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... so we won't forget how serious we are
RiiiightDamn, that was a lot of work xD I kept finding mistakes all the time xD Bad sketch is bad... God,please, don't let there be some disasterous flaw I could fix but didn't... xD
(which doesn't mean I wouldn't like any critique about it! I love getting tips! I crave critique! Critiiique meeee
Ahem..sorry)These are my OC's -Ezra and Irina. Which may or may not be only temporary names. But I think not. Like, in 90% I'm sure the names will stay :]
Ezra's the boy, and his name means "help". I choose it because even though he's quite excentric and acts silly most of time he's reliable and smart. He also have a strong sense of self-worh.
Irina's the girl (obviously
) and her name means "peace". She's just like her name-calm and quiet, but not shy. She's more of an introvert and has little friends. She's ok with it though.Funny thing is they're like the newest and most undeveloped characters of mine, yet they're my first OC's I decide to put on DA
But the idea of the picture ducktaped to me or something, and I really wanted to draw it 
It was based on the true story, which is portrayed in the middle 'photo' ^^ Although people from the real-life situation don't really resemble Ezra or Irina. Ok, they're both very skinny too, but that's it :3Because c'mon, a guy painting his friend nails - it's cute xD
Critique is very welcomed
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Dzięki wielkie .3.
Tak w sumie, to nie do końca wiem co to jest xD Ogólny pomysł to "coś słodkiego z nadzieniem" xDD
Umiesz określic czemu akurat to 'zdjecie' ci się podoba? :3
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lubie cosie slosdkie z nadzieniem XD
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Ejj dzięks xD
ale jak jest coś niehalo to wal :3 Ja będe wdzięczna za wypatrywanie błędów, bo już mnie kilka razy ludzie zaskoczyli tym co znaleźli xD
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funny coincidence, i have a friend named Ezra as well and his whole face just says 'help' if not 'lack of will to live'
and my friend has a friend named Irina although she isn't an introvert at all as far as i'm concerned
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Wow, I'm relieved, I thought that I've chosen names too unfamiliar for each other but no~~ ^^
I had to check from where you are I got so curious hahaha
That makes me think about people who has the same name as OC's... What they must they reaction be when they see that creators do something weird with those OC's xD
Anyway that's a cool coincidence :3
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lol you've gone that far?
hey, now that you mention it, i have never really thought about it. well, they'll prolly just shudder if it's so different from them or smile if it's similar to them on some level
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Yup, you're propably right :]
Or are glad when the character does something cool xD At least some of them! : D
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lol totally. well, i never experienced that bcoz my name is so unique i think anyone from any parts of the world would think it weird
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Ahahah, that is sooo cute that he'd paint her nails. ;u; ♥ Ahh, I love these OC's already! <33 I've always loved photo taped on something compositions! >U<
The eyes are gorgeous too. So many details. *u* Oh Mara, I have so much to learn from you. ; 3;
That bottom left picture totally made me smile. C'x
Tell me about the bottom right picture pretty please? ;//u//; ♥
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I knoooow right? ^///^ He didn't do good though, but he tried ^^
Thanks
Now that I think about it maybe it's you who've send me some kind of subliminal message, because you have some pictures with things "taped" to the background... like [link] or [link] :] Oh you~~ <33
Well, I have to learn from you how to keep that awesome colorbalance and make some kind of interesting background among other things
bottom right pic: I was thinking about something like fooling around in halloween...It's not so popular in here so it ussually brings attention if somebody's doing something to celebrate it Me and my classmates for example came to school dressed up tee-hee and I though what the hell, artificial blood, yay! I'm sure someone would do their photo while they're finishing their make-up with it : D!
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♥♥ Oh ahahah~ Yes I love tape! ;u; <333
Oh gosh, I always fail so bad with color...
I don't know what you're talking about... xDD;;;
Oh I see! :'DDDD That's really cool!
What did you dress up as?!? ♥♥
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Nu-uh, you don't, and a lot of people are telling this hunny!
I was a goth girl hahaha! I'm not slim enough to pass off as a g-loli or victorian doll, but yeah...
