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Published: 2004-10-19 02:14:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 82; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 8
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Description I have felt the deep of deep,
the silence of sleep,
the cloads above,
wing beats of a dove,
the world is dark,
reach for light and hark,
we all have places in these worlds,
I find mine and you find yours,
Immonrtal lines, thick and bold,
this is story I have told,
Life is but a story said,
and when you sleep in your bed,
another chapter comes alive,
From what you love, and despise.
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Comments: 4

spikethegoddess [2004-10-19 03:01:55 +0000 UTC]

it has a nice flow but i feel like you left out something in the middle area....

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harlequinnmonsoona In reply to spikethegoddess [2004-10-19 03:09:15 +0000 UTC]

maybe, I'm no expert.

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DaRkBlUeBuTTeRFlY [2004-10-19 02:28:24 +0000 UTC]

great I love your choice of words

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harlequinnmonsoona In reply to DaRkBlUeBuTTeRFlY [2004-10-19 02:34:58 +0000 UTC]

^^ Thanks.

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