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Naruto was shocked, "What the HECK?!" Sakura looked afraid, "I-I-I don't know what came over me. I am sorry Naruto." Naruto laughed, "Nah, i was just a little surprised. I-I mean you never liked me more than a freind." Sakura said, "I realized he never has nor will her ever treat me with respect." Naruto was perplexed but asked, "What do you mean? Did i do smothing wrong. I am sorry if i did." "Naruto, you did. But it was postive, you realized where my heart really lies. That person is you Naruto. I love you i have always been in love with you i was just too blind to see it. You know that couch must be uncomfy so you wanna sleep with me tonight?." Naruto asked if she was sure to wich Sakura nodded. She continued and asked,"Naruto would like to go on a date. You know like a picnic." Naruto nodded and said, " I'll make the lunches, don't worry no ramen. I want it to be romantic. I'll go get the food and i will be right back." As he was walking down the street he saw Kiba and Hinata walking hand in hand. Naruto ran up to them, "Hey guys. I was wondering what should be in a romantic pinic lunch and do you guys recomend a spot?." Kiba laughed, "Why who are you taking out?." Naruto said, "Sakura." Hinata piped up, "um-um, the training ground. Its not used around noon." Kiba said, "Yeah, grilled chicken sandwiches with sun-dried tomatoes or Beef and Spinach Pita Pockets, a salad with some choclates. Also Old Fashioned Pink-Lemonade.Trust me. Bring an umbrella just in case it rains a blanket." Naruto nodded and yelled, "Thanks guys." as he sprinted off. After awhile, he returned and Sakura was asleep. So he started to make the food. When it was time for their picnic, he awoke Sakura. Sakura noticed the picnic basket. and smiled. She said, "So where is the picnic going to be?." Naruto replied, "The training ground, Hianta and kiba said, "Its not used around noon." So they walked to the training feild and naruto put the blanket on the ground "Madam, We have grilled chicken sandwichs. With a nice tossed salad. For dessert we have chocolate dipped strawberries. The bervege is homemade lemonade." Sakura could not help laughing at naruto trying to be a waiter. The blonde haired boy took out the sandwiches and placed them on plates. He then poured a glass of lemonade. Sakura smiled at how sweet he was to her. Naruto finnaly put the salad on the plate and they started eating. Sakura said, "This is delious naruto. Thanks" Naruto replied, "I wanted it to special." Suddenly it started to rain and Naruto opened the umberlla and noticed, sakura was cold so he handed her a blanet. They then ate the strawberries. Naruto felt Sakura snuggle up to him. It maybe raining but it was a perfect day. That night, they crawled into naruto's bed and snuggled up. Naruto kissed Sakura good night. She said, "Naruto, thanks for a great day. It really got my mind off what happend to me." But he fell asleepRelated content
Comments: 17
floput [2013-05-13 08:07:18 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I was curious about what happened to Hinata glad you didn't just ignored her like a lot of Narusaku fans (though this story kindda confuses me )
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floput In reply to historygeek5 [2013-05-18 19:14:52 +0000 UTC]
Yes thanks for clarifying that
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monkygrl456 [2011-06-08 01:24:55 +0000 UTC]
you should try to slow it down and add more fluff and transitions ^_^
but you have a good story going!
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historygeek5 In reply to monkygrl456 [2011-06-08 02:30:35 +0000 UTC]
alright thanks for the tip
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tophytoph-toph12 [2011-02-28 04:01:51 +0000 UTC]
i agree, its moving a little to fast and its really choppy. like "bLAH BLAH *change the subject* blah balh *change*'
but overall, the concept is ok.
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historygeek5 In reply to tophytoph-toph12 [2011-02-28 06:59:00 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the contruive critzim!
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historygeek5 In reply to tophytoph-toph12 [2011-02-28 08:06:31 +0000 UTC]
ps awesome icon with toph lol
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historygeek5 In reply to tophytoph-toph12 [2011-02-28 06:58:29 +0000 UTC]
thanks for constucive crtizem
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historygeek5 In reply to kast43 [2010-12-30 22:17:41 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for pointing that out.
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kast43 In reply to historygeek5 [2010-12-31 03:54:48 +0000 UTC]
LOL sorry, but i do like this story XD
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kast43 In reply to historygeek5 [2010-12-31 04:31:23 +0000 UTC]
XD cant wait to see where is goes!
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