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“Wow! So Devonshire and another Pokemon named… what? Gunpowder? Saved you and Meri from a laboratory?” Noir was shocked to know their past.“Indeed.” Leon gazed into the dying fire. He poked the fire with a stick to help it die more quickly. “At that time, Meri could not control her abilities very well. She was constantly using Sunny Day for no reason…” He continued, “that was when we got to know Aelius and Anthea. Aelius was the Sunkern and Anthea was the Oddish. Apparently, they were homeless. They loved the light and warmth emitted from Meri. Thus, they followed us all the way to our home, which is where we are at now.”
“Meri is sure lovely…” As the Haunter spoke, it seemed as if some red hearts were flowing out from his head.
“She does not have parents, which is why she understood what it was like. She begged me to let them stay and well, that is why they are here.” He stopped for a while and counted his fingers. “…we have been taking care of them for several weeks now. It is my fault that we could not be around for the whole time…” The Riolu pinned his ears back in remorse.
Seeing his sad face, Noir tried to cheer him up. “I see that the snow started unexpectedly, it’s really not your fault that you can’t foresee the future. In my opinion, it’s really fortunate for them to have met you two. I can see that you and Meri have some kind and caring hearts.”
Noir continued, “Speaking of parents, I can’t remember if I have any. I’m pretty sure that I was born in the tower, but I was usually alone for the longest time I could recall.” The Haunter turned his head to Leon, who was still stirring the campfire. “What about you? Where are your father and mother?”
There was an awkward silence when the ghost asked those questions.
“I have lost them.” Leon’s expression seemed rather blank. “When I was little, I was kidnapped to the laboratory. I couldn’t even remember their faces now…”
“Sorry…” Noir realized he had asked the wrong question. He showed a sympathetic face. “Don’t get your hope down though. You will get to meet them again one day. Somehow, I get the feeling that they may be seeking for you somewhere in the world.”
“Thank you. Let’s get some rest now.” Leon poured the reserved water onto the campfire. He made sure it was completely put out before finally entering the tent with Noir.
“I don’t have a sleeping bag for you though, but I guess you don’t need one, right?” Leon said when he realized the Haunter needed a place to sleep.
“Nah, I’ll just stick with where Meri is.” The ghost drifted to somewhere near Meri’s sleeping bag. He folded his hands together and slept on them. “G’night!” He said by the way.
“Good night.” Leon replied when he hopped into his sleeping bag.
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Comments: 39
RahrCat [2011-09-20 20:17:09 +0000 UTC]
I've finally caught up with your comic and posted comments on them....now I feel like a spammer.
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Haychel In reply to RahrCat [2011-09-21 06:47:07 +0000 UTC]
and I've finally caught up with your comments~~ I feel complete.
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RahrCat In reply to Haychel [2011-09-21 18:28:59 +0000 UTC]
This is another comment,now you can be complete-er than before
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0okami-Rei [2011-09-20 04:28:11 +0000 UTC]
“Wow! So Devonshire and another Pokemon named… what? Gunpowder? Saved you and Meri from a laboratory?” Noir was shocked to know their past.
“Indeed.” Leon gazed into the dying fire. He poked the fire with a stick to help it die more quickly. “At that time, Meri could not control her abilities very well. She was constantly using Sunny Day for no reason…” He continued, “that was when we got to know Aelius and Anthea. Aelius was the Sunkern and Anthea was the Oddish. Apparently, they were homeless. They loved the light and warmth emitted from Meri. Thus, they followed us all the way to our home, which is where we are at now.”
“Meri is sure lovely…” As the Haunter spoke, it seemed as if some red hearts was flowing out from his head. (the expression here is a little odd.)
“She does not have parents, which is why she understood what it was like. She begged me to let them stay and well, that's why they are here now.” He stopped for a while and counted his fingers. “…we have been taking care of them for several weeks now. It is my fault that we could not be around for the whole time…” The Riolu pinned his ears back in remorse. ("flipping ears back" isn't a very good expression. This should help you a bit)
Seeing his sad face, Noir tried to cheer him up. “I see that the snow started unexpectedly, it’s really not your fault that you can’t foresee the future. In my opinion, it’s really fortunate for them to have met you two. I can see that you and Meri have some kind and caring hearts.”
Noir continued, “Speaking of parents, I can’t remember if I have any. I’m pretty sure that I was born in the tower, but I was usually alone for the longest time I could recall.” The Haunter turned his head to Leon, who was still stirring the campfire. “What about you? Where are your father and mother?”
There was an awkward silence when the ghost asked these questions.
“I have lost them.” Leon’s expression seemed rather blank. “When I was little, I was kidnapped to the laboratory. I can't even remember their faces now…”
“Sorry…” Noir knew he had asked the wrong question. He showed a sympathetic face. “Don’t get your hopes down though. You will get to meet them again one day. Somehow, I get the feeling that they may be seeking for you somewhere in the world.”
