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Published: 2010-02-03 20:13:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 1705; Favourites: 40; Downloads: 26
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Description ... so we won't forget how serious we are
Riiiight

Damn, that was a lot of work xD I kept finding mistakes all the time xD Bad sketch is bad... God,please, don't let there be some disasterous flaw I could fix but didn't... xD
(which doesn't mean I wouldn't like any critique about it! I love getting tips! I crave critique! Critiiique meeee Ahem..sorry)

These are my OC's -Ezra and Irina. Which may or may not be only temporary names. But I think not. Like, in 90% I'm sure the names will stay :]
Ezra's the boy, and his name means "help". I choose it because even though he's quite excentric and acts silly most of time he's reliable and smart. He also have a strong sense of self-worh.
Irina's the girl (obviously ) and her name means "peace". She's just like her name-calm and quiet, but not shy. She's more of an introvert and has little friends. She's ok with it though.

Funny thing is they're like the newest and most undeveloped characters of mine, yet they're my first OC's I decide to put on DA But the idea of the picture ducktaped to me or something, and I really wanted to draw it It was based on the true story, which is portrayed in the middle 'photo' ^^ Although people from the real-life situation don't really resemble Ezra or Irina. Ok, they're both very skinny too, but that's it :3
Because c'mon, a guy painting his friend nails - it's cute xD

Critique is very welcomed
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Comments: 55

shwippie In reply to ??? [2010-02-04 03:05:29 +0000 UTC]

Yaaay this is uber cute The inventive composition is nice! I only wish that the top left photo wasn't so cut off...because I want to see more I can see they are big on personality ^^

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Incit In reply to shwippie [2010-02-04 11:31:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you
At first I wanted the middle photo to bring the most attention and I tried to keep other photos simple... but I guess it changed somwhere in the middle V.V''' So yes, now that I think about it I could try harder with pictures on the left OTL
Thanks for saying what you liked and how could I improve it

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shwippie In reply to Incit [2010-02-05 17:06:39 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome well the action in the other photos was so interesting I wanted to see what was going on in the left one too X3 but it's not really necessary to the composition or anything to expand it ^^

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Incit In reply to shwippie [2010-02-05 21:35:15 +0000 UTC]

I see :3...I'm happy to hear that

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