But you see...My school is full of people dressing in orginal or dark way so a lot of them though that I just changed my style :< xDD Halloween fail OTL ;;;
I even had a stitches paited on my neck D: How errm...open minded? they were xDD
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Eheh! :'DD Thank youuu~
Ahahah, no worries. I'm not skinny enough either. x)
Awahhh! DD; Sorry to hear about that! x'DD;;
R-really?! Stitches?! That's so awesome! C':
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I love it!
you asked for a critique, but the only thing I can see tht's off is her nose in the nail-painting picture (which is adorable, by the way). but its very hard to draw noses from that angle, so its not reall a big deal.
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Thank you
Umm yeah, I've been trying mixing styles in here, I guess I should practise it more
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Oh, it happens to all of us. I hope I haven't upset you.
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i think this is very cute. ; )
In my oopinion, the best picture is the one where she has the cookie in her mouth because it seems really cute and i believe its the most well done.
i cant really critique, because i dont know exactly what turns me off, but the middle picture (Yes, the idea's super cute) just looks like you didnt really take your time with it.
Sorry.
But i looooove this picture. ; )
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Thank you~~
Yea, I get what you mean...that propably because I left the background too simple...I wanted to keep all the backgrounds in similar manner, but...It seems I shouldn't ...maybe it's it
Thank you for liking it and for your helpfulcomment
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Aw, this is some lovely artwork! 
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I like it too, but I haven't see much of drawings showing such thing It would be easier if I had a reference lol
Thank you for pointing out what you liked about it :3 It always help a lot~~!
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I took long breaks haha *stitches her hand back*
Thank you for liking it and writing such a long comment
If you don't mind telling me what according to you could be done better or if the image lacks something I'd be really happy :]
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Me neither, which is why it makes me so happy to see one
You're welcome!
Hm, I'm not much of a critic since I'm not perfect myself and because sometimes there's no need to give one, but since you asked so nicely
In the middle picture, the angle/curve of her nose looks a little bit off and in the bottom right, Ezra's finger looks a bit weird (but perhaps maybe it's because his finger is pressing against the camera?)
Hm, don't know if that helps you
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Thanks for being kind xD Your critique is very valuable because it's your opinion 
Thanks for giving me both ^^ I'll take them into account next time
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awwhh...this is nice. I luv the concept...it's touching *sniffs*
meh...i luvvem eyes (oh teh eyes O_O)
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I tried new things with eyes so I wasn't really sure how it will come off I'm relieved
Would you mind telling me if something could be done better in your opinion?
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hmm...I can't really point fingers @ it...but the middle picture does seem a bit off, don't know why though...could be the shading or the lineart?? Was wondering, btw, what's happening in the picture with all the blood (she seems as if about to die D
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Thanks
Umm I was thinking about something like goofing around with fake blood in Halloween C= And she's just more interested in putting the blood on than in someone photographing them teehee~~
Have you though of another story behind it? Don't worry. No one was hurt during photoshoot
Thankies
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Lol...I actually thought of halloween (it did seem veerrryyy halloween-ish), but her expression's a bit "dead" 
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O.O... That would be one hell of a cut ... like, done with a chinasaw or something, hahaha
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wow,this is very very nice
I like how you colored it~!
I like everything, especially the eyes...
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Thank you very much Carla 
//Don't hesistate to tell me if something could be done better in your opinion
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No i w końcu coś dodałaś, ach te zakrwawione mordeczki na dole, jakie one słodkie ^^
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Niom, w końcu =,='
O jej, widzę że trafiłam w gusta ^^- też mi się podobają xD Chyba moja ulubiona nibyfotka C=
Nie mów nikomu
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...To sztuczna krew.
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Tylko wiesz, jakby nie patrzeć, oni też na mnie podejrzanie patrzą.
*chowa się za krzesło*
Boję się, meow... ^^'
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A masz za jokera i Chesire catusa >: D !
...nieeee nie pozwoliłabym im kotek, nevaah!
*głaszcze*
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Mruuuu ^^, ale wiesz Joker wydaje się bardzo zainteresowany i zapytał mnie, czy byś mu nie mogła randki ustawić xD Wiesz chłop nieśmiały jest i ma kompleksy ;3
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Woho, That's super nice! 8D I love the type of colors you used. Gives a nice feeling! :3 ♥ It's like dreamish or something XD I also like that it's many images in one image! * u * ooh, Do you take requests btw? I would make me super happy if you made a image of my oc! * u * ♥ Since I just LOVE your drawings!
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Thank you very much !
Well, I'm honored you asked But I'd rather talk about details in notes, if you don't mind
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You're welcome. ♥ That is perfectly fine. Should I pm or you? ♥
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