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hydroplain — My Addiction
Published: 2011-12-28 00:45:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 83; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description Gas from the stick
leaves joys from the tick,
ashes, ashes, all around.

Sizzling sparks,
soothing barks.

The body takes,
the soul awakes.

Nerves racing,
smoke erasing.

Mind clears,
passion sears.

Always burning,
ever knowing.

Flick, flick.

Ashes,
they kick.

Physically gone,
forever,
won.
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Comments: 3

Yuri212 [2011-12-28 17:56:22 +0000 UTC]

You smoke?? Didn't know that. I'm never going to smoke personally

Another awesome poem though I think you should make more literature really

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hydroplain In reply to Yuri212 [2011-12-28 18:50:17 +0000 UTC]

lol i love writing but im tryna draw but i guess i should throw in some literature for sure. thanks =]

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Yuri212 In reply to hydroplain [2011-12-28 18:55:58 +0000 UTC]

Yeah that's what I meant you should do both Spread them out equally or do digital art based on characters you make up on your storys A lot of people do that

No Problem though

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