b00b and torso.
Torso files down to the hips nicely...hey, perhaps, with hips that size, y'should show a slight curve of the hamstring meeting the thigh trailing up into the gap. Y'know. That hentai kinda stuff. (What Aries Is Really Thinking: Baby needs back!!)
Y'definitely need more definition on the kneecaps. Your anatomy is really not that far off, and where it is, y'can get away with it. But we need to see that there's a bone on top of that knee joint, and just how muscled it is.
This is a perfect excuse to ask your female friends, or, in some cases, real girlfriends, to let you stare at their knees. *grins.* Use it.
Also, Aries's opinion is that the angle on that left boot heel is a bit too sharp. The foot is pretty good. The heel needs a little tackling, Aries isn't quite sure how.
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An old proverb comes to mind: "the fish never feels wet." You're only frustrated that I stopped posting free art lately because I spent several years... posting free art.
But if it's any consolation, I'm very sorry that you're upset about me not getting paid.
But don't expect anything new for a while. My wacom tablet's broken, and I'll need $80 for my replacement (a bit of a downgrade, but the Aiptek tablets have a stronger cord. Guess what broke on my last tablet... ugh.) Incidentally, if I got paid for my last commission, I'd have $100 left over.
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*narrows his eyes, then sighs.*
How much does that holmes owe?
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For how much artistic goodness?
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5 page girl to anthro wolf via pendant, all in comic style, fully inked, fully colored.
By all rights, I'm under-charging him if anything.
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Digital color or traditional?
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Digital, painted in Photoshop. So, you see, I've every right to be miffed over a waaaay late payment on what was a plenty good deal to begin with.
And, er... since this is someone else's deviation, perhaps we should save the 20 questions for notes or emails? Seems like the right thing to do...
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*Takes notes* 8D
Your critique is by far one of, if not THE most useful critique I've got.
Differentiate t3h b00b and the torso? I'm afraid I don't really understand what you're trying to say. Srry english isn't my first language. >_< And what's that thing about hamstring? I know it's a muscle but I don't quite understand the second bit... never seen hentei pic before... What can I say? I'm just THAT innocent.
As for the knee cap bit, I do admit that I don't have enough understanding about the human/furry skeletal and muscle anatomy since I've never ever studied them. I learnt drawing from observing other ppl's art and trial and error. I'll pay more attention to that part next time.
Yeah, I really wish soty could update some pics too. Sure that other guy's being a bit of an ass not paying soty. But truthfully I don't think that should stop him from posting other stuffs that he has already drawn. But that's just me.
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I like it. Pose, expression, both nice. And the unnecessary exposure.
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Yay for unnecessary exposure! XD
jk. The reason why she's half naked is that I spent like an eternity trying to get the body outline right. And after I finally got the basic outline sorted I just don't feel like adding on the clothes. >_<
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