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High-On-Fairydust β Final animated sketch! ( Thoughts needed)
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Published: 2016-09-22 12:32:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 46075; Favourites: 585; Downloads: 548
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Here we are... i've finally finished the SKETCH for of the animation. Next up are the lines and the colors, then it's done.Pretty much everything i wanted is in here right now, arms, boobs, jean lines and shoes.
Now i'm just looking for some thought, some things i might need to change before i can start lining~Β
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sooo looking forward to seeing this finished
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...The inside of her thighs must be burning from the friction rubbing...
Still cool though.
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When i get off my lazy ass and finish it.
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It is still good anyway
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It is still good anyway
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Maybe make a moving background to use as a frame of reference of how fast or slow she is walking. Also try making Sam bob up and down slightly with the bounce of her step. Lastly her face looks a little chubbier than normal, could use a small fix but I'm sure you are fully capable of doing such a thing. Otherwise looks great, can't wait to see a final version
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Alright it is good, really good, but I think it is missing one thing: up-down motion.
Her head and torso remain on practically the same horizontal lines, I would suggest giving her a bit of bounce with some squash and stretch.
Also, the boobs are just not jiving with me. Β Maybe its the fact that THEY are bouncing a lot, but the rest of her barely is. Β See how they seem to leap off her belly after each step despite there not looking like they have sufficient cause to do so
(i.e) torso doesn't transfer the motion of the legs up into the breasts.
In short, I suggest two options:
CALM YOUR TITS: Β Re-do the breasts so it is more of a gentle sloshing from side to side like everything else, minimizing bounce (meaning you won't have to change much else and the animation becomes fluid and uniform motion)
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BOUNCE SQUASH STRETCH: If the head, torso and arms are separate assets, try to come up with a little bounce made with them to match the boobs you have now, as well as maybe giving the torso a bit of squash and stretch Β (overall this is a higher quality, more sexy option).
I hope this helps or at least was not too preachy, keep up the great work!!
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Not bad. Needs more colour tough, and maybe some clothes! Looks epic otherwise
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it looks amazing!! I cant wait to see this fully inked and colored
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oh damn this is prety sick XD haha animation is as smooth as glass. i know for a fact that Β youre going to finish this up great! awesome attention to every subtle movement n bounce
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Man this is some nice, smooth animation. What'd you animate using?
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I'm using Clipstudio.
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If anything, Just in consideration of Sam's meaty legs; Maybe a slight quiver or shake? I'm not entirely sure how much is muscle over fat or vice versa.
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It's Amazing! The only other thing I could ask for is even more jiggly in the legs/butt and a behind view next!
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This is very well done! I'd say change the timing of the pow's by just a fraction of a second sooner, and maybe lower the bounciness of the boobs by a bit? Or not haha π
You've made a ton of improvement already, the flow has become much more smooth and delightful.
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For this being your first animated gif, it is good but the "POW" signs need to be timed correctly, they're kind of late from my point. All and all it is impressive.
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looks fantastic! the only odd thing to me is where her feet step
its just my thoughts on it but it seems Sam's feet should be a little further apart from her size while walking
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Ever thought of doing an animated show for Samantha?
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Everything looks great -- it's obvious an incredible amount of time has gone into this. If I had to make one critique (only since you asked) it would be that the head/face/hair area seems a teeny tiny bit small in comparison to the width of the shoulders, but that's just me. Can't wait to see what it looks like when it's finished!
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Ever thought of doing an animated show for Samantha?
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i would like to see a shirtless version buuut... it looks good
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She's merely walking, yet there's so much going on. @.@
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I think as it stands, it's pretty solid. Smooth framework, well-structured anatomy. I don't see anything that can be improved on, so my vote is to go to stage two!
Speaking to the actual subject matter, I think it's great, and it's only gonna get better :3
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God the work on this was amazing Fairy ^w^Β
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Ooo~ Thats looking really polished now!
For a while I wasn't sure it was working out but that looks awesome~
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Does kinda look like that.
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