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Invader-nomi — Life Song
Published: 2011-05-31 23:19:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 91; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description Paint your heart when no one's watching,
Write your dreams on a silver string
Toast to life with cups of stardust,
Hope it spills
Into the sea.
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Comments: 7

anapests-and-ink [2011-07-28 12:40:19 +0000 UTC]

So melancholy...Don't really know why, but it makes me think of "This Be the Verse", by Larkin. Except it's pretty before it gets cynical.

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Invader-nomi In reply to anapests-and-ink [2011-07-30 16:43:59 +0000 UTC]

thanks~ it wasn't really supposed to be cynical... but I guess different people interpret different things differently. And why does it remind you of that poem?? i mean, just wondering... because I wrote this as something lighthearted and innocent :s

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Jellybeanperson [2011-06-01 21:24:34 +0000 UTC]

That's such a nice poem!

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Invader-nomi In reply to Jellybeanperson [2011-06-02 02:35:42 +0000 UTC]

thanks~

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Jellybeanperson In reply to Invader-nomi [2011-06-02 21:52:53 +0000 UTC]

welcome~

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MagpieCatso [2011-06-01 12:29:11 +0000 UTC]

Ah! It's this poem! I love it so so so much.

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Invader-nomi In reply to MagpieCatso [2011-06-02 02:35:29 +0000 UTC]

:3

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