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Here's the conclusion to the story. Congrats to ssbbdave for being the first to respond and give Jill her fate. He chose to give her a TF as Charizard*Have Merry Christmas and New Year and see you next time
*Β©Nintendo
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I wonder how she's feeling inside... Is she only putting up a show to keep her brothers happy..?
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I think in that last frame she is in shock pretty much. I doubt she had any idea what she was at that point.
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So she lost her memories..?
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naa Santa wouldn't let her off that easy. You just have to figure she had no way of looking at herself to figure out exactly what she was. And I would assume there would be some temporary shock factor with any TF
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That's not what happened to my OC, maybe that's because of his strong willpower...
Let's just hope Justin doesn't find out about this before her shock factor goes away... or somebody's gonna be pissed.
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Do you think she'd panic at the sight of my OC?
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She might. She's still just a teenage girl despite her physical form.
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Hopefully she won't be... He may want to see her.
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Moral:Never give into greed,nor
urges unless you want to start a new life.
Please.
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There is much truth in that :}
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Besides Greed leads to evil.
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She began to cry dragon tears.
Which, as we all know, turn into jelly babies!
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So Flight of the Conchords would have me believe.
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Sorry, obscure reference
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Nice. a KISS scenario. KISS - Keep it Simple, Stupid!
Nice job. I wish I had half your talent drawing that.
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Thank you. Yeah, definitely right on the 'kiss' aspect XD
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I never really liked Pokemon except charizard I remember I had the old Red game and he was my choice. Well done on the sequence...
I wonder if Jill found happiness after all by giving her siblings joy...
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I don't really know anything about Pokemon. I had to Google Charizard to find out what it was.
As far as Jill's new life, I'm sure it took some getting used to but if you think about it, it seems like she was a miserable person. Maybe the change was what she needed to find out her meaning and be at peace with herself and others.
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I somewhat know Pokemon because I had the oldest of the games and info from Super Smash Bros (one of the few games I still Play...)
Its not like Santa to punish severely so Maybe it was the gift she needed most.
Oh and Merry Christmas
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And Merry Christmas to you BTW. I hope you got what you wanted from Santa
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Yeah my son, Josh, has hundreds of the Pokemon cards and I do remember seeing Charizard but didn't know the name. It would be my favorite one as well. Josh loves the TF though...
Yeah as far as Santa, he is not a cruel man. He gave her and her siblings what they needed to right many years that were wronged. I think he just hoped she would see the light without his help (and without the parents having to remove a wall to let her outside
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Ah I actually found a crate full of the cards and dceided to keep them for Resale purposes after all there can be money made with them...
Indeed Santa is a saint after all and a very wise one at that but sometimes people need a change to change and the gift was the test to see if she was one of those people.(as for her parents I'm not sure thier insurance will cover it teh)
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I don't think they know much about insurance at the North Pole. I think Santa just gets the elves to fix the holes in the wall. Speaking of elves, I was originally going to do a TF involving elves, toys, and a pissed off Santa. But then I thought it wouldn't be in Santa's good charactor.....
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Yeah Santa's the kind of guy that even upset he's calm and has a jolly outlook...
Oh by the way I was thinking of something New Years related for a TF and I though Resolutions. For Example "This year I want to be as healthy as a horse" and then the person becomes a horse or vice versa... what do you think?
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It's a good idea, actually. Unfortunately I'm already working on a couple and wouldn't have time to do a whole new one by New Years.
I do have a girl-horse TF that is pretty much complete. There is just no story or backdrop. What keeps me from doing anything with it is she's naked and on all fours and I can't think of a scenario for her (besides an obvious bondage scene). I did have an idea where she was a budding Hollywood wannabe thinking she was in a big tanning booth while her agent has ulterior motives (but then why would he rather have a horse as an actress than a gorgeous babe?
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Maybe the only place she could get was a Mr.ED (the old show with the talking horse)-esk show but wasn't aware she was to be the horse...
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Well there is always a need for a smart trick horse. I like your idea with the audition. But maybe instead of a Mr. Ed type it would be an audition for a new Western show about a young woman and her horse and she is told she needs a good tan to be considered. I'd kind of like the whole "She wants to speak out against her producers but can only whinny and stomp her hoofs, etc".
A motive would be, even though she's hot, she's got some kind of career stalling 'human flaw' (maybe she's the agent's girlfriend and he finds she's fooling around or something).
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Oh right I forgot about westerns and I do like the protestry Idea.
Maybe her problem could be that they had already choosen an actress but they still wanted her to be in the show or maybe she has a problem speaking on camera...
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That is a good idea. She's cute but can't say her lines. Her cuteness would transcend as a horse but the speaking would no longer be an issue. Good show! I'll start work on this one as soon as I finish my other two and will give you credit in the story development. Thanks
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Glad to help I look forward to seeing them...
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Well the children seem happy.
I wonder what will happen now.
And I tell you that it looks great!
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