“Thank you. Let’s get some rest now.” Leon poured the reserved water onto the campfire. He made sure it was completely put out before finally entering the tent with Noir.
“I don’t have a sleeping bag for you though, but I guess you don’t need one, right?” Leon said when he realized the Haunter needed a place to sleep.
“Nah, I’ll just stick with where Meri is.” The ghost drifted to somewhere near Meri’s sleeping bag. He folded his hands together and slept on them. “G’night!” he called.
“Good night.” Leon replied as he hopped into his sleeping bag.
Nice backstory. Anyway, helped with a few expression errors..
I really loooove your pictures. Ywahhhh.....T^T
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Haychel In reply to 0okami-Rei [2011-09-21 06:46:26 +0000 UTC]
Thank you~~ and it's a nice way to lead into some other stories...
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Etsoree [2011-09-18 17:46:53 +0000 UTC]
Interesting past lives for them. Now, they're loners who've drifted together and made a place called home.
I think I'm a Noir fanboy, too.
Dunno which of these are better: the story or the picture itself.
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Haychel In reply to Etsoree [2011-09-18 22:51:36 +0000 UTC]
hah exactly.
Go Noir fanbase!!
Both!
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wolfdude131 [2011-09-18 17:21:51 +0000 UTC]
Noir... you and your perfect hair... I can imagone him and Snug getting along
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sonyathehedgragon [2011-09-18 16:49:34 +0000 UTC]
oh noir XD will he ever get over how pretty meri is?
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Srarlight [2011-09-18 15:20:18 +0000 UTC]
I love this little camp fire scene all the colors are so warm!
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Darkmask7 [2011-09-18 14:55:06 +0000 UTC]
heh this is so cool. could I use that pic at the top for a ref plz?
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Haychel In reply to Darkmask7 [2011-09-18 14:57:50 +0000 UTC]
what do you mean for reference?
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Darkmask7 In reply to Haychel [2011-09-18 15:00:02 +0000 UTC]
mmm nvm lol sorry for asking i thought something was something....
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Drakel-X [2011-09-18 14:35:47 +0000 UTC]
oh n should "couldn’t even remember their face now…" be "couldn’t even remember their faces now…"?
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Haychel In reply to Drakel-X [2011-09-18 14:38:56 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, corrected~ What a silly mistake...
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Drakel-X In reply to Haychel [2011-09-18 14:43:27 +0000 UTC]
nah, i make typos all the time lol
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Drakel-X [2011-09-18 14:34:24 +0000 UTC]
lol a Ghost Pokemon's life can be quite convenient if u ask me, they sleep in the air
how cool is that? i imagine it to be quite comfortable... oh i shouldnt be thinking abt sleep when im also doing some hw D:
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Haychel In reply to Drakel-X [2011-09-18 14:38:24 +0000 UTC]
Good luck with your hw, I'm gonna sleep now~
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Drakel-X In reply to Haychel [2011-09-18 14:43:04 +0000 UTC]
D: don say the word!
n goodnight
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Dendris [2011-09-18 14:32:50 +0000 UTC]
"She was constantly using Sunny Day for no reasons…”" I think you just mean 'reason'.
"Speaking of parents, I can’t remember I have any." You mean 'if I have any.', right?
Well, it's nice to see these two can get along.
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Haychel In reply to Dendris [2011-09-18 14:37:04 +0000 UTC]
Done correcting, thanks a lot!
Their not really getting along, Leon just felt that as a team member, Noir should know their past.
Just dun do weird stuff to Meri, or else...
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Dendris In reply to Haychel [2011-09-18 14:39:59 +0000 UTC]
Oh god, don't give the cheeky Haunter ideas!
I'm going to go with Noir feels really protective of Meri? c:
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Haychel In reply to Dendris [2011-09-18 14:44:19 +0000 UTC]
I think you mean Leon feels protective of Meri? If that is so, I will go with yes~
Geez I should have explained it in the background story, but it is never finished~~~
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Dendris In reply to Haychel [2011-09-18 14:46:01 +0000 UTC]
So, Noir's just simply obsessed? XD
"She's drrreeeaaammmyyy~" Oh dear this could get awkward. X3
Oh backstory, how you kick everyone in the nuts.
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Haychel In reply to Dendris [2011-09-18 14:50:35 +0000 UTC]
I guess he is, but he never gets over Leon.. So what else could he do other than "I LOOOOVVVEE HER~~~"?
I'm sorry about that~~
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Dendris In reply to Haychel [2011-09-18 14:52:40 +0000 UTC]
I try coming up with background story for things I'm trying to create, so I can sympathise.
XD
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Haychel In reply to Dendris [2011-09-18 14:57:24 +0000 UTC]
Think big, but don't have the assets to carry it out...
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Dendris In reply to Haychel [2011-09-18 15:01:39 +0000 UTC]
Take your time...
Most of the things in my head I'm putting to paper now are at 1-2 years old, a fair few are roughly 5 years old.
Give it time to make sense. It works for me I find.
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