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The adorable Phoebe in chess-wonderland..I have to confess I like chess pattern
Another picture from the gorgeous shooting with Phoebe, I think I'll upload some more the next time. Make up, collar and minihat were made by my girlfriend
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Comments: 90
armene In reply to ??? [2009-11-30 10:13:49 +0000 UTC]
you said no bad word, only compliments but rated it not very high (vision - 3 s?)
it seems to be some contradiction here, i have some versions: you said not all you think but only good part, you made mistake, or something in your critique is fake - critique itself or rating you set
as for me - i'm agree with written critique, but not with rating
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kittyissad In reply to armene [2009-11-30 17:35:51 +0000 UTC]
no bad word? the vision was ment to be a 4 mistakes happen and to me it seemed to pop but not a wow pop to me. something in my critique is fake what does that even mean. there was nothing over all bad with the picture it just caught my eye to a certain point.
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armene In reply to kittyissad [2009-11-30 19:00:41 +0000 UTC]
THEME: BLACK AND WHITE AWSOME - + (positive)
The outfit is very wonderful and adorable. - + (positive)
The hair just matches the whole black and white theme and the way her face is looking is wow i love it. - + (positive)
Her blue eyes are gorgeous too. - + (positive)
It looks like a evil alice in wonderland version.
The checkered floor (i'm wondering how thats done?) it makes the picture POP even more - in the worst case can be evaluated as neutral
Like the critique before said it looks like your looking throught a pep hole is true and i agree with that part. - agreeing with the author that could better be described as a positive evaluation and understanding of his creative idea, so + positive
over all this is a awsome picture and sticks out more then a lot of your pictures. - absolutely positive
would love to work with you hopefully - wish to work with author can't be evaluated as negative position to his creativity
where are mistakes you talking about? you said nothing, just gave low rating
if you write critique try to evaluate author's work from every side
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kittyissad In reply to armene [2009-11-30 19:27:17 +0000 UTC]
instead of nitpicking on how i critique why dont you do it yourself. not every one critiques the same way as you do.
wishing to work with him is a compliment cuz its saying i love his work and would like to be apart of it so b4 you stab at that "look at every side"
i gave a low rating cuz that was my choice and how i seen it all...i'll evaluate it the way i do and when you critique the way you do hopefully no one points out everything you say
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armene In reply to kittyissad [2009-11-30 19:43:25 +0000 UTC]
i'm not critic, i'm photographer
and as photographer i was unpleasantly astonished by unreasonably low estimate
if you write critique you can't just say "i gave a low rating cuz that was my choice",
it sounds like "your art is not very good, although i don't know why"
your critique should be grounded and thoughtful, you should point to the author what you like and what you don't or what you think could be better and in what way - only such feedback has sense like critique, for other there are comments
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kittyissad In reply to armene [2009-11-30 20:39:10 +0000 UTC]
obv you are a critic...like i said let me do things my way and you do things yours
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armene In reply to kittyissad [2009-11-30 20:49:41 +0000 UTC]
if you do your things public - be ready to public answer, we all are free to express out thoughts and opinion
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kittyissad In reply to armene [2009-12-01 01:07:13 +0000 UTC]
well if the owner of the picture didn't like what i had to say he could of denyed it so obv he doesn't have a prob with it so deal
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armene In reply to kittyissad [2009-12-05 13:48:52 +0000 UTC]
i suppose that the author is too polite
sometimes it creates frameworks we can not overcome
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NiniriAZ [2009-11-27 00:43:37 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
She's not quite Alice-in-Wonderland, but Phoebe is far more interesting. Her coy expression makes one wonder if she's as innocent as she looks, or if she's got mischief on her mind.
The lighting and camera angle almost could convince one that they're viewing the image through a peep hole. The perspective and chequerboard tiles also lend the aspects of a funhouse mirror warping reality into illusion, and perhaps making the viewer wonder about that division (between illusion and reality, of course).
A touch more contrast would've made the texture and shape of Phoebe's dress 'e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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TheDrK [2010-08-03 15:45:55 +0000 UTC]
Awww it's so dolly..I love it..I love the expression and angel too <33
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SublimeBudd [2010-02-14 18:51:18 +0000 UTC]
awesome shot
where is this place with that long of an awesome floor?
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BridgetTheStrange [2010-01-07 00:14:16 +0000 UTC]
love this picture! love the outfit, so cute!!!! amazing!
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Pirate-King-SYR [2009-12-16 04:06:21 +0000 UTC]
This whole shooting has a fantastic aesthetic. Beautiful work.
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0-N-E [2009-12-08 20:15:05 +0000 UTC]
madame van raspberry ist ja aber auch ein schnucki
habt ihr fein gemacht!
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Gypsy-Laura [2009-12-08 15:00:50 +0000 UTC]
Im alice in wonderland obsessed and you are lucky to have a beautiful subject to photograph handy as a girlfriend
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sididis [2009-11-29 11:42:59 +0000 UTC]
The first thing I thought of when I saw this pic was Angelspit
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hoschie In reply to sididis [2009-12-27 23:34:37 +0000 UTC]
What a beautiful and interesting model
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SoniaHedge [2009-11-28 15:57:22 +0000 UTC]
I love her hair color I have the same!!! hi hi hi
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SoniaHedge In reply to hoschie [2009-12-30 23:02:33 +0000 UTC]
But now I have it brown again cause I had to dye them back otherwise it would have scrapped...
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darkn2ght [2009-11-28 07:11:46 +0000 UTC]
i just dig those angles! would love to model my next manga character in those angles!
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AnKiN94 [2009-11-27 12:31:29 +0000 UTC]
Powerfull & beautifull. Tha fact that you used mostly just 2 colours in the picture only shows the pic's perfectness.
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Suzuken [2009-11-27 03:56:12 +0000 UTC]
I like her dress and her hair it's like modern "Dark" alice in wonderland >.<
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Prailin [2009-11-26 23:22:50 +0000 UTC]
I absolutely love her outfit and the photo perspective >3<
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sorakairi1014 [2009-11-26 23:12:55 +0000 UTC]
her dress is really cute! the angling is peeeerfect and i love just about everything in this picture!
good job 'v'
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Ophelia-Overdose [2009-11-26 21:43:44 +0000 UTC]
Echt toll!!! Irgendwie creepy aber auch total cute
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hoschie In reply to Ophelia-Overdose [2009-12-28 00:23:28 +0000 UTC]
Vielen Dank Muse Sweet und creepy sind immer eine gute Mischung
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Otharia-Luna [2009-11-26 21:02:35 +0000 UTC]
Wow, that is absolutely gorgeous!
And what a great dress.
And the accessories are awesome
I wish I had a boyfriend or girlfriend who could make things like that..
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hoschie In reply to Otharia-Luna [2009-12-28 00:24:18 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much
I'm really glad to have her (not only because of the creative stuff of course ). A lot of photographer are a little envy
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