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letsmakebiscuits [2007-08-29 13:48:10 +0000 UTC]

oooo, interesting^^ Wonder what's goin on here?? Lookin forward to another page^^

And of course, totally AWESOME drawing skills here, looks very good!

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wallflower-chan [2007-08-26 17:10:51 +0000 UTC]

this is great! i love how this came out, in fact, i hope when i do an omgsrsly!comic, it comes out something like this. i cannot offer much critique, but i'll try.

the only thing that irks me is the expression. i guess i'm having a hard time telling if those two guys are truly mad and pained or just kind of shrugging off what the girl told them. that's all.

otherwise, i can't wait til the next page ;D

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Mech-Maker [2007-08-26 01:59:45 +0000 UTC]

Very nice comic. so detailed and well shaded. I love that manshion I'll definetly be reading it.

Hmm..As for critique...I'm not very good at it, but I'll try since you asked....Well..I guess the car's exterior and interior are kinda rough. Oh..The guy's hand on the sterring wheel in the top right panel looks kinda small. Nothing all that big needs work, just those little tiny things that can easily be fixed. I understand that this style is still developing, and it's looking great so far.

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Sanoon [2007-08-25 11:00:26 +0000 UTC]

Oh, awesome.

I'm loving this new style.

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Zim-Shady [2007-08-25 02:39:23 +0000 UTC]

Whoa! I like this! It really grabs the reader and makes them want to read more, which is a rule of thumb in story-telling! First panel OMFG awesome car! I've always loved Volkswagen beetles, and it just looks SO REAL! This is looking really awesome so far! I can't wait to see what the title stands for and what's going to happen next ^_^

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La-Abeja [2007-08-25 01:57:09 +0000 UTC]

Mmmm I've been looking forward to this x3 It immediately spikes interest, and I like the detail, the car's is nice, but the building is excellent =3

as said, the faces could use some softening, but I like the character designs x3 The ball-pen is nice too, as you can get nice shading in as well, definitely looking forward to more!

Hm, I'm curious though, how'd she die? x3 *waits*

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Jet22 [2007-08-25 00:18:46 +0000 UTC]

wow the drawings look really good!
the people look good and i love the car

and the plot looks like its going to be interesting too

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Half-dude [2007-08-24 23:43:06 +0000 UTC]

Great detail! This story is starting to remind me of the arcade game "The house of the Dead"

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SakuraBlossom13 [2007-08-24 22:20:49 +0000 UTC]

wow. you're realllyyyyy good!!! this comic is gonna be awesoooome

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Invader-Sideos [2007-08-24 22:19:41 +0000 UTC]

You're an AWESOME ARTIST.
I love the sketch style and the level of detail on that house. I think the faces look a little square though, maybe soften the edges a little?

Anyways, it's a great start!

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